Virika OS: Hold You for Eternity

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Back with the shortest OS possible' Didn't feel like writing at all, then someone forced me to write while I'm on vacation in San Francisco. Enjoy and you'll understand later why I wrote this. Enjoy!

Walking around New York City with friends. What more could one ask? It was the best city one could be at, and with the best people one could ask. But of course he always had to ruin the moment.

v - "Hey guys, me and Jeevika have to go somewhere. You guys carry on we will see you in a bit"

Everyone stared at him, but it was nothing compared to Jeevika's glare. She wanted to go to the club finally with her friends and now here he was ruining everything. Viren took her arm, and left with this guilty slash nervous smile on his face. They quickly got into a cab, and he knew her time bomb was ticking. Any second she would start raging on him.

v - "Just shut up for a little bit and don't speak a word"
j - " 🤬 " she said mentally to herself

Viren was just smiling at her nervously since she hated surprises and hated not knowing what was going on' and more over she wanted to go party and have fun with the whole gang not just her dumb boyfriend. As the driver drove them away, both of them just sat next to each other silent. While one knew nothing going on, the other knew their whole world was about to change and that too FINALLY! The taxi driver stopped a little before Brookyln Bridge and the two stepped out. It was quite dark, but enough light for the two to see each other. They walked hand in hand towards the center of the bridge. Viren got down on one knee and spoke the words that Jeevika would remember for the rest of her life.

"I know you since forever and want to keep you with me forever and after forever. I want to pass through every emotion with you be it happiness, sadness every emotion possible. I want to keep a hold of you for eternity. I want my buns in your oven. Tell me Jeevika will you marry me?"

It made sense to her now and after everything they had been through together it did seem like the perfect start to a new and happy life. She got down and kissed him not caring who was around nor who was watching them. She just accepted the love of her life!


Short right? Yeah well this was a real life proposal. If any of you know my crazy mother #3 aka Kanwal_Chohan this was her marriage proposal and she didn't let me breathe for the past few days wanting me to write her a story on this. And oh yeah before I forget she's pregnant 😆 Congrats mother on the news of having your first real biological child even though Aashima and I will always be your first kids❤️ We love you and can't wait till my little R is born ❤️
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Kanwal_chohan thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lmao just realised I didn't Unres this Loool
Anyway you fat liar you literally begged me to tell you my life story
So you could write this and when I did you wouldn't write
But it was amazing nerdy made me relive them moments thank you
Edited by Kanwal_chohan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww that's so sweet and romantic
Wish her a life full of happiness

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its an outstanding and most romantic short update awww the way he proposed really its such a romantic my boom is very lucky to have a partner like him and my jiju too greatly written it sissy Congrats my boom finally u r going to be mother love u loads just always stay happy eagrly waiting for my little niece or nephew
Love u sissy
Edited by Sabapari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow
i loved it
at first i was actually thinking how was i gunna understand why u wrote this but now... i do

congrats kanwal ure goin to be a mother:)))
very good writing as always karina
but kanwal im sooo happie for u :))
congrats
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res

Unres!
Wow happy I commented on first page
It's awesome
The real life proposal was too good
And kanwal congratulations dear
Take care of yourself!
Karinaji you are simply awesome baby
Edited by MADHU.BARUN - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautifully written...
Wow cant believe this is a real life proposal😊
Thanks for the PM..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow a really nice one peeni.. me likey like this short story 😃
oye hoyee kanwaljiii what a cute proposal u had 😆
COngratulations on the big news...am very happy for ya.
Do let me know if its a girl or a boy 😆 i cant wait to know heheh
and peeni like always u write so well..loved it ❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome

Very Romantic ❤️

Short and Sweet...

And Congrats Kanwal...
Edited by AmylovesArshi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome...
Loved the way he propose her...
Continue soon...

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