hi every one this is my first ever ff so plz do forgive me for my mistakes and if u don't like it plz do tell.
here we go
and by the way my sotry will have more characters in it but some will be taken from the soap.
part 1
The door was not only open it had a shadow standing on the door way. "Spirit" the three of them were shouting and trembling at the same time while gauri sat still reading the mantra's.
The spirit entered the room. Aliya's eyes were open wide with fear and she noticed that the spirit had a bag in his hand. she held gauri's hand really tight. she was scared to death.
"gauri! rooh to baig bhi le ke ayi hai saath. what are we going to do now? is she gonna stay here like."
Seeing a bag in the spirit's hand gauri got a little bit scared but if she expressed her fear a little bit then the three bodies sitting next to her would have started shouting and would have woken up everyone in the area.
gauri took hold of jiya's hand trying to calm her down but she knew it was no use. Before gauri could ask any questins from the spirit. he said "excuse me" listening to the heavy vioce of the spirit all three girls shouted louder than gauri had expected and they ran out of the room. they were hitting anything which came in their way because there was no light. gauri stood up and switched on the light. only then she realised that the so called spirit standing in front of them was not a spirit he was very much human who was watching all this and was confused because of the screaming.
"kaun hain app aur andar kaise aye" seeing a human gauri got worried and asked. while shruti who was near the door stood still beacuse of the question and knowing that the rooh is actually alive.and started shouting "chor chor".
all the elders who were in dada ji's room came to the lounge to know why the girls are screaming.theay all entered and greeted the man all hugged him one by one "anupum beta tum yahan. kaise ho? kahan the? tumhari to koi khabar hi nahi tumhe kitna contact karne ki koshish ki lakin tum ho ke ghorey ke seengh ki tarahan gayab hi ho gaye." anupum just stood there smiling. "uncle bethne to dijiye. mazak kar raha hoon. me abroad tha." he still wanted to know why the girls were screaming when they looked at him. They all sat down. The girls were about to leave for kitchen when dada ji stopped them." ladke kahan hain" dadaji asked aaliya beacuse she is the one who is scared wnd will tell easily. dada ji me nahi janti kahan hain wo" she answered. dadaji then asks the other two they said the samething. then dadaji asked gauri "gauri do u know where they are" " ji dadaji wo rishi ka dost aya tha us ke ghar koi bemar hai un ko gari chahiye thi hospital leke jana tha sab wahin gaye hain" gauri lied with no hesitation. "in paanch se to gari full ho gayi ho gi to bemaar ko kahan bithaye ge" he always suspected her. that only they can tell but i think they will go by the bus as they might need to give blood" saying that she leaves aaliya come behind her and hits her on the head. " why did you lie to dada ji" "i lied beacuse this is the only time they can have fun to enjoy themselves rest of the time the elders are busy fighting" said gauri. then aaliya asked "where have the gone to" "no where just food street".
next you see a guy coming out of the airport. he is wearing jeans and addidas shirt and jumper on it. he is looking hot as always its none other than shiv kapoor. "hey shiv" someone shout from behind. shiv turns and is shocked...
i will update if u guys like it
keeping my fingers crossed
sorry if u don't like it
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part2 p1
part3 p2
part4 p3
part5 p4
part6 p4
part7 p7
part 8 p8
part9 p9
part10 p10
part11 p12
part12 p13
part13 p15
part14 p16
part15 P17
part16 p18
part17 p19
part18 p20
part19 p22
part20 p23
part21 p24
part22 p25
part23 p27
part24 p28 last part
