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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi, Hello, Aslam-ul-Alikum

Hope every one doing fine

Many of you don't know me. Like you all i am also ArShi fan Big wali 😃. I just tried to write on arnav Khushi. Honestly what actually I write I don't know.
Read it and give your honest response to it. Hope you guys enjoy it.
It's my first attempt. Give your honest views on it.
Ignore grammar mistakes

Here's my first writing piece ever 😆

ARSHI OS- Red little nose.

I hate him, I hate him from day one When I opened my little hazel eyes and saw an evil devil with ridiculous brownish eyes and his unrealistically idiot toothy grin, staring at me, besides most laughable thing was that, evil devil didn't have his front teeth, he looked like a monkey with his idiot toothy grin.

Hayye Devi Mayyian Please not again NO please! Again the evil devil started playing with my little nose, why that Idiot plays with it. My little nose, I love my nose and he thinks its some toy for his adventurous play. I was just 5 months and 10 days old; he thinks I am some toy with whom he can play. Ugh I hate him. What if he was taller and stronger than me but not like my daddy, he's taller and stronger than him

God please vanish him from there Before he torture my little nose more. I love my nose, please save it from his Evil worth.

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I love her, I just want her with me every time. Her small face, with small pinky lips, little hazel eyes, and little red nose which becomes more red when pari start crying, yes pari Ooopss My Pari, worlds most beautiful Pari. She's more beautiful than Barbie doll which my Di had bought on her last birthday. I just love her. Why everyone called her khushi, when she's my Pari. I was 5 years old, I know more than them what to called and what not and they said I m chote.

What The!

She again starts crying whenever I try to make her smile and tried playing with her.

Why she always cried whenever I touch her little red nose.


You don't know na how much I hate you, She said in an abusive tone which she used whenever he forget that day, sit in a poolside deck chair and gave him his cup of dark coffee. He turns to see her, who is looking innocently gorgeous in her red PJ's, and how much he hates red on her. Why she is doing this again, is she unaware about red alert effects on him.

Both seated with each other on their most favorite place, where they enjoy their silence, their words, their comfort and most importantly love for each other.

He neared her and makes her sit on his lap while looking at her with all love he have for her. How can he forget that day, not until his last breath, Today he met her first time when she was 5 months 10 days and he was 5 years at least 30 years ago.

Laal hogyi, He said looking into her eyes.

Kya?, she knows what his words mean To be, but like she always wants to know.

Tumhari naak, he said while give peck on her pink lips which always ready to torture him.

She looks at him, giggling at him, She knew he never ever forget that.

Happy first meeting Day Jaan, you knew I never ever forget day when I met my little pari who have little hazel eyes, small pink lips, more important her little red nose which always became more red whenever she started crying.

Happy first meeting day you too, she said while hugs him tight.

Ab tumhari naak aur laal ho jati, Whenever you get angry at me, and it's becoming more and more red when I make love to you every time, what's a reason Jaan, he added while hugging her back.

She now looks at him, blushing and said you always doing this, I hate you for this devil.

Aur Laal hogyi phir se, he said looking at her now, straight in her eyes.

Kya? She questioned, intentionally

Tumhari naak phir se, he said and smile which he had for her only

And I love you, he said

Hamesha, she replied

Always, he answered

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Thanks for reading it guys

Please give your honest opinion on it


AND Ramzan Kareem to all

iqra

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Honestly it's a cute n sweet OS. Worth reading it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks for liking it dear.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg it was simply amazing 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
loved it too too much 🤗 🤗
perfect tittle beautifully written ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
keep writing 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: HK90

Omg it was simply amazing 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

loved it too too much 🤗 🤗
perfect tittle beautifully written ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
keep writing 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

thanks for liking it dear
Posted: 12 years ago
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Iqra!! 😃
Awww sho shweet one!! <3
Loved it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Arnav-

Iqra!! 😃
Awww sho shweet one!! <3
Loved it!

niruu...thanks for liking it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awwwh, that was the sweetest thing ever dear Iqra! And even more sweeter because it was the first instance I learned your name!
You could not have shared a more wonderful and dear piece of work as being your first than the one you just gave here! It was absolutely perfect!
I loved how everything in the OS gave the idea that Arnav and Khushi's love was always love at first sight and their conversation at the end just proves it even more.
It was very beautifully written and I adored how you made reference to Khushi's ever laal nose 😳. It was sinfully sweet!
I would love to hear of more work from you soon dear! Ramadan Mubarak :) xxx
Noor
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rockprincess123

Awwwh, that was the sweetest thing ever dear Iqra! And even more sweeter because it was the first instance I learned your name!

You could not have shared a more wonderful and dear piece of work as being your first than the one you just gave here! It was absolutely perfect!
I loved how everything in the OS gave the idea that Arnav and Khushi's love was always love at first sight and their conversation at the end just proves it even more.
It was very beautifully written and I adored how you made reference to Khushi's ever laal nose 😳. It was sinfully sweet!
I would love to hear of more work from you soon dear! Ramadan Mubarak :) xxx
Noor

thanks for wonderful comment.
u get what I actually want to convey...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very cute.
Liked the start point of the story. Am a sucker for Arshi kiddie stories :D

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