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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Srivi01

Will post the next chapter in 2-3 days.

Haven't started writing yet. Have been busy
Thank you for all your comments

thaaank god! Thank god ! Thaaank god u r bck! :) While waitn it seemed lik ages! Gosh finally yipppeee! Plz PM me as soon as u updt! :) im waitn! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
FIRST OF ALL I WOULD REALLY LIKE TO APOLOGIZE TO YOU ALL FOR SUCH A DELAY. I HAVE BEEN REALLY VERY BUSY LATELY. I HAD FINISHED WRITING THE CHAPTER BUT IT GOT DELETED SOMEHOW AND NOW I DON'T REMEMBER WHAT I HAD WRITTEN PREVIOUSLY.
I HOPE I HAVE DONE JUSTICE TO THE STORY AND YOU GUYS LIKE IT.
ENOUGH OF MY BLABBERS HERE U GO

PART 6:

Zoya went inside her room and started crying her heart out. So many revelations were taking a toll on her. Her whole trip to Bhopal had been a waste. The purpose of her searching for her father had been useless. On top of that she had to not only get her heart broken but had to hear low things about her from the only man she had and would ever love.

Zoya (ST): why god? What had I ever done to receive this kind of punishment? Don't I deserve some kind of happiness? Am I that bad to not receive any kind of love? I hate to live. I wish I was dead with my ammi like Mr.Khan said. Would have reduced so many problems and I wouldn't have been a burden to anyone.

Asad was listening to her self talk. He went behind Zoya knowing she would be hurt. He wanted to be there for her. But listening to her talk about dying he felt like killing himself

Asad (ST): allah what have I done to the poor soul? How can I hurt her so badly? I am also one of the reasons for Zoya to be hurting. How could I have been so heartless and spoken such things? I should have known that she can never do such thing.

Asad slowly goes inside her room

Asad: Zoya (Softly)

Zoya: please go away

Asad: I am really sorry

Zoya: can you please leave me alone?

Asad: am sorry I can't.

Zoya: what do you mean by you can't?

Asad: I have already done that mistake of leaving you alone I won't do it again

Zoya: well I don't need you here

Asad: yes you do.

Zoya: why did you hurt me like that Mr.Khan?

Asad: I am sorry Zoya. I was a fool. I dint know what I was doing. It was new to me. unlike you I was not brave enough to face my past

Zoya: it's not an excuse for your behavior

Asad: I know. I am sorry. I am ready to say it how many ever times

Zoya: well your sorry is not going to make the hurt go

Asad: I love you Zoya. I am sorry for my behavior. I was a heartless monster. Please forgive me

Zoya: you just pity me and being grateful. You don't love me.

Asad: no Zoya I do. I just dint want to become weak by admitting it. Now am not ashamed of it. And I know you love me too

Zoya: you are just confused Mr.Khan and I don't love you. It was just an infatuation

Asad: please Zoya. Don't kill me like this. I dint mean what I said that day. I was being a fool

Zoya: no you were right. And anyways it was never meant to be.

Asad: no we are meant to be and I will prove it

Zoya: good luck with it.

Asad left the room feeling dejected leaving a teary Zoya behind.

In the living room:

Dilshad had called Rashid to tell the recent happenings and asked them to shift here. In the meantime police had arrested Siddiqui and Razia.

Asad came down

Asad: ammi I have to tell you and Najma a few things.

Dilshad: what is it Asad?

Asad then explained all the happenings starting from the bhang incident to him accusing Zoya

Dilshad: yaah allah! So much has happened and you telling me now? And how could you have even thought that Zoya would be able to do such a cheap thing Asad?

Asad: I am really sorry ammi. I was not in my senses. I want her back. I don't know what to do.

Saying so he started crying

Dilshad: don't worry she will come around.

Asad: ammi can you and Najma be with Zoya now. She needs you guys with her. I don't want her to feel that she doesn't have anyone

Dilshad: of course. You don't even have to ask.

While Dilshad and Najma went to Zoya's room to be with her Rashid Khan entered the mansion with his family

Asad: please come in. I am really sorry for all the hurt I have caused you

Rashid: it's ok. You were also a victim like all of us.

Shireen: I am sorry too

Asad: please don't be.

Asad hugged Ayaan, Nikhat and Nurzat.

After sometime Dilshad and Najma came down with Zoya and everyone were chatting together.

Everyone thanked Zoya as she was the reason for their reunion.

Zoya: please don't thank me. I did what had to be done. Anyone in my place would have done the same.

It had been one week since that incident. The Khan Villa was surrounded with happiness except for 2 souls.

In this one week Asad had done everything possible to gain Zoya back but it was not working.

He gave her roses only to be thrown away

He got her pizza which was left untouched

He got her kachoris which were given to the family members

He gave her favorite cake which went to Najma

He gifted her a dress which was added to Nikhath's cupboard

He even tried reciting stupid Shayari which was returned by a blank look

He even wrote her a letter which was in pieces before even it was read by her.

He dint know what to do. All his efforts has gone in vain. No reaction from his lady love.

He was heartbroken. Meanwhile Zoya had forgiven him but she still couldn't fathom the fact that he accused her of something so cheap.

Plus she wanted him to do something big and wanted to know till what extent he could go for winning her back. And that's what he planned to do.


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Edited by Srivi01 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Updated after very long. But that was awesome part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is just beautiful. The AsYa parts. Love it!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yeah u made us wait longer but it was a gud one

Pl continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank,god u r back... N now pls update next part sooonn...
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg..what a wonderful update. i just cant believe everything turned out to be great excpet the love birds. i greatly think what zoya is doing justifies if she should trust her Mr Khan.

Love to see what Asad plans to do next to gain her trust back. Will she accept him?

waiting for your update. please post soon.

Thanks.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

update soon!!!

update soon!!!

update soon!!!

update soon!!!

update soon!!!

update soon!!!

update soon!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow just loved it
plzzz pm me for the next part

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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh noo y did u stop it hr? :'( nevr mind it ws a bang on updt! Im dieng to read wts gonna b asads plan to win hs lady love back! :) plz updt soon ths time n if possible plz PM me!

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