I~I Moonlight beauty.. ;) I~I

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hello all!!
ok..ok..this is my official debut!😎
I was planning to start something..but as i am lazy i didnt want to write an FF or SS...sooo i decided to start writing P O E M S ...!!
😲 😲 😲 ...i noe nothing new in that...but i will try my best to bring something new in this..😳 😳 as i am new to this poetry saga...i hope u all try nd co-operate...! ..😳
P.S: if u dont find it gud ...I accept only fresh veggies..not eggs or chappals..! so that later at least i can sell them..🤣
ok..less blabbering...nd here goes...

*draws the invisible curtain*

*worries whether they will take the P.S seriously or not* 😆

*wonders if she should shut up! ..before things go out of control..*😆 😆


this is a short poem based on arnavs adoration of khushis beauty...he compares her breath-taking beauty to the shining M O O N .


Clouds unmistify the silver sensation
Oh..Its one of the most beautiful creation
It appears when the eye lids weigh down
When sleep takes over frowns

Look at it shine in the vast space
Oh how it reminds me of her tender face

Around its twinklers it shimmers
In her sparkly eyes it glimmers
The whole world seeks its light
Her face is what sets mine bright

Someday I will fly up to it
To see her under the moonlit

It sparks the dark fantasy
But she glows up my destiny

The moon vanishes during the day
It's short as a soothing ballet

But in my heart she always stays
her beauty is special in many ways...


T H E E N D 😃

Do like nd comment 😃

regards,
Berry 😳

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MT_loverboy thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was awesome dear...
loved it
u r a poet ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MT_loverboy

it was awesome dear...

loved it
u r a poet ...

nah!
same as u me too new..! 😳

i hope it didnt sound kiddish..😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful Poem 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: BerryBlush07

nah!
same as u me too new..! 😳

i hope it didnt sound kiddish..😳

no it dint...it was seriously very good ..
n how u come to k9 that i m new in FFs u saw it ? dint u cmntd ? or liked ?😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWESOMe dear

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Posted: 12 years ago
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That's a beautiful one! I think you should keep writing ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thannxxx😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanxx alot shuchi! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MT_loverboy

no it dint...it was seriously very good ..

n how u come to k9 that i m new in FFs u saw it ? dint u cmntd ? or liked ?😃

thanxx ! 😃
u mentioned it in ur PM...nd yupp i did lyk it... but didnt comment as i dont read FFs actually but since u were new..i pressed the lyk button 😃

p.s : i wish u success in that field! 😃

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