~Aur ek baar jo maine commitment karli~ An AsYa OS

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Zoya sat down with a thud on her desk as she cupped her cheeks in her hands. A Heavy pout played on lips while deep furrowed lines creased all over her forehead as they gathered together to knot a cross.

Zoya shook her head in denial as she rejected whatever popped up into her head. She scanned the files and the papers kept neatly in an orderly manner at Asad's desk with an eye of resentment. Something caught her eye. It was the newspaper on the rack where she could see the lavishly glittering poster of WANTED2 . Zoya now stood up with a new determination and held her head high and breathed in sharply. "Aur ek baar jo maine commitment karli toh phir main apni bhi nahi sunti!' Zoya hissed as she clasped her hands in the Bond way.

She brushed the lock of hair, which fell on her face, away, like Asad did, sharply with her fingers, untangling them in process, and took long strides to across the Corridor to the Conference Room, stomping into it. Zoya barged into the Conference Room yelling at the top of her voice 'What do you think of yourself Mr Khan?'

Everyone turned their faces around at her. Prasad and Julia bit their lips to prevent themselves from the sudden fit of laughter. Ritika whispered to Akash 'Abb kya hoga?' Prasad replied 'Ziili-i-Ilahi deewar mein chunwa diye jayengey! 100rs ki lagi shart!' All of them looked at Asad who had his eyes popped out of the sockets. Color had drained from his face. Julia elbowed Ritika, 'Abb hamara kya hoga? Jahanpana toh Duck pe Out hogaye!'

'W - W- Whaat - What is wrong with you Miss Farooqi!? How many times will I tell you to knock the door before you barge in?' Asad yelled in the same fury as Zoya's just to mask the fact that he was taken by surprise.

Akash said 'Abb yea raha Jahanapana ka Sixer!' Julia slumped back into her chair and said 'Bahut lame tha!' 'Ap se yea umeed naa thi Jahanpana!' Ritika sighed and Ritika shook her head in disbelief.

'YOU AND YOUR 'KNOCKING THE DOOR' CAN ROT IN HELL DO YOU GET THAT? Aur aur aur kya naam hai apka? Haan Singhaniya Constructions, ya phir whatever! YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND A SIMPLE THING? WE DON'T WANT SUPPLIES FROM YOU! DON'T want ka matlab shudhya hindi mein hai NAHI CHAHIYEH! Bilkul nahi chahiyeh! Appko hindi samjh mein nahi aati?" Zoya screamed at the poor man in white who was having a deal with Asad.

Zoya's ears went red in anger while Asad yelled at her 'ZOOYAA!'

'ASAD!!! Mujhe bhi chillana aata hai!'

'Ohh teri yea toh bouncer tha!' Prasad said as he ducked his head behind the file.

'Sir jane dijiye naa, bhabhiji mana kar raha hai!' Akash whispered in a very low voice.

'AKAASHH!' Asad hissed under his breath as as Akash, grinned a sorry.

Asad pinched the bridge of his nose and counted backwards from 10. He excused himself and went to a furious Zoya who was standing nearby the door still.

'Suwwweeetiee! Chale yahan se?!' Asad said feigning a smile, as he hissed while he let his teeth grind with each other, clutching Zoya's elbow.

'Baibee! JEE NAAHHIII' Zoya's voice was dipped in sarcasm, as she fidgeted in Asad's strong grip.

Asad pursed his lips and said 'KYYUUNN?'

Zoya replied in a baby tone. 'Apne promise kya tha ki ap hume ghoomne le jayengey!'

'Le jaunga meri Ammi, ek baar free toh hone do!' Asad literary begged.

'YEHI TOH SUNNTI AARAHI HOON MAIN PICHLE 3 MAHINO SE KI LE JAUNGA LE JAUNGA LE JAUNGA! Kab lekar gaye aap? Apko aaj hi chalana hoga Aj aur Issi WAQT! Bus keh diya so keh diya' Zoya pouted as she shifted on her toes.

'Allah! Miyaa! Mere sath hi kyun?' Asad pleaded at Almighty.

'Kuch kaha apne?'

'Nahi ji bilkul nahi!'

'Toh hum jaa rahe hai, hai naa?' Zoya's eyes beamed with hope.

Asad faintly smiled looking at his princess smiling ever so adorably. He knew his work did not let him permit to spend enough time with his Zoya, and she has been waiting eagerly for him. And he felt guilty about it. He had promised they would spend time together and he would not disappoint her as her husband. But he ended up hurting her, unknowingly. She never let him know that she had been waiting for him, but then her small adorable outbursts of him ignoring her or not spending enough time with her told an other story. He had planned to make up for it by taking her on a trip to abroad but then maybe she just wanted to spend some quality time with him only. He gave her one of his a half of a smile and said 'Prasad will you please drop Maam at home' Cause we have reservations at 8pm!'

Zoya beamed like a 5 year old girl who was just surprised by her favorite candy. Flashing Asad one of her patent dimpled smiles Zoya mouthed a thank you and waved a bye as she left. Asad smiled an assuring one and saw her off the corridor. Once Zoya left Asad heaved a Relief.

'Toh kaun jeeta?' Akash smiled naughtily as he winked at Julia.

'Jahanpana Tussi Great ho Taufa Qubool Karo!' Three of them bowed down at His Majesty's Mighty Colossal Reverent Self.

Asad eyes them a glare and the three of them straightened themselves at their seats.

'So!' Asad said has he rubbed his palms together in excitement 'Shall we resume the presentation?'He greeted the shell shocked client again.

'Who was she? And why was she behaving so strange?' The client managed to speak up after sometime.

Asad smiled as his eyes glistering up. 'So you want to know who that lady was?'

'Yes! Its INSANE to ruin such important conferences like these.'

Asad cleared his voice and shut the file up. He stood up and said in a clear roaring voice. 'She is Mrs. Zoya Asad Ahmed Khan. My Lawfully Wedded wife, who has all rights to barge into my every single meeting and ruin it. And by the way yes! She was right; you guys are not worth the deal. Thank you! And Julia, inhe chai pani pilao! Bichare kafi tensed lag rahe hai!' Asad smirked as he left for the day.


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Characters in play : Prasad Julia Kritika and Akash : they are employees of Dilshad Constructions. 😊

Look who wrote an OS finally 🤣

Wanted to write something hence wrote. End Product : Totally RANDOM. 😆

I know I can do a Lot better, but then abb issey se hi khush raho bacchoo cause kisi mahan inssan ne kaha hai Something is better than NOTHING 🤣

So do I not deserve a LIKE and a tiny COMMENT ? See I didn't make you cry *puppy face*😆 🤣

❤️ Ankie

For More Works of Fictions Do Have A Look At My Index 😳

A friendly reminder, KARAN SINGH GROVER will always be MY ASAD AHMED KHAN and SURBHI JYOTI as ZOYA FAROOQI in my FICTIONS, rest is up to you readers, You can imagine anybody my leads to be as, I assure you I will not have a problem with that. 😳
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WaqtZaya thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Kaafi LAME hai hai naa? 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi Ankie,

After a long time.. you have posted other than the daily analysis.. Good.. but your writing skills are much much better than this.. This is good .. but you can do wonders with your imaginations.. Tabeez has been the best so far...

Regards.
Devika
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res :P

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Aawww... Ek dum cute sa OS tha !! Bilkul aapki tarah ! :)
Really loved it !!

AsYa were sooo adorable all through the OS ! N I completely loveeddd them ! :D

At first, I didn't believe that you wrote an OS...that too completely out of the blue ! It was an awesome read..beautifully written and thanks for that !! ;)

The new characters were hillarious too !

Love ya...🤗
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oh teri melo ko pm kyun nahi mila??? main toh kucch hun hi nahi! ok scratch that, you dedicated it to me, meli pyaalli badi ammi Thaaank wala you ^__^

coming to the OS! yeh kya tha aur kyun tha?? matlab mainu samajh nahi aaya! zoya ke paas konsa wanted article tha? woh konse supplies ki baat kar rahi thi?? phir end main yeh log sweeettuuu aur baibeee pe kaise pohoch gaye?? exshplain pleaajjj

ps - comment isse kehte hai! chal ab se tu bhi proper comment dena chalu kar 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This was so adorable. 😳 Really enjoyed reading! Thank you Ankie 🤗

This reminds me of the good old days Kab aayenge vo ache din show mein wapis.

Only when Tanwitch is exposed. 😆

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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Kaafi LAME hai hai naa? 🤣 🤣

tera OS lame nahi ho toh forum main pralaye aa jayega 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its so sweet... wud actually love it if it is incorporated in QH story in future after marriage...

nd yes u made me laugh nd made my day... was feelin a little low

Thank You Ankie for bringing a smile on my face... <3
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Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

Hi Ankie,


After a long time.. you have posted other than the daily analysis.. Good.. but your writing skills are much much better than this.. This is good .. but you can do wonders with your imaginations.. Tabeez has been the best so far...

Regards.
Devika


Tabeez? it was something which i LOVED it write. I had tortured myself for writing it down. 😆 It HAD to be a Marvel, cause i wanted it to be. 🤣 😆 😆

That was SOMETHING. 😳

Thank you. i am off my own block 😕. Want to write but cannot write . But i hope i soon can 😆 😆 This was just to come out of the block. 😳 😆

Thank you once again. 🤗
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he kept his promise to take her out
absolutely wonderful, light and frothy update..
loved the way she bullied. .
and he let himself get bullied..
and I thought kya isah bhi ho sakta hai..

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