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BlueMystique

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Posted: 12 years ago

#421

Originally posted by: arshi21
Akash Babua grew a spine? What the-?

A pleasant surprise indeed! But..will you write a second part to this one? I wish for a happy ending you know!

:(

I do know that Arnav was an A grade jerk to Khushi...but still..

Happy ending? Please? :'')

Thank you for the comment!

And I am sorry, this is just a one shot.

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BlueMystique

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Posted: 12 years ago

#422

Originally posted by: EmpressSarayu
Akash with a spine. Wonders of the world I think! :p

Is there a sequel to this one?

Thanks :) And no, it's a one shot.

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BlueMystique

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Posted: 12 years ago

#423

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EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#424

Hum aa gaye!

LOL, now that was a loop I really hadn't thought of!

I liked how you made Arnav do all these things to her, fits right in with the challenges that always simmered in the air between them!

Calling her endearments and disrupting her sleep to um...talk, sexy stuff there!

I could just imagine Khushi's face as it turned 50 shades of red, and his smirk as he saw the effect he was having on her.

And the family catches on too, hilarious!

I loved that note at the end, where she finds out what's really been going on.

This was a fun read, Ridz, and I can't believe how effortlessly you manage to do that while tying up all kinds of loops as well!

P.S: I can't remember anything else from Khushi's list, I think you've got them all.

Edited by EXPELLIARMUS - 12 years ago

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Lakshmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#425

LOL, this was something really unexpected.
Oh boy, Arnav really did all that? I could imagine Khushi being all red. Way to go ASR. It was truely fun reading this one.

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aarrsshhii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#426

Haha...really liked that one...it was totally a fun read... really really enjoyed the playful side of arnav... way to go BM!!

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rakhee12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#427

Superb update... Arnav definitely trying to rile khushi..and giving her a taste of her own medicine

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crazy-ash

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Posted: 12 years ago

#428

Hahaha!! This was fantastic!
And was amusing and funny and lovely!! 😆

i would like to suggest a loop closure...
Arnav in the show never really the brought the truth of their marriage in front of the whole family...he just told it to his di and nani...so i just wished if u would write out a perfect apology and make arnav accept his mistake in front of khushi's and his family, so that every one stop blaming khushi for everything!!

I hope u will think abt it...

Thanx for the happy reading moment!