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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: janu_2006

gr8 part,,

cont.sooon

thanks for pm dear..


thaks a lot dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: fantesy

superb part bt m actually why maan was sleeping dere wen he spiked peters drink ?? geet fled wid him n i think maan is innocent...



!!! thaknswaaa😉 😉😉 😉


yep he did so...

well hkeep thinking dearieee 😳 😳 😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rajshree12

Yaar hats off to u..the way u hv created this whole suspense..
Everything is just unpredictable in this ff..

Eagerly waiting to know the truth..


thaks a lot dear!!

yep evrything is just unpredicatble in this FF!!!

yes last part coming up now! 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Am really very disappointed with the drastic drop in ;likes??? what is the issue guys😡.. i believe the exams are over too ??? still y this 😭😭😭??? ve seen so many of my ex readers no longer commenting on my threads, well ive never cribbed about this, but today felt like saying so😭😭😭... I hope ppl give me back honest reviews on this...cos this is the LASTPART of this FF 😭 😭 😭 😭

PART 20 :

She stared back at him and then narrated the entire incident from the attacks to how finally they got the autopsy done and how the reports shocked them and how they went over to Peter's house late night😡, and also confessed how shocked she was finding maan there, finally they had concluded that , irritated with the patient Maan had finally used his Long researched drug on Patricia😡 , which killed her , it aw as a fast poison and killed her within hours, she was sobbing while she narrated the whole story😭😭😭, Maan was shocked he didn't know how to respond, he didn't know how much she has misunderstood but guessing the position she was in anyone would have guessed the same, they arrived at a their stop and took a cab and she drove to the resort all silence, he didn't know what to tell her.

After minutes of silence he spoke, if u think a m a Murdered why did u kidnap me Geet😉, why are you taking me far from the reality😡, far from the court and its judgement ??? Why cant you let the Court act upon me,. She immediately applied the breaks and hugged him, kissing every inch of his face☺️, and licking them, cos I love you Maan❤️, I love you since the day my eyes saw you❤️, I love you like forever❤️, for eternity❤️, thought the results prove you are a murders my heart beats for you, and this heart knows no betrayal,❤️, this heart tells me that let alone Negligence you cant do one wrong thing in life❤️ and this Murder stuff is completely impossible keeping u in picture❤️. He was awed at her confession and at her, he sealed this moment by sealing her lips, the kiss was soft at first , she was not giving in, he licked her lower lip, and then gained entry, he kissed passionately, she was loosing herself she hold him tight ,lest she shudder he sensed her passion and let go off immediately😳😳😳, he needed to confess know, he needed to break his Hippocratic Oath to prove her trust on him and then as she drove he spoke.😉

"Geet since you know the half story you investigated I think you deserve the every right to know the other half too, uou knew about my cancer drug, it was during one of my trips in hunting with Peter that we found a snake, a new species😡 , Peter was interested in dissecting it and I helped him, you know Peter is damm adventurous and while dissecting we found some strange toxins, I took them back to my lab for research and after few weeks stumbled upon the anti cancer drug, this tablet would have phenomenol effects, the only thing was it could not be given generalized but locally to the cancer cells😲, if it was given to all the cells , then the patient would collapse, after y invention I had discussed the issue with Peter and Patricia, Peter was very helpful in getting me more snake venom for my research but one day Patricia came to me with a request."😡

The car finally stopped and they entered the resort. They walked and settled on the couch in the drawing room, after placing lunch orders, He continued, " She was fed up living with all her ailments , she was fed up with life and pleaded me to poison her ,. To end her sufferings 🤢, I rejected outright , but she was persistent, evrytime she would plead endlessly, and then finally we decided we would move the case to the court in request of Mercy Killing😡, I used to carry my drug everywhere in fear of losing it or someone using my invention, the day I made House call tat day too I carried my kit, and I think that day Patricia changed the bottles 😭, and unknowingly instead of injecting her medicines I had injected the poison, it started working in hours and by evening when I saw her she was sinking, when everyone told about heart attack I couldn't believe cos I being her Dr know everything, and yday during Trial when Jasmine told , that Patricia was not responding o Glucose I summed it up, the drug I had invented acts against glucose bringing down body sugar levels and ultimately depriving energy and killing, to confirm this I went to meet Peter late night nad spiekd his drinks but instead I think I drank the spiked drinks. And then the rest you knw, But what I still cant understand is the attacks on Pinky and you, and then the fights with Nadal, that part is confusing me. Geet chuckled and told, that she did a background research when she found out that maan must have killed Patricia😡, when they had seen Nada's history it was clear he had never won nay Medical trial, his boss would fire him off if he lost this case, so to avoid messing up things, Nadal had hired ppl to see that Autopsy was never done😡! Maaneet chuckled and cudled to each other. He kissed her once again 😳and slowly unbuttoned her shirt😆 , she gave in completely and they made love to each other first time under the witness of broad daylight'

EPILOGUE : 6 MONTHS LATER!

A 6 month pregnant Geet was glued to the Television , Tears dripping from her eyes, Maan walked the Podium to receive Annuall Prize for Medical Research for his breakthrough research on Cancer Cureness👏. He acknowledged Peter for his support in getting him access to the snake venom, and Geet for standing through al lthe thick phase of his life😳, he joked on to narrate his Medical Negligence Trial, how he ran away wit his sweetheart before the verdict was announced and how their love finally being confessed and later how they had submitted themselves to State Police and confessed the whole truth😆, how it took another 1 month for the Court to look upon the case and how Maan was left without any case on himself. His speech reminded her of how Fred had stood by them during the 1 month how supportive he had been, and heart broken though but he moved on to let the two love birds live their fairy tale life!☺️

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Thank You Guys, for all the immense support and love you showered on this FF🤗! but am not the only person who should take the credits for, this story is inspired from a novel I read back many years😭, Robin Cook's CRISIS! When I finished the book, I hated it for the bad ending🤢, Being a Dr myself, I couldn't accept it the Dr was indeed a Murderer it shook me so much and if given a chance I wanted to reframe the end😳, I adapted the story according to my wishes! I took the theme ana have modified and given my version of Medical Negligence😳 and Ended the story with a positive note😆. The story was not based on a couple but the helping forensic expert also was guy, and the Dr accused also a gu😡y, I changed the characters to fit MaanEet into it, the main plot was same but the story is different and the scenes are different and adapted as per the situation and the end is very very very far from what Cook had written😭😭😭! I really feel light now that I finished this bad ending with a happy ending😳😳😳! And thanks to you all for patiently reading this story and would suggest you read Crisis too incase you are prepared for a bad ending🤢🤢🤢! Robin Cook is one of my fav authors, he writes medical mysteries and ve read all his 40 novels during my school and initial college days. I suggest you ppl to try it in case you love reading suspense and mystery stories!😆😆😆

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Edited by ainaGURTI - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
woaaahhh

Maaalll
I lubbb uuu
Hahahahahaha

Happyyy ending

Too good patli ...u din disappoint me
Lol


Confession
Ahaaann
And then kisssiiieee
Oooh la laaa

And then love making
Bade fast hai yaar
Thodi derr main hi sab kuch kar liyaaa
Roflll

Pregnant
Ufff ... Too much to handle re

gonna miss this story maaalll
Muuaaah
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow happy ending...maan is freed frm th case thn got awrd also...thy kissed frst tim n aftr confessing thy made lv also...nw thy r going to b parents...lovely...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update loving and now what is next
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Posted: 12 years ago
A happy ending...i was worried maybe maan wont be proved unnocent...
Loved the ypdate...running away frm the court...
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Posted: 12 years ago






geet confessed her love...dats gr8...

n wonderful ending...

loved it very much...








thank u very much fr d lovely story...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt one...

continue soon plz...









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Posted: 12 years ago
omg dat was the case
loved it
awesome
thanks for this unusual story

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