FF:Bani’s Christmas Gift- Updated pg 4 - Page 10

wat a ff...truly loved it! esp the ending
a job well done!

Sobia

Chelijiiiiiiiii!!!! What were you thinking?? WHY didnt you enter this into the competition?? 😕

It was a lovely story, very christmassy with a nice, sweet , happy ending that left me with a warm tingling!! 😳

Ok, so it wasn't the usual Jai and Bani story, but I still really really liked it Sabs!! 😃

You're such an... AUTHOR!!! It's like you've researched everything, every detail is perfect, and there are no loopholes anywhere in your story!! 👏

I think this Bani was a very human, very identifiable young girl who was a great central character for your story! Her fears and insecurities about the child, her friendships, regrets, and finally her dream to be reunited with an ex she knows she shouldn't have let go of... emotions one can completely understand and ones you have portrayed with usual flawlessness!!

Loved this story Sabs, keep 'em coming, you're one of the best writers we have on the forum!! 🤗

Sabs that was wonderful!!! 👏 A very nice FF! So glad that bani is happy now with her lover, Rajeev! 😉 😳 (even though it wasn't jai 😆 , but who needs the jerk anyways?) Really enjoyed reading this FF! I've grown rather fond of Pastor Don, very nice man! 😃

Goddess

Sabs,
I am lost for words.............What a beautiful story!!!!!!!And so well executed. 👏
Every part was so so very beautiful. If your other stories reflected your romantic sides, this one shows your faith in GOD. 👏 👏 👏 And it is commendable. I am so impressed by this one.
So many emotions are clogging in me, (which I know you would understand) after reading this.
I think everyone needs and has a "pastor" don and "angel in disguise". We just need faith to look carefully around.
I loved it.