*MY INNOCENT SURRENDER* #2 pt 17pg 111 17/7/2013 - Page 48

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Posted: 12 years ago


patience hi to nahin ho rahi hain😆😆😆😆

ab or kitni der😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART - 16

WHAT IS LOVE? A kind of a madness, weakness, passion or need?

Maan now is completely aware of her feelings and want her back in his life at any cost. Less he bother what she wants and how much he hurts her. He only knew that he loves her and now she had to commit it too.Maan once again went to apolozise bt she doesnt hear him and went off from there. She get irritates with his stubborn behaviour. Geet was not in mood of forgiving him.The wound he gave her is very deep.

Maan now was pretty much determined that today she will be in KM. He promised it to himself and found a suitable way to bring her back. In evening when Ridzi drop Geet to her mansion,she noticed Maan's BMW there. Geet turned stunned and angry both. She went inside hurridly. Maan was sitting in her father's room. Both were sharing a cup of tea when she arrived.

'lo here is she.',her father confirmed with a smile. Maan slanted his neck and wincked to her.

Geet made a bad face and get closer to her father.'what are you doing here?',she asked rudely.

'Geet ye kya tarika hai baat karne ka?',her father roared on her.

'its ok papa.Abi Geet ko meri yaad nai ati to isme uski galti thodi na hai',he cribbed innocently.

'Geet get ready beta.',he told her and she saw him amusingly. 'apne ghar jane k liye. Everyone is waiting for you there.',Her father confirmed.

'dad i m not going anywhere.',she said stiffly.

'Geet dont worry,dad is fine now. Maine doc se b confirm kar liya hai.',Maan said with a grinn.

'beta i m f9 now. After marriage your responsibilities are for them only.',he trying to convienced her.

'lekin dad?',she trying to convienced her father but he only taking Maan's side.

'chale Geet?',he said mischeviously.

'main kai nai ja rai understood.',she denied throughly.

'Geet its my order.or waise b yaha daima hai mera khyal rakhne ko. Go and get ready fast.',he scold her and she patted her foot angrily. She moved to her room. Maan made an excuse and went behind her.

He entred in her room and locked it. Geet glare him furiously.

'ye konsa naya drama hai?',she asked angrily.

'kmall hai Geet you are behaving so dumb sometimes. Ek pati apni patni ko lene aaya hai isme nautanki kya hai.',he told casually having no regreat and agony at all.

'pati patni? Kis rishte ki bat kar rae ho mr MSK? Wo sab usi dinn khtam ho gaya jab un papers pe sign kiye the.',she remind him of that divorcee papers.

'ofcourse not baby. Because hum dono k alwa ye bat or koi nai janta and right now ur father is not in a conddition ki tum ye sab reveal karo. So its better you must behave like a good wife and come along with me',Maan's domiance forced her to agree with him she knew about her father's condition and she wont take chance with that,but at the same time she wont even gave her self respect. Going again to that house and live with a person who doesnt care for her feelings and hurt her dignity at every step.

'i am not coming with u',she denied again.

Maan steps towards her and grabbed her tiny waist in his arms. He pulled her to his hard frame. Geet felt strange shudder in her body. Her every fibre reacts unbelivebly. Maan's warm breath against her deligate petals sending her ripples of sensation. Though they touched each other before sevral times on almost everywhere,without bothering. But today it was something different. For the first time Maan's touch teased her to death. Her throat went dry and voice turn mute. Both glancing in each other's eyes. Geet felt mesmerized seeing in his intence eyes and felt weak. His strength and hold make her loosing in him.'why not?',Maan whisper huskily and she turn nump. Gulping her saliva she knocking her sences and shoved him away.

'because i dont wanna share any relation with,not for anyone. Our chapter is over',Geet said frequen settling her hyper breath.

'not for your dad even?',he pinced her weakest nerve. 'ok fine i 'll go and tell him everything.',Maan trying to rule her and he win also.

'no Maan pls dont tell him anything.',she pleads.

'then come with me',Maan commands her.

'what you want?',she asked strongly.

'you and only you. You are my wife and i want you back in my life. Understood. Now dont waste time and come with me.',Maan wanna tell her but it was not the correct time to confessed his feelings.

Geet felt annoued but right now she dont have much choices,but to follow his instructions. Reluctantly she made her mind and came downstairs to left her home. She meet her father and Daima before leaving. Both bless them and they left.

When Maan entres with Geet in KM a wide smile came on all 3 faces. They gave her a warm welcom and felt pleasent to see her back in KM. Sply Parth who missed his girl friend alot. Geet too give a fake smile as she doesnt want to stay here with Maan.

All family members do dinner together after a long time and enjoy alot except Geet. After diner all moved to their rooms.
Unwillingly Geet too moved upstairs. Once she feel so comfortable there. Today the same place seems her most uncomfortable. She went to change and when she came out found Maan laying on the bed. Geet glared him and burst her anger.

'what are you doing here?',Geet asked holding her anger.

'sleeping duffer.',he ans cooly.

'wo mujhe b dikh raha hai u jerk.but why you sleeping here?',Geet fumed more.

'coz this bed is mine idiot',Maan widened his eyes,

'not till i am here. Go and sleep on that couch or somewhere else.',Geet ordered him.

Maan stood up on his knees,resting his hands on his waist and showed his big eyes to her.'no way. Ye mera bed hai or main yao sounga.'he act stubbornly.


Geet too come face to face. She took pillow and threw on couch.'go and sleep there.',she showing him to went off.

Maan took her side pillow and laid down again. Geet made an aww face. She come closer to her and trying to push him away from the bed which not so easy for her. Maan laid stiffly and not slipped even an inch. Geet's anger and frustration raised more and she stood up and went to sleep on couch. Maan stare her and she moved. He get up quickly and open the door. Geet doesnt get what he is upto. Meanwhile Pratham passed by their room and saw Geet sleeping on couch. He knocked and came inside. Both get up seeing him.

'kya hua bachhe yaha kyu so rai hai?',he asked firmly.

'wo bhaiya wo waha pe neend nai aa rai thi so socha yaha so jau.',Geet fumbbles badly finding no ans so lied to him.

'sach bol rai ya firr is bander se jhagda hua hai?',he stared both reading their faces.

'ha batao Geet',Maan grab a chance to tease her. His motive is done and he gave a winning smirk to her.

'nai bhaiya aisi koi baat nai hai'.she confirmed in a low voice.

'to firr bachhe ispe mat so,neck sprain ho jayega.',Pratham ordered and she moved with pillow to their bed. Pratham wished them good night and leave. Geet getting more irritated. Maan knew Pratham take a round before go to sleep that's why he opened the door,so he can saw Geet on couch. Geet laid showing her back to Maan. She coverd herself making proper distance with him. Maan too take the same duvet and turned to another side. Due to which,her portion slipped with Maan. She again snatch and trying to sleep. This time Maan turn uncover,so he too snatch it from Geet side. Both came to fight mode and snatching duvet to their side. Out of their stubborn behaviour both turn together to each other and glared each other.
'tumhara prob kya hai?',Geet asked angrily.

'mera nai tumhara hai.agr tum yai araamse mere paas so jao to ye problem ho hi na.',Maan put all blame on her.

'tumhare sath my foot',Geet said rudely and her muscles turn stiffed.

'fine then do this exercise whole night.',Maan warned her and both again sat up in order to drag duvet to their side. Undoubtly Maan's strength and power is much higher then Geet. He dragged her also with duvet finally and she landed on his rock hard chest.
Both face were just an inches away from each other. She felt warmth of him,which make her valunerable. She trying to get up from him,but Maan not allowing her and held her waist more firmly. Her right hand was also grasp by him. He gazes her hysterical.

'your eyes.'Geet stared him confusingly. 'are so beautiful and deep like you',he added.

Geet's spine stiffled at his confession. She is so confused with Maan's changed and weired behaviour. Few days before he dont even want her in his life and now he act so different. Her head start spinning with his mood swings. Maan's hand start roaming on her back and teased her sences. She too losting hher in his touch and wants more than this. A small groan escape from her mouth. Maan glance her face,reading her mind. Though she wants him too still she had little panic in her eyes. Geet'ss concious mind alerts her and she wriggles for freedom. Seeing her discomfort he leave her. She get up from him and turn instantly to her side. She leave the fight also and slept without taking the duvet. Maan felt bad and he too give up. He himself tugged her under duvet and slept silently to his side.

'i knew Geet you are angry with me,but your love is more deeper than your anger and i willl bring it out for sure.',Maan promised to himself.

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Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago
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Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
fab ud dr
maan realised hs felings
geet is back to km unwilingly
loved maaneet cute fight
bt it wil nt be easy 4 maan to win geet,s heart as she is so much hurt
waitng 4 d next
ud soon dr
Edited by MISHAGOYAL - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Man got her home... Blackmail...hmmm
nice part
waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
Maan tried to appolygies
But she was still angry
He forcefull took her to mansion
Love their tom and jerry fighting sessions
Waiting for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
yeh koi baat hui precap v nahi dia
😡
loved the part soo
maan babu on mission too
biwi manao hhehehehe
geet v bht wala angry h
but maan v maan h mana hi laega
aapni cute biwi ko
waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update
Maan bringing geet to km
All happy to see geet back
But geet not comfortable
Maneet fighting for silly things

Hahaha

Maan wants to get geet back
But should have tough time ...he was so rude to geet before so maan should also face same from geet
Edited by mehak173 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update
maan asking for forgiveness
just loving this nok jhok of new level😳😆

continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update

i am sooo happy that finally maan was able to bring geet back to km


omggg love their tu tu mein mein
ufff yeh maan bhi naa such a teaser😆😆😆😆

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