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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello my fed up swaronians...well just to lift your moods (hopefully ) I wrote a poem on the swaron situation...newly in love and the fresh phase in their relationship


I can still feel you


I can still feel you
Are you sure you're not around?
Your eyes pierce me through and through
In them It's heaven I found


I wait for you with bated breath
I see you when your not here
On you my heart is set
With you there is no fear


They say its insanity
But i say its simply love
It shines with purity
brighter than the stars above


I can still feel you
Are you sure you're not around?
Your still here no matter what I do
It doesn't matter because I can still feel you



I hope you guys like it...please hit like and comment I would love to know what you guys think 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice Poem Angel ! Kinda Apting The SwaRon Situation Currently !
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Very cute poem. A pleasure to read it!
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Originally posted by: TaaReyD3_Neha

Nice Poem Angel ! Kinda Apting The SwaRon Situation Currently !

Thank you neha
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Originally posted by: shivheena123

Very cute poem. A pleasure to read it!

Thanks 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Such A beautiful Poem Dear ! Really Loved IT. The Emotions Could be felt fully through the poem. Really Nice. My favorite Stanza was
They say its insanity
But i say its simply love
It shines with purity
brighter than the stars above
Loved it.
Love,MiNi.

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