IPKKND:Closing The Loops * Thread 2 Pg 144 * - Page 42

Originally posted by: rakhee12

thankfully Akash has a spine and standing up for his wife and Bhabi... Towards the end the Akash in the serial had started to get on my nerves.. Also Khushi here seems to have more spunk and giving back to Arnav

Originally posted by: EXPELLIARMUS

Um...saw da page number nd cud not resist,ya? 😆

Originally posted by: yappingduck

awesome..loved it
keep writing..
loving the way the story is shaping up..

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi

very well written..simply beautiful...thank you for the PM...😊

Originally posted by: Amiarisme

i was on my bed reading it when i read tht aakash scene on his very first dialogue i felt like jumping up and clap for aakash as well as you. if they had actually potrayed something where aakash had a spine trust me i would have felt like hugging him.

he had potential and he shld have had potential, he was a true raizada after all, yet he was nothing more thn a prop in the show. cvs ruined him, even lavanya and sheetals role had more potential and worth thn aakash.

so thankyou for justifying the presence of aakash in the show, thankyou for showing that a guy who had the heart to love had the guts to value his relationship and fight for it.

as for arnav manhandling khushi i always felt agar bachpan mein he ike rakh k dia hota na is k amma ya di ne esay to ajj thora insan ka bacha hota yeah.

Originally posted by: shree10

Ridz, Simply Loved it ! 👏

And that Akash with spine... what do I say? Brilliant!!

Originally posted by: P4rveen12

First of all I want to say is that I did not like it, I simply loved loved it.

The "confrontation" loop closing was brilliant, intense, heart breaking and absolutely mind blowing.

A brilliant and fantastic read, written perfectly.

Love the fact you merged in two scenes into one story, they complimented each other so well.

Loved the part where Khushi finally stood up to Arnav and confronted him and actually threatened him, just superb.

Loved Akash he actually had the guts to be a man and tell Arnav that he would not leave his wife and loves her, so proud of him that he actually showed the proof to Arnav.

A perfect ending, so glad Khushi left him, I so wanted this in the serial especially after the comment he made regarding her parents and making a accusation for having a affair is disgusting enough.

Loved the loop closure, eager to read more.

Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx

Originally posted by: Krani

Oh my effing god.

For the confrontation loop = LOVELOVELOVELOVE.

Can I somehow kidnap the CVs and force them to read this, build a time-machine and send them back in time so they can fix the show they spoilt?

Or better yet, build a time machine, go back in time, threaten Gul to hire you as the writer, and then watch the awesome show...

Or I could make a petition? ;) Hahaha

But seriously, loving these loop series! :D

~K

Originally posted by: sruthick

Beautiful update...:)
Finally he lost evrythng...

Originally posted by: A_BA

So glad you chose the Heer Ranjha scene...that was Arnav at one of his lowest points, I think...I'm so glad that you made Khushi stand up for herself and tell him that his mandhandling won't be accepted. I can't believe they made her put with all that on the show...

Really liked the character of Akash you provided...in the show, he was basically useless.

Another great way of closing a couple of loops!