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jayanthi

@jayprabu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#261

Amazing update. Their date was so romantic. Seems next part will be more interesting. Continue soon.

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Surish

@Surish

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#263

Superb update!!! ⭐️ Loved their first date .. Romantic ❤️.. The song and dance part was too good.. OMG they are going to stay in a HM suite!!! 😳 Can't wait to read the next part.. Please continue soon.. Lovely update ❤️❤️.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 😊

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ksh_n

@ksh_n

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Posted: 12 years ago

#264

whn v'l u updteee?????????/😭
Kabse wait kar rahin hun yaaar??
plzzz updte

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saathana

@saathana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#265

Hey i'm saathana.i have read your updates so far and sorry but i have not yet commented.sorry for not commenting.Actually i liked your ff a lot.It is a very different concept compared to the serial.Loved the concept very much.Arranged marriage for both virat and manvi who have barely met each other.I think virat loves manvi secretly from childhood itself.Loved their first night part where virat's lips slightly brushed manvi's and her marks on his back ,his marks on her back.These scenes were so cute.Loved the way how virat covered manvi in his arms due to her fear on thunder.Loved how the elders teased them and the way they both reacted for that.The most hilarious part was how manvi told virat that he kissed her accidentally and the way he got shock was funny.Their morning romance part was superb.The most emotional scene was how virat announced his decision for going to mumbai to his family and the way manvi was hurt was heart touching.Loved their first date concept,their dance,virat's protectiveness towards manvi when some men viewed her.Awesome part.add me to your buddy list.thank you for giving us such a wonderful ff.continue soon 😊

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Pyaasi Chudail

@PyaasiChudail69

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#266

thanks for all ur comments and likes guyz now time for teasing evil teaser😈

Teaser

''Going away from her was not easy it was very difficult she was my need my partner and i can't leave without her...and i don't wanted to leave...but still i have too...i still remember her sad face and tears in her eyes everyone came to see off me but she didn't came but i know she was looking at me from balcony i can c her i can feel...isn't it weird how attach m with her in this short period of time''...but i left...i left her behind...

so how was it 🤣 jhoote chappal everything is welcome xcept tomato i don't like tomato and eggs i don't like their smell🤣

so c u guyz in the update then🤣

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shaimah

@shaimah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#267

Teaser looks amazing
Excited for the update
Continue very soon!!

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#268

precap padhke mujhe rona araha hai very emotional precap ...
i just hope kuch aisa ho jaye that manvi also goes with virat to mumbai... 😊
next part updare sooon 😊