Taarey os: aaja nindiya (horror) {dared no pms}

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Two in a row again..patting my own back...okay guys this might be scary or a comedy I don't know but for some reason indu di thinks I can do it so she dared me to write a scary os on aaja nindiya from aatma...so this is for you indu di (dismeenu4u)🤗


"Tick...tick...tick...tick..."

That was the only thing that could be heard other than taani pounding heart.

" no way taani ...you are not gonna be scared today..."

No Matter what she said to herself she couldn't convince the fear which ran through her mind. The stillness of the night made her skin crawl. She was alone. Physically and emotionally. The only support she had was her daughter.

The only thing that kept her going after him. Her body tightened at the sheer though of his smile, the way he hugged her and the way he made her feel. All if that is gone. Her Rey is gone forever only leaving her daughter, anu as evidence of his existence. She felt herself tear agin yet again . Crying was never a stranger to her but the more she did it , the tighter the grip sadness had on her.

The silence was killing her. It did not allow her any distraction from her anguish. Not a shadow in sight. She brought her knees to her chest and resumed her crying. Something she was most familiar with .

Well she moved into this new house only to escape her sadness and give her daughter something other than depression. Because of this, her 8 year old matured far beyond her years. Oh how she wished he was still with her.

All of a sudden she felt a sudden rush of wind. She looked to her left only to see the window open. She walked over to close it as the wind grew more and more louder. Almost unreal and improbable . Her hair blew in the breeze when suddenly she heard something faint. She was almost unable to make it out.

" you look better with your hair let loose."

Her eyes grew wide in sheer shock. She didnt know what to feel. The only person who said that to her was Rey. Her Rey.

She looked at her own reflection as she caught a glance of Rey . He disappeared as soon as he came. Nothing else could be heard. Just her own heavy breathing and the regular ticking if the clock.

Aaja nindiya raina beeti jaaye re..

Taani looked up in shock. That voice she knew it too well to ignore. But it couldn't be. He is dead.

Raina beete nindiya kyun na aaye re
Raaton ke saaye hain
Saaye se na dar ho...
Aaja nindiya raina beeti jaaye re..

The more she heard the less she could ignore. Amazingly she found herself walking closer and closer towards the source. She didnt have a choice. She felt her pain grow smaller in comparison to the sheer amazement she felt.

Koi nahi hai phir kyun sehami hai pari
Hmm..
Mana hawayein gehare sannaton se bhari
Hai tera weham
Ke hai koi idhar ho...
Aaja nindiya raina beeti jaaye re..

She reached the door after what seemed like an eternity. She stood there for sometime in a trance. Soon she also realized she was outside her daughters room.

Sapne kitne renge palkon pe kahin
Hmm..
Aahein aati hain neendein aati hi nahi
Lehraati hai koi parchhai aankhon par ho..

She looked through the tainted glass only to see the outline of her sleeping daughter and the form of a man. He was unknown yet he wasn't a stranger, she had a weird crystallizing moment where she just knew the truth without actually comprehending .

Aaja nindiya raina beeti jaaye re..
Ho.. raina beete nindiya kyun na aaye re
Kyun na aaye re

Finally she opened the door. She saw him. In his full form. His handsome face and his perfect physique . He was in white . A white which gave him a purer glow than before. He lifted his palm off his daughters face and faced taani and mouthed something to her.

" I love you taani.."

A Tear streamed of her face. This time in joy.

"I love you too Rey..."

She mouthed back to him as he smiled. And then as if on que he faded out Into a bright white light . Finally after many years taani let go. She smiled as she walked up to anu and laid down beside her .

" goodnight dear..."

She closed her eyes and slept the best sleep she had had in years.


The end


Ok indu di I hope you liked it...and for the rest of you pls hit like and comment and pandas rock!

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patie thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome os angely ..beautifully written 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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well written OS dear...👏👏
Amazing...
Commendable job...👏👏
loved it😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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2 OS in a row..
Not bad, Angel..
You are in full form..
This was so beautiful, Angel..
I really loved it..
More than being scared , I was lost in its beauty..
I really really Loved this piece of work of yours, Angel..
Brilliant job..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it wasnt scary!!! it was beautiful and heart touching..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww, awesome OS, it was really sweet n sad at the same time
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww damm emotional
N luvly os
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It ws mst beautiful thn d horror.I simply lvd d it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful and emotional!! 👏 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow Angel, Lovely OS ! Though I have to say I was a bit sacred at one point ... But The whole situation was beautiful ...

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