Arhi FF (Collab):Dire Consequences Thread 2 Pg 141

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Posted: 12 years ago

#351

This was good. Khushi is disappointed, hurt and what not.
She doesn't know what to think, what to feel. I wonder why she just doesn't get angry..

Anyway, looking forward to the next one

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asthagarwal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#352

No words, Just a 👏 U r an amazing writer Nidhi...

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reallyhappy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#353

She's keepin distance..

N wnts him 2 giv her space n tym..!!

He wants 2 make evrythin fyn n normal..

Bt..z Arnav at fault newhr?

She thinks he's Aarav's dad..

Wen he's nt..

He has accepted it..juz coz Khushi z sayin so..

Bt he knows he's nt Aarav's dad..n he knows Sheetal z playin..

Whr z he at fault..dt she's behaving wid him dis way.?

Accpt dt she's hurt..diappointed..bt yr..she has 2 trust him..

She cnt juz think he's wrong./.

Arnav wants 2 go out on a dinner..she shud hav accepted..

Thoda mood fresh ho jaata..

Bt.she's holdin evrythin..!!

Loved it.:)

Thnx.:)

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arshi_lover1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#354

Wow what a emotional scene! Loved it plzzz continue!

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cocoamob

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Posted: 12 years ago

#355

Glad to see Khushi not just accepting Arnav's invitation to go out or behave like everything is ok when it is not! Of course she is angry, confused and hurt. If there is one thing a woman cannot tolerate is another woman in her husband's life - and even though it is in the past, the fact that he had a child with her is painful!

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Shifa Khan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#356

U all r amazing writers''''👏

I can manage this to say~~~

Otherwise,I can't bear an experienced man around a pure woman !!!

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henamani

@henamani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#357

first of all, all of u are some of my fav authors so this collaboration is welcome

this is a mature handling of the sheetal track. the way she was trying to wedge bw arshi; i wished the screen arnav would have been able to read the signs and give some security to khushi; also ur arnav's pain is so understandable and khushi, for once, thinks abt herself

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ssyahoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#358

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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#359

Nids

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Great job Sami! I knew you would do a wonderful job of picking up where I left off.

I just loved how panicked Arnav got when he overheard Khushi's conversation with Buaji. He needs to understand how difficult this is for her and she truly is trying her best. If she said she's not going to leave him then he needs to believe that.

I loved the way you wrote Sheetal and Arnav's conversation, he's asking all the right questions.

I can't wait for the next part!!

Love working on this with all three of you!! 🤗

Edited by Nidsubh007 - 12 years ago

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A_BA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#360

Res!

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Sorry for the late response, but Sami, you did a great job. As usual, your writing is great and the way you have moved the direction of the story is perfect!

I'm glad Arnav is finally using his shaatir dimaag and asking the right questions to Sheetal.

The poor guy is still so insecure about Khushi leaving him...can't believe he jumped to conclusions so soon even though Khushi has been reassuring him that she won't be leaving him.

It's my turn again, yikes!!! Thanks for writing a great chapter for me to pick up from!

Edited by A_BA - 12 years ago