IPKKND:Closing The Loops * Thread 2 Pg 144 * - Page 41

Originally posted by: rulama

That was an interesting closure for two loops as you have out it.

Akash coming out for his family life and standing against Arnav without being rude.

Loved the way you have written it.

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

I loved it, love that Payal and Akash are so perfectly in tune and Akash believes his wife and trusts her and respects her...and will be a puppet in his brothers hand...I love that she shares the truth with Akaash!

Seriously, waiting for Arnav for the jaimala and throwing his wife out because he says so are two different things...I love how he comes and tells Arnav that he will do no such thing!

I love Khushi...she is strong and determined ...and will not take crap...even if its Arnav Singh Raizada...!

She is no doormat and will not be pushed over., I loved how she realises why he marries her...her emotions...you are truly gifted!

Loved his remorse and regret ...you wrote that so well, really...amazing!

Originally posted by: reshkn

loved it..

this is what I call a confrontation..something we never got to see..and Akash standing up against arnav..perfect closure..akash and payal never got to know they were used as bait the whole time...

and kushi confronting arnav..i wanted that ..she doesnt always have to live for others..he had wronged her..so he doesnt deserve her forgiveness nor a single tear drop of hers...

beautiful..:) thx for the pm😊😊😊

Originally posted by: aarrsshhii

Perfect... big applause to u for writing so many things I wish I had seen in the show.. the guilty remorseful arnav who knows and accepts his mistakes and khushi who fights back him without doing all those silly stuff...and yes a payal who would have told the truth to akash and an akash who is not spineless!!! Ipk never really got a proper closure n instead they dragged irrelevant plots inside..no one really got what they really deserved...

Originally posted by: RandomGirl

i would like to read a story where Arnav regrets calling her characterless..

Originally posted by: RandomGirl

i would like to read a story where Arnav regrets calling her characterless..

Originally posted by: AneesahJabeen

Omg wow
Left me speechless again bbe!
Loving the strong and determined khushii

Yaaay for akaaash standing up
If only that happened in the show :(

Looking forward to mre

Originally posted by: Nooro

Beautiful...
I loved it...
Amazing loop closure...Really I wanted Akash to show this attitude...how can Arnav babua think dat he can make Akash (who is head over heels in love with Payal) to divorce his wife...Nice one...
N yyesss u gave us update on friday..After these heavy ones I mean Heartbeat part 1 n 2 n confrontation,,can we get a light one...i mean little bit funny type like Khushi returning him his 300 Rupees or Arnav reading her diary...But Depite of all my suggestions,,I m all glad with ur closure loops...they are awesome...keep writing..

Originally posted by: anumadduri

Simply perfect Ridz !!!! You gave Aakash a backbone which I sorely felt was lacking in the show due to its characterization !!! But Ridz , I really wish this was what should have happened in the show . I mean Payal telling Aakash about the snake instead of hiding it , at least to Aakash . Coz of all the people Aakash was the most rational one in the show and he would have at least given some thought to the entire fiasco instead od jumping to conclusions like Arnav .

This Khushi is more strong and brave rather than the doormat she was portrayed . To be honest ASR being ASR and claiming to the " Shatir Dimaag " he should have done the investigation about the snake not Aakash . Glad she left him and he did not have the courage to stop her .