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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aanya84

11 std that to cbse
U r in which class??

Okkk:)
I've just completed school this year n given entrances
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jack-12

Okkk:)
I've just completed school this year n given entrances

Ur lucky yaar u don't have to see faces of ur dull strict and hitter chem teachers 😃
Read all the parts must say they are amazing


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aanya84

Ur lucky yaar u don't have to see faces of ur dull strict and hitter chem teachers 😃
Read all the parts must say they are amazing


U can say that, but i've already gone through all those things 😃
Thanks a lot
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 9
God plzzz I just want to hit my head somewhere 😕😡
Seriously maaneet are behaving like spineless jerks 😡
So much misconceptions about each other ( point to be noted all are utterly wrong!!!!!!!!!)
Loved the way ur described Maan and geet meeting through Maan perception👏
They loved ( opps love ) each other beyond limits still don't trust 😉
This is something new 😆
Love without trust
And the awards goes to honourable dumb moron sasha( I can't stop uttering hundreds of abuses for her She deserves are hatred)😡
This chit of women has destroyed many lives ( maaneet tops this list )😡
Back to present 😆
Woohoo they at least got to know some truths 👏
But what us this yaar Maans jealousy took the matters to worse situation 😡
Arghhh me feeling like punching him tight on his face 😡
They kissed but not out of love but anger🥱
Maan dude can't u just listen and trust geet once 😡
Prejudices are never good
Specially when its about matters of heart 😡
Will post comment for 10 and 11 soon 😃
Edited by aanya84 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
So guys I'm posting the last chapter. It has two parts cause i wanted to separate out somethings. I'm posting part 1. Part 2 will be either posted today or tomorrow.
I know my marking this update as adult won't do any good, cause most of my reads are young, but still would like to warn you. The contents of this post are highly mature.


LAST CHAPTER


PART 1

Maan moved away from her. He had no clue whom to trust. His heart was shouting at him to trust Geet, but he was a coward right now. " I'll get another room. You can sleep here. We'll leave tomorrow morning...i want you to leave Mumbai and my life tomorrow morning first thing after moving out from this hotel. As far as Kabeer is concerned, things would get sorted out soon." Saying this he turned to leave.


"Maan wait!"


Maan stood there, not facing Geet. After the development of this one night, he wanted nothing to do with her. All he wanted was her to leave, for once and for all.

"Maan just for once look at me."

After waiting for a second, he looked back at her. The expression in her eyes gave out nothing as she slowly started walking towards him. Maan could taste the tense atmosphere and hence he lifted his hand in a stop-position, asking her to hold her steps at a considerable distance. He again looked at Geet. His breath was searing through his lungs. He was burning up. He felt weak. All the events, uptill now, specifically the things that took place today, were playing in his mind.

"Maan!" Her voice was husky. She couldn't believe that she was going to do this. "Be thruthfull to me, to yourself, for once and answer my question." She waited before continuing. " Have you ever loved me?"

For a split of second Geet saw something bleak cross Maan's face, and then it was gone. " Why suddenly, after so many years, at this point, this question?" He asked, anger vibrating from him in waves.

She spluttered. " I don't know myself." This was the truth she was stating. " Just please answer."

Maan stared at her in gloom. A bittersweet rush of emotions flooded his veins, making him vulnerable. He wanted to say NO. But then slowly all those feelings he'd witnessed for her paced through his heart and then consciously or unconsciously a yes escaped through his mouth.

His face went pale when his own words registered his mind. He felt acutely exposed.

Geet froze in her spot for a couple of seconds and then spoke as she made her way towards him. " Just for that love which you had for me, once, please make me yours. Spend this one night with me as someone you loved and not as your enemy. Touch me in the ways that no one has ever done. Mark me as yours for once and for all." She smiled softly as she poured down her heart and soul to him.

Maan stepped back, raking a hand through his hair impatiently at her demand. His whole body radiated tension. He could not understand the meaning and depth of Geet's words and this caused him frustration. He was aldo clueless as to why she was submitting herself to him, when he'd told her to finally leave his life.

Sudden anger flared through him due to all this drama as he marched up to Geet. He grabbed her mouth and pulled it towards him. " Why are you doing this Geet?" He spoke with the same anger. Without waiting for an answer, he continued. " You have got yourself into this cause i won't stop touching you until I'm satisfied."

And with a guttural growl he bent his head, his mouth finding hers in a drugging heady kiss. The strange vibration in his body intensified, which he'd always felt in her presence.

Maan had started this kiss out of anger, but something took control of it and everything changed in an instant as their lips met, shutting all those hurting emotions, all that hate he had for her. This time only love surfaced.

Maan deepened the kiss as he opened her mouth with his tongue. Geet kissed him back. Her body felt molten, radiating heat. She could feel Maan's hands tracing her cheekbones, his teeth nipping gently at her lips. She felt something unexpected, an urgent tension between her thighs. This feeling was new to her.

Maan finally pulled back, when the two were gasping for air. Geet couldn't stop the flow of tears from her eyes. She closed them as she felt Maan's soft lips over her tears, making way to the source of them.

There was nothing except love in Maan's heart at that moment. The feeling of hate and disgust towards her were somewhere unapproachable. He was turned on just by sharing a kiss with her.

" I want you Geet...and i'll make you remember how much you once meant to me." His hands dipped under her butt, tucked her closer as he pushed his erection towards her, hitting the right spot. She could feel the head of him making V patterns between her thighs through his pants and her bathrobe.

His mouth was on her once again, drugging her with the sweep of his lips and tongue. With a moan Geet wound her arms around his neck, digging her fingers into his scalp.

Maan lifted her and after taking her to the bed, laid her on it, without pausing the kiss. His erection was bigger and harder now. Maan's hands moved towards the peaks of her chest, shaping them and then in a while his hands were on the strands of her robe, undoing them, to reveal her naked body. As Maan pushed her robe out from her body, Geet tried to concentrate on what he was doing to her mouth, forcing herself not to think about what he was revealing. She brought her hands to cover her chest, but a look at Maan's face was enough to cause the flow of feminine energy through her and unconsciously she pushed herself more towards him.

Her partly covered breasts rose and fell under Maan's body, making him mad with just the pleasure of looking at them. In a matter of moments, the two had eachother totally naked, shirt, pants and any amount of cloth were tossed aside.

Maan shaped her from head to thigh with his hands, and Geet moaned with with, surging, arching under his presence. She was aching as he muzzeled on her neck and nibbeled on her collarbone, working his way to her breasts. His tongue came out and ran a circle around one nipple before he took it into his mouth. Sucking it with immense pressure. After being contented with the one, he made his way to the other and behaved in a similar fashion. As he sulked her, his hand slid upto her inner thigh.

And then he was touching her core. He groaned, his chest vibrating against her as he made the sound. It was Geet's first time, but her body knew where it was headed. Panting, holding onto his shoulder with her nails, Geet watched him lick her breast as he moved his hand in and out of her body, ribbing just at the right places. In a flash of lighting Geet exploded with the immense pleasure.

Maan was aware of the effect he was having on her and he was also surprised by the way his body reacted towards her.

Maan's mouth left her upper body and moved to her inner thigh and then he captured her hot flesh with his lips, sucking, then tugging, licking with his tongue.

Geet moaned his name out of embarrassment and upmost pleasure. She didn't even know what to ask for. All she knew she needed it more. Maan's mouth them moved to hers as his hands slid her legs wide open. he pushed his manhood, into the only opening that was available.

Geet's muscles contracted at the alien invasion and soon a pain hit her as Maan sank in some more. She cried out at the shocking, rending pain.

Maan frowned and cursed as he found the opening so tight. He looked into her eyes and spoke in surprise as reality hit him hard. " You're not...?"

Geet smiled a yes in the best way she could in this situation.

So many things hit Maan at once. But the biggest of them was guilt. Guilt for not trusting her, ever. Guilt for judging her in a wrong way. Guilt for not being there for her today in a different way. The meaning of her words which she'd spoken earlier, to mark her as his, were understood by him now.

Maan found some control and spoke painfully. " This is the worst part darling, it will hurt...but it won't last long...i promise." For the first time he was well aware of her pain.

Geet looked at him with trust in her eyes as she spoke " Okay". The trust she had for him, broke Maan more as he drove himself inside her, breaking the barrier which prevented them from meeting. Geet cried out in pain as Maan made way to her mouth calming her, taking away all her pain in that one kiss. Their bodies worked in motion as their union completed.


************

When Maan woke up the following morning, tired, it took him a long tome to register where he was and what had happened. He cursed himself...she was innocent all along...

Maan's inside turned molten as he realised that he still loved her, and that was proven last night. There was never hate for her. It was only his insecurities.

He smiled as he realized that Geet was only his and how they had claimed eachother.

Maan turned his body to face the other side of the bed and realized that he was all alone. He went instantly cold as he realized that Geet was no longer in the room too.

He got out of the bed and pulled on his jeans as his eyes went on a piece of paper on her side of the bed.

Moving towards it, Maan unfoalded it to read the contents...

Maan,


Yesterday night you'd asked me to leave the first thing in the morning so I'm leaving...

Geet's Letter to be continued.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aanya84

Part 9

God plzzz I just want to hit my head somewhere 😕😡
Seriously maaneet are behaving like spineless jerks 😡
So much misconceptions about each other ( point to be noted all are utterly wrong!!!!!!!!!)
Loved the way ur described Maan and geet meeting through Maan perception👏
They loved ( opps love ) each other beyond limits still don't trust 😉
This is something new 😆
Love without trust
And the awards goes to honourable dumb moron sasha( I can't stop uttering hundreds of abuses for her She deserves are hatred)😡
This chit of women has destroyed many lives ( maaneet tops this list )😡
Back to present 😆
Woohoo they at least got to know some truths 👏
But what us this yaar Maans jealousy took the matters to worse situation 😡
Arghhh me feeling like punching him tight on his face 😡
They kissed but not out of love but anger🥱
Maan dude can't u just listen and trust geet once 😡
Prejudices are never good
Specially when its about matters of heart 😡
Will post comment for 10 and 11 soon 😃

Thank u for being so generous while commenting😃
I agree with all ur points
U've really understoid both quiet well
Once again thank u
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 10
God sasha that witch she is responsible for alll the confusion😡
God know Maan wants to get back on geet with his stupid snobby ideas😡
I have read 11 and last part still can't stop to utter such words for Maan
Aww for geet he has become a heartless monster 😡
Well geet u r also not in his good books😉
So is it tit for tat 😆


P.s what u r leaving if saw ur note this is not done 😭u write very well Bhai👏 ( will call u this tell me if u r not ok )
Rethink about u decision
Edited by aanya84 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
geet was virgiin??????
maan realised truth
n geet left
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing story...
Bt is geet gng to tell him dat he can b her half brother?
Things have changed so much
Want Sasha to b exposed
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Posted: 12 years ago
read all parts in on go... loved it a lot... sry to hear tht u r leaving IF... u r such a good writer...

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