AsYa: Overcome fire

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey! I thought i should do of zoya overcoming the fear of fire so here it is:

Asad: Zoya aaj aap mere liye kuch khane mein banaiye.. Plz ab aap meri mangetar hain toh itna toh pata chale ki aap khana kaisa banati hain. 😉

Zoya: Mr.Khan aap mujhe chalenge kar rhe hain??? Mujhe?? Zoya the fix-it-all ko??

Asad: haan, of course, aap Zoya fix it all hain, Zoya- cook - it - all nhi!

Zoya: chaliye theek hai.. Challenge accepted! Lekin haan mein tannu ki help lungi.

Asad: theek hai aap kehrhi hain toh (asad gets very close to Zoya almost kissing her on the lips) yeh bhi Qubool hai) ASYA eyelock 👏

Zoya: Mujhe bhi...

Just then Dilshaad enters the room.. Knocks first

Dilshaad: Oops!

Asad and Zoya together : woh ammi...

Dilshaad: its ok its ok..(with a naughty face)

Zoya: dekhiye ammi yeh Mr.six pack abs mujhe khana banane ka challenge dey rhe hain!

Dilshaad: Accha theek ha dont drag me into this main tum dono sey baad mein baat karoongi abhi key liye carry on

Asad: jaiye aur khana banaiye madam...😆

Zoya goes to the kitchen and make some roast chicken for him...after cooking zoya cleans the kitchen and turns all the gas knobs off. But jungli billi turns them on after zya leaves bcoz she knows dilshaad will come to prepare tea for everyone. Just then Asad gets an official call and laves for an urgent meeting.

Dilshaad: Sab log aaajayein main chai banane jaa rhi hoon.

As soon as Dilshaad lights the lighter a loud burst is hard by everyone and Zoya goes running into the living room and sees dilshaad in the middle of a fire. tannu runs out pretending to yell for help but goes out and laughs. Zoya is horrified from looking at fire and starts getting those bad dreams but Zoya snaps out of it and jumps into the fire to save dilshaad. Asad comes running inside the mhousing seeing zoya jumping into the fire and yells "ZOYA!!!!!" . Right after abt a minute or two of astonishment zoya come out of the fire with her phupi and all safe and sound but zoya a little shaken up from everything. Asad goes and hugs his ammi and zoya. Dilshaad says "tumne dikha diya zoya ki tum ek bahu se zyada meri beti ho aur meri parwah karti ho". Asad thanks zoya and tells her that she is free from her phobia now!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it's very nice
yepiee i m the first 1 to comment
i can't send u buddy request bcz of somem email confirmation problem but please u add me in ur buddy list plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I have sent you a buddy request :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is very interesting, I loved it yaar:D you write so beautiful <333 keep it up bb:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww this was sweet.. very nicely written. Some friendly advice.. it would be nice to see more in detail what Zoya would feel when debating going in the fire, and Asad thanking her. But eh story is really good :)

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