Asya Poem-Broken Hearts

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Guys a few lines for Asya which are broken right now by the pain and shattered i have just tried to jot down few lines on Asya...i know its super lame...but i just felt like writing few lines ..hope u guys don't get bored😒

This poem is completely from my point of view hope u like it😭



PS-Edit by Perfectpix ...Thanks dear🤗


Broken Hearts


Tears of blood fall from my broken heart
I never thought we would be apart

When you held me you said "forever"
Now that you're gone I know you meant "never"

Saying you love me with that look in your eye
And that was a cold hearted lie

Your tender touch, the soft forehead kiss
Two things about you I will miss

As I sit here thinking about you
My face is wet with tears past due

I should've cried a long time ago
But I loved you so

I know they say love is blind
But I had only you on my mind

A hurt so deep it cuts like a knife
But wounds heal and I'll go on with my life...

💔

i know its super lame...still ..thanx for reading(if anyone read it)..😊

Please let me know the mistakes..i will correct them..wrote in a flow so couldn't cross check the mistakes😊

A GIF..by Arushi...😳





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WaqtZaya thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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did you write the poem? cause i feel i read it once somewhere.
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So beautiful and painfull ! 😭

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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

did you write the poem? cause i feel i read it once somewhere.


sach bolun i dont know i tried to write and took help from my sis thats sit anke...and in some days ill be leaving if so just thought of writing something😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is really beautiful and sad. well done anku 🤗
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i know thanks
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Originally posted by: NERMINE

So beautiful and painfull ! 😭


thanks
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thanks
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Originally posted by: stacyellowz

this is really beautiful and sad. well done anku 🤗


thanks dii😊
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m on bed of thorns
coz u r far away
to turn it floral
when will u return??


vry nice dear,go ahead😊

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