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Posted: 12 years ago
YAY! :D edit
I AM FIRST? 😲 I think I might just faint
Ok just got over the shock of being the first one 😆
Coming to the update, it was absolutly amazing :) I love the way you write. And the way you write comedy is just fantastic.
The conversation about racism just took the cake for me 😆
So Arnav ji is not liking Khushi's cold shoulder treatment. YAY :) we have some hope lol hope he confronts her about it and then we get some Rabba Ve's, ya? Apko Farak Kyun Padta Hai? 😳
Cant wait for the next update :)
Edited by saavan_lover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
haila me the late latif is on 2nd spot?? 😲
tym for some khushi style dancing with humare arnavji..😳

coming to the update
khushi covered for ASR?? wah wah.. someone is mending her ways..😉
hehe Nk never fails to prove a point tht exactly why he is the best friend of sanka devi.
Rishte mein to hum bhi tumhaare senior lagte hai😆
hehe so u don't like being ignored, do u mr raizada?😉
hehe so after khushi it was arnav who started the self muttering and thn started none other thn the grt NK resulting in taking a decision to act as a cupid between khushi and akash.. hehe can't wait to see the goof ups he is abt to make..😆
so finally payaliya made some well appearance in the stry.. welcome bitiya..😃 and abt the uneasy feeling she was having .. shud i follow the characters of ur stry and like thm start assuming a non-existent crush of payalia on NK 😉 or is thr actually nything between thm.. me confusewa hello hi bye bye..
the bonus note passing was fun.. akash is hilarious..Shubh shubh bolo mere bhai. You have a kaali zubaan.😆😆

Edited by simi58 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nahiii


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OMG, thank you, yaara!
I'm so glad you liked the interlude! (You know how nervous I was before posting it, right?)

Coming to the update, I love that title!

But the first part makes me think...just why is Khushi hiding the severity of her phobia from her friends?
Pride? Ego?

That conversation about 'racism' has to be one of the best you've written yet. Take a bow, frnz.

The second part makes me rub my hands in glee.
So Arnav is not loving the chilling impact of the cold shoulder, is he?

This was one scene that should have been picturised, that's all I could think of!

Payalia's story and the introduction of the band makes me wonder if they will now play a major role in this story.
Also, is she harboring the tiniest beginnings of a crush on NK? Coz that would make all this super-funny!😆

Of course, my absolute favorite part is at the end, with the bonus 'notes'.
Once again, you are in your element here, and I loved it!

I don't know if I've said this before, but I really like your chapter groupings and the pace of this story.
I am really enjoying this ride!



Edited by EXPELLIARMUS - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow i just started reading this story... n im having an amazing time reading it :D
so khushi knew that he has locked her but still she thanked him ...hmmm
its wednesday... when is the next update? :)

oops sorry the update is already up... lovely :D
missed arshi banter though... oh n loved the notes btw akash n arnav :D
oh does payal like nk???
Edited by luvbug - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for this extremely late comment...
I am just loving this story so much...
U are a wonderful writer Semanti...
and I am big fan of all your stories...
keep up the good work going dear...
Edited by mimosa658 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
very good update...so arnav do not like khushi being quite
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...so arnav is missing the arguments between him and khushi...things r changing :)..
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved payal-nk convo... khushi has started avoiding arnav and he doesnt like it... he refuses to apologize as usual😉 loved d update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice chapter with simple bits ans pieces of their lives. Semanti.. i love how you use the hollywood movie's dialogues 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res

First things first: NEVER compare Nicholson and Bachchan. NEVER. It is a shame greater than comparing Chagall and Michelangelo. And while we are at it - NEVER compare Freeman and Bachchan either. ;)

I howled with laughter at the following:
1. YOU CAN'T HANDLE THE TRUTH! - Yeah baby - courtroom drama it is!
2. You are a racist: Using chikoos and bananas (which are incidentally both fairly terrible fruits if you ask me) to prove an argument that Khushi is racist - now that is genius!
3. The cousins' notes; Perfect. I could almost sense that the f**k you note was coming up :)

Oh wait, that basically means I was pretty much howling all through the chapter

And yes, we have moved into the next stage eh? If Kay is trying reverse psychology here, I would thump her on her back for being the best and I would say it really is working. She let go of an opportunity to critique Russell - yep - its either a game being played very well - which I wouldn't put past either or the change that happened at the end of the last chapter - which has me all intrigued to see if an unlikely friendship is up next.

Payalia is quite the naive little one, isn't she?
Edited by meera30 - 12 years ago

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