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Posted: 12 years ago
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hmm... Real wale Addu ne toh Mohan ko 24 hours diye naa... But that devil😔 12 hours bhi nahi diya hoga apne Monu ko😭 Kood pada directly apna badla lene!!!!😔😔 CV's ne bhi humpe hi chod diya to figure out those 24 hours.. So, here's my first OS:

Mohan comes back home(Bhatnagar House is my wish) completely worn and torn apart. He is still crying from inside although he's got no more tears left. He feels guilty for having wronged his whole family. the pain and grief he had been suffering all these 12 years seemed renewed and fresh again. He walks to the room he organised and cleaned up for himself and Megha. He drops on the bed and closes his eyes. He's lost. The pain is unbearable, he tightly clutches on to the bedsheets, but in vain, these inanimate things can't absorb his pain.

"Ahemm..."

He opens his eyes and sees someone standing infront of him with a bowl of icecream. He looks up and sees Megha smiling at him, gorgeous as ever with her long open hair.
"Tumne kaha tha naa.. aaj tumhara man kar raha hai? Lo main tumhara favourite flavour leke ayi. "
He gives a weak smile, tries to hide his pain. "Abhi man nahi hai megha."

"Arre!!! Aise kaise man nahi hai!"
She sits down on the bed beside him and takes a bit of icecream on the spoon and prepares to feed him, but he shakes his head, refusing to take a bite.
Megha gives a stern look, the typical 'Mrs. Mirchi Bhatnagar' look. She then pulls his head forward and forces the spoon into his mouth, feeding him the ice cream.

"Umhh!! Megha!"
"Kya??" And she starts giggling as she sees the icecream smeared around his lips. She keeps the bowl aside and wipes the cream off from around his mouth with her fingers. Mohan keeps looking at her with hurt eyes. He feels guilty again for taking a son away for her mother. he feels guilty that he ever came into Megha's life. Had he kept away, megha would never have suffered so much pain. But he could not let Megha know what her Addu had become, he couldn't tell her how Addu even hated his mother. He decided to hide his pain and let Megha be happy for as long as she could, for he knew that their dark days were soon to come.

He raised his finger and signaled Megha to wait. He then took the bowl of ice cream and fed her a scoop. They smiled at each other and turn by turn fed each other the ice cream. Thye tried to make the best of each others company, as they both knew that their problems in life had not yet come to an end.
Mohans sniffs, pulling in his tears," Rimjhim so gayi?'

"haan"

He looks down and sniffs again. He knows he can't hold them any longer. He lays down and puts his head on Megha's lap, and hugs her waist. He sobs, cries his heart out, all the while keeping his grip tight on Megha.

"Arre, Mohan? Kya hua?'
She is scared. She tries to console him, rubs his head and back, and keeps asking what happened.

"I'm sorry Megha. Meri wajah se Addu..."

She realises he's suffering from the guilt again and pulls him up to face her.
"Utho.. meri taraf dekho... Dekho meri taraf!!" She forces him to look at her.
" Meri ankhon mein dekho... Kya tumhe koi shikayat dikhti hai? Khud se bhi zyada bharosa hai mujhe tum par. Tum kabhi kisi ka bura nahi kar sakte. Addu ke gayab hone mein tumhari koi galti nahi thi... Hum dono dhundenge usko is baar... Mil jaega woh... Tum apne aap ko dosh dena band karo. Samjhe??"

But he doesn't respond. he sits as still as a statue. He doesn't know what Addu is planning, what evil thing he's going to do next. He can only hope now that everything get well soon. He could only hope! Megha says again, shaking him this time, "Samjhe!!!??"

He looks into her eyes and nods.

"Ab chalo tumhe bhook lagi hogi. main dinner serve karti hoon."
He grabs her hand when she tries to leave.

"Maine kha liya hai. Woh office... canteen mein kha liya."

Megha sighed, she understood he was lieing, but she said nothing. She knew maybe she would never be able to estimate the pain Mohan was going through.

"Hmm.. Ab biwi ke hath se zyada bahar ka khana acha lagne laga hai?? Aisa nahi chalega keh deti hoon.. kal se agar bahar kha ke bhi aye, toh ghar aake tumhara double dinner karwaungi!!"

He smiled at his Mrs. Bhatnagar who was finally taking charge over him. "Aisa nahi hai Megha"

She now moved a step closer to Mohan and smiled." Acha.. Toh phir kaisa hai??"

She sits down on the bed beside him again. She puts her hand on his face, and gently caresses it. She then moves her hand to his shoulder and slowly takes off his jacket.

"Bharosa rakho Mohan.. Sab bahut Jaldi thik ho jaega."

Mohan takes her hand and holds it tight. he brings it up to his lips and places a little kiss on it.
"Tumhare bharose par bharosa rakh ke main apni puri zindagi bita sakta hoon"

They hold on to each other and their heads touch. Their eyes are closed as they feel each others support. Their love for each other in this moment is never ending. Both of them would do anything to take away the other's pain. And they both embrace each other in a tight hug. tears streak down the corners of both their eyes. This moment could have lasted a lifetime. When they break apart, they wipe each others tears, and caress each other's face. Megha runs a finger through Mohan's curly hair and looks at him through longing eyes. She gently pushes him to lay on the bed, and then she comes down right beside him and faces him.

"Bahot mushkilo ke baad tum mujhe wapas mile ho Mohan, main tumhe phir nahi khona chahti. Is baar toh jee hi nahi paungi tumse door hoke."

Mohan puts a finger to her lips. "Marne ki baat abhi mat karo Megha. Main kahin nahi ja raha tumhe chod ke. Main humesha tumhare sath hoon."

Megha moves closer to him, a chill passes through their bodies as they come closer to each other for the first time in so many years. She clutches on to his shirt and puts her head on his chest. He embraces her in his arms and puts a hand on her head. He then puts a gentle kiss there and closes his eyes. They both fall asleep, in the safety of each others arms, their moment of bliss may be short lived yet, it is ever lasting.

The next morning Megha is serving Mohan breakfast and in comes Malti ji...
"MOHAN BHATNAGAR!!"

Do comment... I was going to post this before todays epi... but i got late... On seeing today's episode and the precap.. i was completely moved to tears..😭😭😭



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_SilentSoul_ thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sigh...this is heartbreakingly beautiful ! I am having tears in my eyes :'(
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is so touching & so beautiful. thier pain is unfathomable.
cant tell this was ur 1st OS


šŸ‘ pls write more

on a lighter note - thank god RJ didn't interrupt this time šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow.. Perfect..!! Such an amazing OS..! I am moved.. Wd have loved to see such a sequence in the show as well..!! Rather, was expecting something close to this.. But addu ruined it badly..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -MohanKiMeera-

Sigh...this is heartbreakingly beautiful ! I am having tears in my eyes :'(


😊 NBT mein they always used to give something very beautiful between MM before any danger befell on themšŸ˜† like in ssn1-- "Hum sath honge na Mohan?"😭 so this time also CVs should have given something.. their separation shown shown in the precap makes me wish even more that there was a scene like this betwn MM before the judai😭😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww cheer up and write another beautiful OS like this... Write a scene of MM when Megha meets Mohan in lockup :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -MohanKiMeera-

Aww cheer up and write another beautiful OS like this... Write a scene of MM when Megha meets Mohan in lockup :(


😭😭 i can't think of any dialogues between them at that time... Pehle toh the Idea of seeing MOHAN Bhatnagar behind lockup is killing me😭 what wil happen to RJ??? will those media duffers also reach mohan's official house???😔😔

Meghaaa!!! bechari kitna kuch sambhalegi our superwoman

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I can't imagine it either or else I myself would have written something by now! Anyways do try to pen down something, kay?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: champ07

wow.. Perfect..!! Such an amazing OS..! I am moved.. Wd have loved to see such a sequence in the show as well..!! Rather, was expecting something close to this.. But addu ruined it badly..!


yep addu ruined it badly!!!😔😔 he's become a mad revengeršŸ˜†šŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -MohanKiMeera-

I can't imagine it either or else I myself would have written something by now! Anyways do try to pen down something, kay?

okies... i'm putttin on my thinkin cap lets seešŸ˜ƒšŸ˜†

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