FFy do fools fall in love teaser Pg 76

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey guys, I was writing a chapter on my FF Jai Jr when an idea popped in to my head I'm still working on but will post first chapter soon!!!!!!

DISCLAIMER i would like to make it clear that Jai and Bani in my FF bear no resemblance to the characters in Kasam se which is owned by Balaji.

part 1 page 3,part 2 page 5,part 3 page 8,part 4 page 10,part 5 page 15,part 6 page 20,part 7 page 28,part 8 page 34.part 9 page 37,part 10 page 40,part 11 page 43,part 12 page 49,part 13 page 54,part 14 page 58,part 15 page 60,part 16 page 62,part 17 page 65 teaser,part 17 page 66,part 18 page 67,part 19 page 69,chapter 20 teaser page 70,chapter 20 page 70,chapter 21 page 72, chpter 22 teaser page 73, chapter 22 Pg 74, chapter 23 teaser Pg 76

Character synopsis

Jai: Up and coming business man, from a rich family, arrogant and rude, but loving towards the people he trust's.

Bani: part time model and part time receptionist, loves her sister and best friend but a little weak in matters of the heart.

Pia: Jai's first love and now married to Jai's older and richer ex best friend and mentor.

Mohan: Jai's ex best friend and mentor helped Jai in setting up his business but fell in love with his girl friend, now married to Pia and regretting his mistake.

Rano: Bani's little sister by two years, fiercely protective of her sister, she just want her sister to be happy.

Roshini: Bani and Rano's best friend, she has heart of gold and Love's the two sisters like her own.

Pushkar: Bani's fiance and small time business man always looking for a quick buck and ruthless in his ambition to make it to the top one day.

Barnali: Jai's step mom, she is loving and caring towards her step son but he never forgave her for marrying his dad after his mum died.

Uday: Jai's Dad, fell in love with the young nurse who cared for his late wife while dieing of cancer, wishes to repair the bridges burnt with his son.

Dr Tarun: Pia's brother, knows that's his sister is scheming but still very protective towards her, hates Jai with a passion and helped his sister marry Mohan to get back at Jai.

Dr Laxmi: Dr Tarun's trusted college and friend, she Love's him but has never had the courage to tell him.

Marni: Barnelli's scheming older sister, jealous that her younger and prettier sister married a rich man.

Nishket: Jai's younger step brother, feels neglected by Jai but always willing to try and please him some how.

Tony: Butler in Walia mansion knows everything about everyone a bit of a gossip.

Right that's my character sketch, hope you like, feel free to post your comments, I look forward to reading them soon, and please bear with me I will post first chapter soon.

Sharan XXX

PS I haven't thought of a name yet any suggestions.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey great start. I love people who make Roshni (Rakshanda) good in their ff's. Continue soon!

Yuks
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sounds very interesting Shaz!! So Bani's a model...that's different! Can't wait for you to start 😛


I love Barnali's sister's name by the way...very original 😉 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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It's great to see that you and the Holy *BELAN* are putting a ff together! 👏 😃

The 'Marnali' name made me laugh! 😆

I couldn't see the Master of the GHANTEES anywhere... but hey, seeing as you're writing it, it's all good! 😃

God bless.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😆 "Marnali" 😆 😆 Has me laughing so hard. My god, you really came up with a very original name 😆

Cant wait for the first chapter.

By the way is Marnali, even a name????? or is it creative license that you are using??? 😆

Love
Krishna
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey, good start, continue!! Marnali, he he!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey chick!!

u never told me ur startin a new FF!! i was lukin for ur other one aswell and i saw this...

YAY another Fabulous FF from u.. man i cant wait!!!!

Love the fact that u have my all time fav character TONY!!!!! 😆 😆 like in the real serial here too he knws the gossip.. 😆

Marnali.. luks like u cought the Ekta flu.. 😆

WOW im excited now.. i want u to start postin ASAP! lol..

Henna x
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Henna 786

Hey chick!!

u never told me ur startin a new FF!! i was lukin for ur other one aswell and i saw this...

YAY another Fabulous FF from u.. man i cant wait!!!!

Love the fact that u have my all time fav character TONY!!!!! 😆 😆 like in the real serial here too he knws the gossip.. 😆

Marnali.. luks like u cought the Ekta flu.. 😆

WOW im excited now.. i want u to start postin ASAP! lol..

Henna x

Hey sweetie, you like my new FF, thanks😳, what can i say inspration struck me, did you get my text, i hope so i wrote a really cute part to my other FF Jai Jr, i will post some time today, it's gonna be difficult cause i have guest coming home today, but for you sweetie i will try.

Chick XXX

PS Henna, i really think you should look out for my next part, it features a certain character called *cough* 😳Henna!!!!!!😆 😆😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: queenyuks

Hey great start. I love people who make Roshni (Rakshanda) good in their ff's. Continue soon!

Yuks

I like her too in this FF she is a very nice person.

thanks for the encouragement😳

sharanXXX

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: inavars

Sounds very interesting Shaz!! So Bani's a model...that's different! Can't wait for you to start 😛


I love Barnali's sister's name by the way...very original 😉 😆

😆😆😆 Thanks invars, i was trying to find a original name and i tought what the HELL,lets be like Ekta and choose a really cheesy name😆!!!

sharan XXX

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