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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello friends...This is my first individual work. So bare with my mistakes...and I would like to dedicate this to my choco pie mini [-Chaitra-] for encouraging me to post this OS...Thnx alot dear...so guys do tell me how was it..😊


It was raining heavily and a girl standing alone in the rain was cursing her own decision of visiting the site for her dance academy today...and how dumb of her to send the driver back now she can't even call the driver as signal was weak here..

Suddenly it strike her to ask for lift but she was not sure as the location is little out of city so getting a lift in such a lonely place was really difficult..

Swayam's POV

It was a rainy day, when I was coming back after meeting my friend. The wind was blowing and it was quiet cold than usual...I saw a girl standing in rain as if waiting for me..I guess she needs some help...

As she noticed him approaching towards her direction he saw a smile on her face.

God her smile is really attractive which can make you forget whatever you are doing...She waved her hand and automatically I applied the brakes involuntarily...

She came towards Swayam

"Excuse me...I'm stuck here can u give me the lift till city plz" she asked him..

How can he refuse this angel...aww her beautiful eyes...and how cute she looked while pleading to him for help...He smiled and nodded a yes to her...

There was a deep silence in the car when they heard RJ " The weather outside is romantic nd so is the next song dedicated by Rey to his lady love Kria..."

Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare

Idher nhi udher nhi teri ore chale

Zara der yeh kya hogya

Mazar milte hi kahan kho gya..


"Wow I love this song" Swayam heard her saying..


He admired her secretly while she was enjoying the song...as the song ended he broke the silence in between the two...

"Hey I'm Swayam" he said to her smilingly...

"Sharon...Sharon Rai prakash" she replied and then they chatted for sometime forgetting they r strangers...till Sharon's destination arrived...

Present

4 years after that meet on a rainy day...That Beautiful day which changed their life...Now Swayam and Sharon are best friends and share almost every detail with each other...

Sometimes they themselves can't believe how they get along so well...their bond was really weird they always felt very comfortable with each other...They can talk for hours without getting bored about everything and anything...that is why they can even understand each other's silence..

Swayam and Sharon was enjoying the view from the cafe outside..Suddenly Sharon heard him speaking "Princess I wanna Propose her..I love her a lot..kya karun mein??"

"Kaun?? Did u find someone here...around u??" replied Sharon teasingly..

"Princess kabhi toh seriously answer kara karo...U know about whom I'm talking" he answer

"Haan I'm sry...I know but Lover boy atleast naam toh bata do uska.." Sharon replied quickly as even she wanted to know that lucky girls' name who had managed to steal his Best Friend's heart.

"Patience Princess, Patience...That will be revealed to you in sometime soon... Why don't we go somewhere a bit quieter and a bit airy" He asked Sharon as they cafe was too crowded today..

Swayam's POV

I saw her face falling when I gave her the satisfactory answer of her question...but she composed herself quickly..

"Actually why don't we go for a long drive Lover boy it's such a nice weather ..I guess it'll rain in sometime" suggested Sharon to which I agreed as I know how much she enjoy long drives

We were in car...listening to music...She is busy viewing the greenery outside..she pulled the glass of the car little more down to enjoy the wind..

I was admiring my princess from corner of my eyes...How beautiful and innocent this girl is...this innocence of her always attracted me towards her...

Her closed eyes, her flying hair, her beautiful face and most of all her perfect smile...All had won over my heart in first sight. How much I wished to just tell her that the girl she wished to know is her..

End of POV

Swayam parked the car near a tea stall. Suddenly it started pouring outside they were waiting for their tea and enjoying weather..Cold breeze blowing away all worries nd soothing them...winds caressing her hairs...he felt her shivering little due to the cold Breeze..Pleasant music playing in background, exciting her more...She extended her hand outside the stall to feel the drop of rain..

That's when RJ's next announcement amused her...

"now the next song romantic song is dedicated from a lover boy to his princess" RJ announced

Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare

Idher nhi udher nhi teri ore chale

Zara der mein yeh kya ho gya

Nazar milte hi kahan kho gya...

Sharon was surprised for a moment, it this true...Did this dedication was for her...from Swayam...But why??

She looked confusing towards him when she saw Swayam smilingly extending his hand. Sharon gave her hand in his and both where enjoying the moment...They just shared a intense eyelock and as the song finished she looked at him questioningly...waiting him to explain her..

That's when she heard him saying.. "We met on a rainy day...and during the drive I fell in love with u madly, completely...and was waiting for u to realize...here this was the dedication from your Lover boy to u...I love u Princess..I love u a lot...will u give me the chance of being your prince my princess..."

Sharon couldn't control any more...She just hugged him tight and swayam's hand automatically made their way to her waist...Today words were not helping her to express herself...Her lover boy..Her secret crush of 3 years LOVED HER...Tears made their way..

Feeling wet against his shirt Swayam panicked nd said.. "Sorry princess If I hurt u...this was just my feeling towards u...It's not necessary that u reciprocate the same..We can be best friend always no problem.."

She slapped him hard and hugged him again and replied "u idiot, dumb Lover boy here I'm hugging u and you are saying sorry...of course I love u stupid.."

"Phir mara kyun" Swayam said sadly breaking the hug..

She said a cute Sorry with a baby face and he smiled at her cuteness. She hugged him again...Swayam's grip tightened over her as now she's his only his forever...This was the beautiful starting of their love story...on a rainy day...

Sometimes it just takes a one single glance for hearts to realize that they are meant to be...they are made for each other<3


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-Chaitra- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres

awww love u di🤗
dedication to me
itni khushi mujhe aaj tak kabhi nahi hui😭
os ke baare mein toh i've already told u😉
par chalo i'll tell ek aur baar its amazing😃
lovely concept❤️hayye rainy romance
Edited by -Chaitra- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres

didu🤗
thanku for such a lovely OS in this beautiful rainy weather ...😛

this one is so direct n to the point..
neither less nor more...!!

plz write more..:)would luv to read!!


Edited by KaNcHaN_06 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dear Sanju,i am so glad after reading u'r work..Its OOosum concept and just beautifully written..Loved the concept of rain with SwaRon's epic love..Rain is like a natural enviornment just made for a Love and Lovers..

So moving on,Loved the begning part,Sharon was waiting there for a lift due to heavy rainfall..And then swayam came there,And gave her lift..And on the first meet he attracted towards her..WOW..I just loved the idea of radio and song..Loved their first meet..

Then present time,i just loved the description of SwaRon individually...Perfectly written i say..

Thats great they become best friends,And shares a weird but worlds most beautifull bond..SwaRon are known for each other..And finally swayam got ready to confess his love for sharon..Loved the idea of Song,rain and a Tea..perfect combo for Love confession..

And last,just loved the confession part..Written so so well..Loved the dialouges of swayam..And then SwaRon are together forever..

Feeling sad for swayam,"Bechaare ko thappad mili sharon se"..But no worries i loved it..😆

Well said at the end.."That was the beautifull starting of their love story on a rainy day"..

I liked and i agree with u'r last words..."Truly they are made for each other"..

Great work..Very well written..
please keep write more..i want to read..
Keep it up..👍🏼
Sorry,i am here without u'r PM,But koi baat nahi,chalta hai..😆

Prateek
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow cute saa swaron os awww
swayam the etrnal lover boy and sharon his princess yayyy
it was just too sweet loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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haww gal i luvd it to d core!!

n especially d song uve chosen is so perfct 4 d situation <3

nice work 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was a lovely nd cute os in dis rainy season
I really love d way they meet nd d way swayam expressed his love for her
really nice os sanju
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Posted: 12 years ago
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pehle to meko tujhse fight karni hai ache se.
Meko sabse end mein pata chalta hai. Pehle nahi bata sakti kya😡
meko toh lagta hai tu bhool hi gayi hai 😭


Abhi os ke baare mein ok
Amazing concept yaar.
Is rainy season mein yeh cute si love story.I love it yaar.
And the song selection great choice yaar.perfectly fit hai is situation k liye.
oh sharon bhi use pasand karti thi last 3 years se nd she is waiting for his confession.
loved the way swayam confess his love to sharon by dedicating her favourite song to her.
Sharon slaps him 🤣
I love the lines u wrote at the end of this os.
U r an awsome writer yaar 👏
Edited by sania_arora - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey...
thanx yar...
thank u so much...
u used that song...
muje meri gift mile gai..
thank u...
now os..
its beautiful and lovely... 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing OS
loved it
beautiful...
thanks for the PM...
o write more

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