ArYa OS: Moments in Time - COMPLETE - Page 11

Originally posted by: Leevi05

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Kat first if all sorry for being lil late i know my comments are awaited but this stupid off doesn't give me breather n enough quality time i spend with your writings

SO beginning with title hmm moments in time sound interesting n deep

Part1

A time starts with our very own aarti a cute mother anxiety of ansh first day of big kids school

Ph the very same words n also somewhere same feeling where shared by 2 stangesrs or i shud day 2 single parent

N ansh oh is is a rockstar n smart chap so yash angels r twins here hmm n her big eyes is just coming frin none other than her daddy

N ash waiting next moring for the two n daddy becoming more possessive

N ailla aarti knows yash tht means they are not strangers

Hmm yash n aarti hair what to do ishita the evilnedd made aarya closer again n yash dance iwth lady n wow a spl sweet friendship continued as only 3 years back they are not in touch so are they aware of their marriage n all ya naa not them??

Hmm n beautiful bonding stated blossom again n ttile justified KAT

Arti started to look forward to those brief moments in time...moments that were reminders of a happier time, moments of friendship, moments when she could breathe and just be.

Yeah picninc which made finally yash n aarti talk more than s small moment of time

Part 2

Hmm so after sharing tiny past all the harsh n bitter memories surrounded aarya n again as fresh air their conversation let them calm n again in making peace with present

So aarti we understand in meeting dint reply but y yash convert me into us???? Is he thot she is finding difficult to say yes for her to day for him>??

KAT i am confused please explain

So maya bua n MBKK is also here

N they become strength in one of their rough n toughest time many be to let go the past n welcome present n buaji was

N them yash stroy you made it clear but aarti past made me jump directly to part3 so ansh adopted n aarti divorce being reason of her losing a baby n may not able to conceive

N later they married n become one as whole family a aarya family of five with motherly guidance of buaji

I am spell bound a kuso to wtite write a life in moments of time ( in os)

It had been a dance of seduction, of passion, of friendship, trust and everlasting love - a dance begun nearly 10 years ago...a dance that culminated that night.

Well meri bas ki naahi hai kuch likhen kit hot to copy my favourite n you know what i start selecting i have almost covered half of post with your dialogues only so spared it

Phir bhi vhota so paste kar hi diya as you know aadat se majboor wat to do

, "I can't risk you. You are too precious to me. I can't lose you Arti, not now, not ever... I love you too much for that" the last was a whisper she had to strain to hear.

A strange calm surrounded her and she rubbed her tear-stained face on his chest. "You know... this is the first time you ever said that to me."

He stilled. Almost in a whisper he asked, "Said what?"

"I love you" Arti replied.

He smiled at that - "The first time you ever said it to me too Sakhi!"

Just have read all the parts altogether and I must say that it was mind blowing...outstanding...fantastic dear... 👏👏👏👏👏.You are an awesome writer.👏👏👏👏.While reading your updates I was visualizing all the scenes ...feeling all the emotions which u described...👏👏👏👏.If I say that I loved it then it will be wrong dear...It's much more than love...❤️..You just touched my heart dear...🤗
If u write anything in future then plz PM me dear.It will be my pleasure to read your awesome work again.😊