I have a few questions for you on why you have changed these characters so drastically and why leave so many loose ends!!
1. So Guman throws her final weapon and Saras is fatally wounded ... LN can be mad, but he is supposed to be a father, would he not have called Sunny to check on Saras status etc?
2. Marriage is supposed to be a day later, so LN seems to have no thoughts about what to tell his best friend of why they wont be coming? way too disconnected... tickets must have been booked for their family and friends too - to go from Dubai to RAtnagiri ... so they dont inform anyone about the cancellation? A day before the wedding, the mansion at Dubai had no readiness... no courtesy to call the friend.
3. Danny goes to London, but no one here has been told that he left- he seemed to be a sweet guy but he leaves VC's haveli without telling anyone? Did he not see the drama unfold? If he did... what did he do? or did it not matter to him?
4. Kumud is educated but not enough to know that deeply held beliefs do not disappear in a month but take months of therapy and one incident is enough to push that person back into the abyss. She having known, did not think of atleast asking him for all details?
5.Could Sunny supposedly good friend of Kumud and a great friend of Saras..think he should call Kumud , explain what happened and that he was making the effort for Saras to see the light of day and get back on the path?
6. A true lover hearing the pain in Saras's voice would have rushed to Dubai to check on him not caring abt any traditions!!
7. Whole house - no one had the brainwave to ask LN what had happened? no one thought of calling Sunny? and how come Guman the woman who loved to lord it over Dugba never called her claiming victory? wasnt that out of character for her? if she called then the possibilities of this situation could have been saved!!!!
SLB - u started with a banfg, but you are leaving tooo many loose ends, the story is beginning to feel rushed? do u have a deadline?
EDIT - I tweeted this link to the cowriter of this serial and this is the response.
@UtkarshNaithani -india-forums.com/forum_posts.as… - read this,the one hindi serial i used to like,wonder if v will like it anymore!! @rajansinghstar - 10 Jul |
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