D3 SS FOR UR LOVE-THREAD-2 updated - Page 17

Originally posted by: 8JSmileyFace8J

HEy Megha!!!!

Great Update!!!

I was lughing from the first few lines!!!

the whole gunde sequence was seriously hilarious!!!!

poor rey is foever lost in his love and swayam is like on the verge of murdering him!!!!

and the stairs idea was hilarious!!!

reyam are still doubting that juice and now i am too!!!

finally they took AR's help!!

put a little sense in to their plans!!!

and the end..OMG!!!!

i was not expecting that!!!

that guy was like drooling over Reyam!!!

and the poor girls were SOOO jealous!!!

oh my god atill trying to catch my breath!!!

that was very fuunyy!!

UPDATE SOON!!!!

Originally posted by: fantaarey

amazing update

waiting for next update 👏

Originally posted by: tareyfan

sabse pehle kaan pakad se sry ...bohot late ho gyi yaar ...bt toh janti hai na kyu ...so abhi yeh sa chod abhi teri story ka thoda maza uthalun 😆 ekdum mast update tha yaara 😃 n yeh toh

luvd d taarey part 😳 n yeh wala

Both started walking n sh place her head on his shoulder n said-kitna acha lag raha hai na

Sw(confused he thought she is talking about the guy standing infront of them'he was jealous)-kon acha lag raha hai???

Sh(saw him n understood he is jealous n thinks k chalo thora maze karte hai)-wo ladka

Sw looked at the guy'.he was actually handsome with good physic

Sw(jealous)-itna bhi kuch khaas nai hai

Sh(smile)really par mujhe toh wo bohot hot lag raha hai

Sw-kaha se hot lag raha hai!!!! Bas thore body he toh hai n body toh koi bhi bana sakta hai

(hehehe boys ja jealous hote hai toh kitne acche lagte hai na 😳😆 )

n dat pic was so cute yaar ...had a big smile on my face wen i saw dat pic😃

Taani-aapko pata hai jab tak Vicky hamare saath tha na wo na bachpan se he ek dum typical bhai type tha full on possessive

Rey-wo toh abhi bhi itna possessive hai(in scared tone n scared expression) 😆

Taani starts laughing n said-shakal dekhi hai apni'vicky apke dost hai aur aap unse itna darte ho

Rey-ha toh mai kya karo ab wo achanak se bhai k avtar mai aa jata hai'god he scary 🤣

"Voice-sw put me down kya kar rahe ho

Sw-kyu yaha toh koi bhi nai hai'tumhara "bhai" bhi nai

Inside the washroom'.rey bhai avtar kick in

Rey-yeh kya kar raha hai mere behan k saath

Taani(rolled her eyes)-joh aap kar rahe ho unke behan k saath' "ROMANCE" 🤣🤣

n luvd dono bhaiyon ka possessiveness 4 their sis ...it was cute yaar ...

n sharon ka plan 😆 sharon n filmy baatein haan 😆

n yeh part toh yaar i was literally gonna fall of my bed

"Reyam looked at each other n then at her juice glass'they took it n smell it

Rey-juice toh sahi hai

Sw-toh phir isse kya hua

Sh-bola na kaise idea hai

Before reyam could say anything taani speaks

Taani-awesome idea bhabhi

Reyam again looked at each other n rey signal sw to check her glass

Sw took taani's juice glass n smell it n said-yeh bhi theek hai

Rey-phir yeh dono paagal ho gaye hai " 🤣🤣

n abhi heading to part 31

Originally posted by: tareyfan

i seriously cant tell u ki kitna miss kiya iss stroy ko yaar ...n it was an awesome blossom updt...n start karte hi i started laughing ...mera bro tho thought ki me satak gyi ...kab se hasi jaa rhi hun..😆 pata nhi abhi tak aadat kaise nhi hui use iss sab ki 🤣 n haan abhi cuming to d update ...

.sw to gundas-ab jao taani k pass'they go

Sw-kaise din dekhna padh raha hai mai gunde ko apni behan k pass bhej raha ho ( 🤣 bechara swayam kaise din dekhne pad rhe hai use 😆

Gun 1-kya item hai yr(he said slowly)

Taani-arre thora loud bolo warna Vicky kaise sunnega

Gun 1-sorry madam

Taani-koi baat nai phir se bolo

Gun1-kya item hai yr(loudly)

Viha heard it'.vicky smiling face was now turning into serious

Gun 2-kya re item chalti hai kya 9 se 12

Taani(confused)-9 se 12 ka kya matlab hota hai(slowly)

Gun 2-arre madam aap matlab mat pooch bas sunte raho

Taani-ok ok sorry

( Gunde calling taani madam 🤣 )

n sharon toh 🤣

As soon as armaan kicked him'.shareyam slap their head

Sw-bhai kaha se aa gaye

Rey-ab meri image ka kya hoga

Sh-arre tum dono chup raha aur chalo un gundo ko bachana hai...(pehli baar gundon ko bachana hai 🤣🤣 )

n bechare shareyam ...unka plan toh supa dupa flop ho gaya 😆

Rey-agar Vicky ne dekh liya na k maine tumhe dakka diya hai toh wo mujhe un stairs se gira dega!!!🤣bechara kitna darta hai vicky se 😆

n juice wala scene toh i literallly was laughing like hell 😆

Teacher(shouts)-kya ho raha hai yeh!!! Class hai ya park hai!!! Kabhi padh bhi liya karo!!!! 🤣 kash aisa kabhi d3 me koi professor kehta...🤣 bt professor ek mahine me ek baat aata hai...poor soul kya kahega 🤣🤣

ab samaj aaya ki vp sir ne rey ko all d best kyu bola 🤣

n d precap sounds interesting...so update d nxt part asap waiting 4 it ...😃

CHAPTER-32

FIRE ESCAPE

Simmi was waiting for nil its been more than 30 min that she was waiting 4 him

Si-oh god yeh nil kaha hai yr

Ni(from back)-rite here babes

Simmi turns n look at him with anger

Nil-oh plz na jaan sorry na galti ho gaye tum toh janti ho na bake boys ko koi jane he nai de raha tha sorry

Simmi-its ok…both smiles n hug

Si-nil hum sab ko bata kyu nai sakte hamare bare mai

Ni-simmi thore dino mai bata denge

Si-par abhi kyu nai

Ni-kyuki mai chahata ho k phele tum sure ho jao(simmi looks at him shocked)…dekho simmi tum bhi janti ho k mai tumhe hamesha ignore karta tha avoid karta tha tumhe itni importance he nai de…mai tumhe deserve nai karta simmi isiliye mai chahata ho k phele tum sure ho jao k hum saath hai aur hamesha rahenge

Simmi-nil r u mad I m sure about u nil…I love u nil hamesha se plz aise mat kaho plz I love u…u r the most important person in my life

Nil smile-I love u simmi….n agar tum sure ho toh hum sab ko bata denge k nil n simmi are now nimmi…

Both laughs…..nil-waise tumhe pata hai rinni khehte hai k hum dono bohot cute lagte hai saath mai

Simmi-acha mujhe toh nai lagta(teasing him)

Nil-really let's see then(he pulled her towards him n takes out his phone n clicked a pic

Nil-ab batao lagte hai na cute

Simmi-ha baba bohot cute….both smile n hugged each other

AFTER COLLAGE SHAAREY HOUSE(guys u better remember that sh's mom called n told her to live with rey n so rey lives with sh in her house)

Here rey was sitting n watching tv thinking to spend some quality time with his sis n sh was talking on phone slowly to sw

Here rey calls-sharon!!!(no response)…sharon!!!(no response)

Rey thinks-ye jawab kyu nai de rahe so he goes to her room…he was about to enter when he heard

Sh-hahahahaha

Rey thinks-ye itna has kyu rahe hai….ok mujhe pata hai yeh buri baat hai par sh meri behan hai mujhe yeh karna he parega….he peep inside n start listening everything

Sh-ha sw mai aa jaongi

Sw-nai tum late aaogi I know u

Sh-arre baba bola na time par aa jaongi

Sw-tum mujhe baba kyu bol rahe ho baba toh mandir mai hote hai

Sh-mandir???

Rey thinks-yeh sw sh ko mandir kyu lekar jar aha hai

Sw-ha mandir jaha baba hote hai bhagwaan hote hai shaadi bhi hoti hai

Sh-shaadi!!!

Rey thinks-shaadi!!! Matlab sw sh ko bhaga kar shaadi karne jar aha hai…his anger grows n he banged the doors n enters…sh got scared….rey snatched phone from her n said to sw

Rey-abbe saale tu meri behan se shaadi karega

Sw thinks rey is talking about future so he said normally-ha

Rey-abbe teri toh "ha" kya ha tu kar k toh dekh mai tujhe maar dalonga

Sw-abbe teri prob kya hai tu nai chahata k teri behan settle ho jae

Rey-ha chahata ho par age bhi toh hone chahiyeh na

Sw-abbe toh maine kab bola k mai usse abhi bhaga kar mandir mai shaadi kar longa

Rey-kya tu aisa nai karne wala tha

Sw-obviously not dude tu pagal hai kya….ek sec ek sec tujhe aisa laga k mai aur sh bhaag kar shaadi kar rahe hai…..hahhahahaha dude u r mad

Rey-ha toh sh ne aisa bola…mandir…shaadi toh mai dar gaya

Sw-dude darna toh tujhe ab chahiyeh

Rey-kyu

Sw-tune the Sharon rai prakash ko naraz kiya dekh usse (rey looked at her yes hse was fuming in anger )…so all the best dude

Rey-ya ok he cuts phone…he looked at sh fully scared

Sh-mr. reyansh singhania may I have my phone back if u permit me

Rey gave her phone…

Rey(tries to change topic)-sh tum jaldi se tayyar ho jao hame sw k ghar jaana hai

Sh-oh really toh mai waha ja sakti ho..permission hai tumhare oops I mean bhaiya aapki permission hai

Rey-tum aise kyu bol rahe ho

Sh(busted her anger)-toh aur kya karo!!!! Wth make u think k mai aur sw mandir ja kar shaadi kar rahe hai!!! Aur tumhe ho kya gaya hai tum cool bro se typical bro kyu ban rahe ho!!!!

Rey-ok fine galti ho gaye mujhse kya karo tumhe lekar thora pareshaan ho jata ho…I just don't want u to get hurt….i mean I know k sw bohot acha ladka hai par mai kya karo tu meri behan hai n I can't help this behavior…I don't wanna loose u(he said this in one go cutely like a small kid)

Sh(calming down)-hey hey hey bro nothing gonna happen to me…u trust me right(rey nodes in yes) then nothing gonna happen I m with u n will be with u whole my life I promise…both hug

Sh-chalo jaldi ready ho jate hai aaj Vicky se baat karne hai

Rey thinks-vicky!!! Mar gaya mai

Both get ready n leave 4 taavicyam house

HERE IN TAAVICYAM HOUSE

Taani has prepared dinner n now she was just waiting for sharey n Vicky to come…(Vicky was out 4 some work)

Taani was tensed sitting on sofa when ridz came

Ridz-arre angel kya hua tensed lag rahe hai

Taani-bhabhi bohot dar lag raha hai agar Vicky nai mana toh aap toh Vicky ko jante ho na…

Ridz-ha baba jante ho usse par tu tension kyu le rahe hai hum usse aaj tere aur rey k bare mai nai batane wale hai…hum bas poochenge k usse kaisa ladka chahiyeh

Taani-hmmm

Ridz-tu tension mat le ok….just then her phone rings n ridz went away……ridz n taani conversation was heard by armaan n sw

Now taani was still tensed n she look very cute when she is tensed

Sw-bhai kitne cute lag rahe hai na

Ar-ha abhi bhi bachi hai puri k puri

Sw-bhai aapko yaad hai bachpan mai hum kitna tang karte the taani ko jab bhi wo tensed ho jate thi

Ar-ha kitna maza aata tha aur Vicky toh sabse zayda tang karta tha

Sw-bhai bohot dino se tang nai kiya hai usse

Now both looked at her n then at each other n said-let's do it

Now both go n sit beside her sw in left n ar in right

Sw(loudly so that taani will hear)-bhai yeh Vicky kaha hai

Ar-pata nai…par koi nai aata he hoga

Sw-bhai aapko sach mai lagta hai k Vicky maan jayega

Taani looks at ar hoping to say yes

Ar-well mujhe nai lagta

Taani-kyu…kyu nai lagta aapko

Ar-kyuki my sweetypie

Taani-sweetypie???

Ar-ha tera naya naam prob hai(taani nods in no she was ok ar has habit to call her with different names)..ha toh mujhe isiliye lagta hai k wo nai maanega kyuki wo Vicky hai sw nai joh rey ko asani se chod de

Sw-ha rey toh gaya

Taani tension increases she prayed to god little louder n ar n sw heard it

Taani-hey khrishna ji plz plz plz Vicky ko samhal lena…plz agar uska dimaag satak gaya toh wo rey ko….no no no no soach kar he dar lagta hai plz ha khrishna ji agar Vicky maan gaya na toh…toh…toh …ha toh mai ice-cream khana chod donge

Ar n sw looked at each other n starts laughing like hell

Ar(while laughing)-ice-cream chod donge

Sw-seriously ice-cream

Taani glared at them n they shut their mouth…now ar in very serious tone

Ar-acha jokes apart princess tu chinta mat kar Vicky….(taani thought ar is motivating her but he said)-vicky…nai mane wala hai aur rey gaya aaj…

Again sw n ar laughs n this time taani runs after them shouting-I hate u guys!!!!!!!!!!!!

Meanwhile sharey enter n rings bell…ridz goes n open n smiles n sharey hugs her she was like family to them

Just then they saw ar comes running to them followed by sw n taani who was holding a stick…..ar n sw moves away but taani could not balance herself n she fell on rey n they roll on ground…both got lost in each other n complelely forgot that the entire family(except vic) is there

Ar smile at them he knows like this only rey will save his baby sister for the rest of his life…

Sw was admiring his lady love but soon realize that she is looking somewhere else soon he saw in her direction n got a shock of his life…

Rey was lying on taani n they were dam close

Sw-I think I m gonna be sick…he rushed to washroom can't see someone too close to his sis

ar cleared his throat n caughs fake to bring taarey back….soon taarey gets back n rey made taani stand n asked her slowly

rey-tum theek ho na

taani(slowly)-aap k hote hue mujhe kya ho sakta hai….both smile…till then sw also comes back glaring at rey

ar-ok guys dekho Vicky aane wala hoga so hame decide karna chahiyeh k kya baat karne hai

now all sit in a circle

ar-so who is gonna talk to him raise ur hands….no one raise

ar-come on guys kisiko toh baat karne hogi usse….he looks at sw

sw-mai paagal nai ho I m not gonna talk to him

ar looks at rey…rey-wo mujhe kaccha kha jayega!!!!

Ar looks at ridz n taani- no way!!!!!!!!!

Ar looks at sh…sh-mera toh sawal he nai uthta

Ar-kyu tum uske hone wali bhabhi ho…(swaron blushes)

Sh-but still I m not gonna talk to him no way

Now all loocked at ar…ar-what!!! I m not gonna talk to him

All-plzzz

Taani(blinking her eyes)-superman meri liye plzzz

Ar-sweetypie don't do that

Taani-plz na bhaiyu plzzz plzzz plzzz

Ar-ok fine u n ur blackmailing!!!!

Taani(with proud)-hah its always work

Just then door open n Vicky comes asusual jumping like mad…ridz goes to him

Vic-bhabhi I love u

Ridz-love u k bache kaha tha tu!!!! lunch bhi nai kiya bata kar bhi nai gaya

Vic-sorry sorry sorry bhabhi wo kuch kaam tha isiliye chala gaya

Taani-chalo sab khana khate hai

Vic saw sh n smirks-vic-arre aaj toh mai apne hone wali bhabhi k saath khaonga…sh blushed

Rey puts hands on his shoulder n said-ha bilkul

Vicky looked at his hand n then glared at him….rey remove his hand n sw laughs but stops as soon as taarey glare at him

Ar-ok chalo lets have dinner

All were having dinner n all signal ar to start convo with vic

Ar-arre wo chacha ji(sw n taani's dad) ka phone aaya tha unhone taani k liye ek ladka pasand kiya hai

Vic stops eating n al looked at him waiting 4 his reaction n our sweet n funny Vicky busted with anger

Vic-arre aise kaise ladka dekh liya!!! Hame bataya bhi nai!!! Yeh koi umar hai bacha k shaadi k!!!! no mai bhi dekhta ho kon hai wo ladka!!! Bhaiya kon hai wo batana zara saale k aise hawa tight karonga k kabhi shaadi nai kar paega!!!(he said while putting his hand hardly on table making a thud sound)

All looked at rey as if saying rey u r dead n rey looked above as if praying god 4 his life…but vicky was not finished yet

Vic-bhaiya batao wo ladka kon hai abhi k abhi batao muhje aae shapat dharti ma k kasam uski duniya hila donga mai

Ar was soo lost that he didn't realize what he said n he said looking at rey- ar-rey

Vic-kya!!!! Rey tu!!!!! Tu mere bacha se shaadi karega tere toh!!!!(stands up n move towards him)

Soon ar realize what he said

Ar-arre vic mai toh yeh kheh raha tha k…k…k..rey tu dal aur le na

Rey(voice chocked due to fear n comes a girl's voice)-ha sahi hai all looked at him n he clears his voice n now in his own voice he said-ha Vicky sir mujhe aur dal lene k liye kheh rahe par tune suna he nai

Vic-oh acha sorry dude

Now dinner finished….n vicky was sitting on sofa n all were in kitchen talking slowly

Ridz-ab kya kare plan toh fail ho gaya agar abhi bataya toh yeh to rey ko kacha kha jaega

Ar-ek min hum ek kaam karte hai biscuit tu ja

All-biscuit kon hai

Ar(normally)-taani

Taani-oh god bhaiya abhi toh ek naam se balao….n no way mai nai jane wale

Ar-taani rey tera bf hai toh baat bhi tujhe he karne hogi

All—ha

Taani-par mujhe dar lag raha hai

Rey places his hand on her shoulder n said-my sweetheart babes no fear when ur prince charming is here…both smile

Sw-caughs…ho gaya tera ab haath hata(rey removes his hand)….princess tum jao wo bohot pyaar karta hai tujhse tu ja

Taani starts going towards him n finally goes to him n stands straight

Vicky looks at her-tu aise kyu khadi(stand) hai teacher ne tujhe punishment de ho….heheheheehehehhehe

Taani-tu baith(sit) na baate karte hai

Vic(eyes light up he so wanted to spend quality time with his sis)-ha par ek min mai tere liye ice-cream laya tha usse khate khate baat karte hai

Here ar…sw..n rey slap there head

Sh-kya hua

Rey-ab yeh kuch baat nai karege

Sh-kyu

Sw-ice-cream joh aa gaye hai

Ar-aur ice-cream samne ho toh madam ko kuch bhi dhyaan nai rahta!!!

Here taani starts eating ice-cream completely forgets why she was there for

Vic-toh tujhe kuch baat karne thi

Taani-(eating her ice-cream)-konsi baat

Vic-arre abhi toh bol rahe thi k baat hai

Taani-oh ha baat toh karne hai….vicky wo…..

SCENE CHANGE

Inside a dark room a guy is standing with camera

Guy-jaise tune kaha tha waisa he hua hai

Guy2-very good…..ab dekhta ho k yeh rey aur sw kaise bachte hai….n my beautiful taani…yr agar wo sw k behan nai hoti na th kabka mai usse hasil kar leta par koi baat nai jaege kaha aaege toh mere pass he

Guy1-dude par kisiko tujh par shak nai hoga???? Agar tu pakhda gaya toh!!!

Guy2 laughs-mujhe kon pakdrega aur shak huh!!! Yeh d3 k team k pass itna time he nai hai k kisi aur ko notice kare….unhe kya laga mai chup ho jaoga they were wrong!!!!...do u know y???

Guy1-y??

Guy-because I m "RAHMAAN" aur rahmaan aaj tak nai haara phir jahe wo race ho ya ladki…(takes out a pic of d3 girls n kiss them all)

Huh finally finished chapter 32 plzzz do hit like n comment

Note1-guys I know aapko fireescape dekh kar laga hoga k taarey ka scene hai par sorry guys couple bhi toh ja sakte hai na akele time spend karne n nimmi r couple

Note2-guys I never wanna tell u all this but now I m telling that yes I m literally hurt…my hands n legs r hurt because of a accident….it took me 2 days to write this chapter n plz guys don't think I m faking many of u know what happen with me…I just want a good n long comments n like 4 this guys plzzz I bear lots of pain just to update my stories

Precap-what rahmaan is planning???? Will he hurt taani or all d3 girls???? Will boys came to know his evil plan???? Will taain be able to talk to Vicky?????how will Vicky react????...taani came running n shouts bhabhi!!!!...y taani is scared?????...to know this stay tune

yea me 1st me 1st!!! baaki ka unresed on 28th page!! 😆

let me read...ohhh god at last i am done with ur stry n i must say it awsm stry i luv ur stry concept to core i mean u hav shown everything bro-sis relation, luver relation,bhai-bhabhi relation,bad boys, care , love , protection , jealousy , emotional , pain , hurt , feeling of losing someone , understanding everything pure love , madly love , simple love , stupid love kkk i lyv taaviyam bond haaye i luv thr bro- sis bond but sometime vicky is over protective for taani i understand him but sometime feel he shld control n thn com to swayam i luv dis type of bro i mean bit understanding n whn needed thn become protective but he understand her n giv her some space i luv dis...i luv whn bro fight for thr sis haaye dis relation is something wch cant express... haaye i luv tht fight canteen n i luv sharey bond rey hav lost his sis 1st n i how care he take of sharon n whn rey get upset sharon com to know n thn rey get better only cake wch is make by sharon...i luv thr bond also haaye thr r cute n swt...thn coming to vicky n simmi thr r cute couple i luv thr relation...thn rinni n amar thr r simple couple n care for each other...bharat n aashi nice couple both r made for each other nice n thn arman and ridhima haaye bst couple n swt cute n perfect couple i luv d way thr understand everyone n i luv tht arman is more understand thn swayam n vicky thank god my rey is save but really poor rey yaar taani hav 3 bro tht too protective but thanks to arman awsm n thn i luv whn swaron n taarey were in same room sry swaron in room n taarey in washroom haaye but y u dont show more taarey romance i mean swaron hav kiss each other 2 time n my taarey only once vry bad n y other couple r not confessing thr luv haaye n i luv neha n vicky luv cute ha but thn also i want taarey romance but yeah plzz end dis bad boy chap... n yeah show all of thm biting him like hell plzz even arman plzz i would luv to read tht haaye n wht is dis poor my reyam gay guy nahiii anyways i want to say tht i luv ur stry n concept to core... u r awsm in dis thing really.. but show more romance n some fun of gang n show thr out going n having fun masti romance all of thm plzzz thanks for PM n do put nxt prt soon... here is my small gift for u from my side for dis luvly stry i hope u like it thanks for stry once again

Awesome update as always
Shareyam part was funny
it was cute funny superb chapter
Eagerly waiting for next part
update soon

🤣 bechara rey...