OS: A Father's Last Wish ft. Arjun Purvi - Page 2

This is tbe first story I have ever read for PR. It was absolutely amazing. I was crying from the first paragraph. Just beautiful. Thank you for writing and sharing.

Loved it Easha..Its beautiful...👏

Okay I cried..i cried after reading this eshu..
So emotional..this was so perfect..Arjun's state when he came to know DK's got very less time,Purvi's concern for her Arjun,DK's last words to his Son,Manav's guilt..each and everything was just perfectt *MD ishtyle*
DK's last words to his son were very emotional..(i always love to watch DK Arjun scenes..and I just couldnt control myself when I read this part)
the way Arjun cried and his purvi consoled him *heart touching*
LOVED this OS eshu..oh wait..this aint an OS..this is a Masterpiece..each and every part is brilliantly written..👏👏
Love u Eshu..🤗🤗
and Thankyou :)

Eashu👏👏 Take a bow my friend.

That was a spectacular OS. That left me with many emotions, it tugged my heart quit a few times whilst reading.

The agony of Arjun watching his dad go through his last moments was so real that I felt as though I was watching Dk and Arjun right infront of my eyes.

Purvi's prayer for Arjun was kindly portrayed no matter what happens in her life she has never held a grudge at God but she takes like as it comes and prays for others... Sadly God didn't listen to her this time but he listened to a part he didn't leave Arjun all alone, he had Purvi by his side.

I loved the addition at the end of Archana and Manav watching the last interactions between Arjun- Dk- Purvi, and the regret Manav had of never being that 2nd ideal dad that Arjun envisioned.

I'm so sorry Eash that Ive been horrible in commenting on all of your writings. I've been so very busy lately. I promise I will eventually comment and give my feedback on all of them. :)

Nice job!

That was incredible & touching! Thanks for making me cry eshu😭
exceptionally well written👏

omg the response to this OS !! :o 🤗 Thank you !

Beautiful writing my dear. I read it in haste yesterday but came back to read it one more time.

Your story is beautiful! Made me teary eyed 😭👏