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Awesome update.
Rishub and pihu asked abut riya bosses.
Love rishub wants riya as her bhabhi.
But riya like rathore as her elder brother.
And rishub upsets that.
But usse yeh nahi pata ki uska bhai arjun bhi to hai riya ke liye.
Loved rishub and pihu fightng.
Precap mai ariya movements.
Continue soon.
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Friends finally i am back with new update..Really very very sorry for late update.. hope you all liked it...here you go for Chapter15😳


Chapter 15


In medicine shope

Shree lisa and chotu is there…

Chotu to meneger of shope: Emergency task force…

Shree apne hato ki bil dikhate huye meneger se kuch puchne lagte hain tabhi lisa uske hatse bil leke meneger se uske pehle puchlete hain eye bil apki shope ki hain?

Shree lisa ko ghurte huye: eye bil iss shope ki hii hain…mujhse koyii galti nehi huyii….

Lisa uske taraf dekhte huye: maine kaab kaha tumse galti huye hain..!! main toh baas inse puch raha tha…toh mr meneger app bataiye eye apki eha ki hain…

Maneger: ji haan..eye hamarii shope ki hain…

Abb shree chotu ki taraf dekhke: eye hamare saath sirf tere wajah se hain..assa khasa Rathore sir ke saath ja rahi thi…

Chotu: abb maine kiya kiya..jan bujhke chot khaya kiya..wo toh achanak lag gaya…

Shree: haan itne bare sharir main dimag ho taab janbujhke chot khayegii na…mera hii nasib kharab hain…jo ise jhelna par raha hain…aur tujhey bhi…

Eye kehte hii wo flashback main chala jata hain..

Riya aur Arjun unlogoki pehle nikal jate hain..undono ke jane ke baad Chotu aur shree nikalne lagte hain aur tabhi shree darrwaja push karke bahar jate hii chotu ake darwaja ki samne khare ho jate hain..aur wo darwaja sidha jake chotu ki ser main lag jata hain..

Chotu: ahhh…

Shree uss taraf se aur Aiesha lisa rathore iss tarafse conference hall ki andar se chillake : kiya huya chotu…!!

Saab dourke uske paas jate hain.aur dekhte hain ki uske ser se khoon nikal raha hain…

Chotu: wo kuch nehi baas thora sa laga hain..

Shree: kaise laga!!!

Chotu: wo darwaja se…

Aiesha: chotu thora toh dekhke chala karo..kitna lag gaya…

Lisa: main abhi medicine laga kar bandage kar deti hoon..

Chotu: bandage aur medicine ki naam sunte hii wo chilla parta hain..nehi uski koyii jarurat nehi..aise hii thik ho jayega…

Shree uske dar ko samjhte huye: dar maat kuch nehi hoga..main hoon na..

Chotu:main darti nehi..paar mujhey nehi laga na..thik ho jayega…

Aiesha: paar chotu…

Chotu: nehi Aiesha iski jarurat nehi…

Lisa: laganese bilkul dard nehi hoga..kuch nehi hoga..trust me..

Chotu: nehi lisa…wo aise hii thik ho jayega…

Abb rathore itne der se eye saab dekhke chilla kar bolte hain: kiya thik ho jayega…Bacche jaisa behave karna band karo chotu aur lisa ko medicine lagane do…aur lisa tum medicine lagake bandage kar dena…

Pher chotu ki taraf dekhte huye: aise hii thik ho jayega..kaise thik ho jayega… aur Aiesha ko dehte huye chalo Aiesha hamain der ho rahi hain…

Aiesha: paar sir lisa bhi toh ja rahi hain hamare saath..

Rathore: abb hamain jald se jald nikalna chahiye..lisa chotu aur shree ke saath chale jayegii…

Shree jorse : kiya??

Rathore shree ki jorse kiya bolne paar uske taraf dekhte hain…aur wo chup ho jate hain..

Lisa shree use apne saath nehi lejayegii eye sochte huye : Paar sir!!!

Rathore: tum inn dono ke hii saath jayoge…kyun shree??

Shree apne mu pe fake smile late huye: ji sir…

Aur eha lisa jorse use bula rahi hain..lisa ki bulanese Shree Flashback se wapas aa jate hain..aur ate hii lisa ko dekhke: kiya hain!!!

Lisa: eye bil credit card se kiya gaya hain…check it…

Shree lisa ko irritate look dete huye: credit card ka serial kiya hain…??

Lisa: 982…..

ArIya Pov..

Arjun and Riya at Vishnu's house..wo dono hall room main baithe huye hain…

Koyii buri aurat ne unke liye ghar ka darwaja khol diya tha…

Arjun se uneh bataya ki wolog Himangshu Shannal se baat karna chahte hain..uss buri aurat ne bataya ki Himagshu ghar main nehi hain..

Pher Riya ne kaha ki ham Vishnu se mil sakte hain??

Uss aurat ne uneh wait karne liye kehke andar gaye hain..kaab andar gayii hain abhitaak nehi ayii..aur Riya eha Arjun ki saath ake bore ho raha hain..Arjun kaab se iss hall room ko observe kar raha hain…

Eha aneke baad himaghshu sannal se baat karna chahte hain iss baat ke alava ek aur baat bhi nehi bola..incfact car main bhi koyii bat nehi ki..

Riya maan hi maan: ajeeb admi hain..itna chup koyii kaise rehsakte hain.. pher sochte hain main baat karoon kiya…pher sochta hain jo bhi kahungii sunne ke baad mujhey aise dekhega jaise main saatyuiin asmaan se giri hoon…phir sochta hain paar agar main abhi baat nehi ki toh main mar jatyungii yrr..itni der chup rehne se toh assa hain mar jana…

Riya Arjun se kuch puchne lagte hain tabhi samneese koyii unke taraf ate huye bolta hain applog mujhse milna chahte hain!!??

Riya Aur Arjun baithe huye uske taraf dekhte hain…

Arjun: haan..

Vishnu: koun hain applog!!

Riya: ETF emergency task force…

Vishnu eye sun dar jata hain…paar undono ke samne baith jata hain…

Riya use observ karte huye: dar gaye !!

Vishnu arjun aur uske taraf dekhte huye bich bich ruk rukke: main kyun darungii..maine kiya kiya??Applog eha kyun ayei hain…??

Arjun: tumahari shadi hone wale thi neha ke saath??

Vishnu: App eye nehi jante..

Arjun uske taraf dekhte huye: jitna pucha jai utna jawab diya karoon….

Vishnu: haan hone wala tha…paar nehi huya…uski jeed thi uski maa se haar sawal ka jawab leke hii wo mujhey le apne nayii zindegii shuru karegii..paar naye zindegi toh choro zindegii hii khatam ho gayii….

Riya: wo toh hum jante hii hain..pyar karte the na use..

Vishnu: uski taraf dekhte hain…

Riya: toh pher uske marne ke baad ek baar bhi uske dead body dekhne ya uski behen se nilne kyun nehi gayii…??

Vishnu: kyun ki meri…

Paar wo kuch keh pai isse pehle uha ek aurat ake kehte hain: kyun ki uski halat thik nehi tha..khud sagmain main tha..isiliye nehi ja paye…

Arjun uss aurat ki taraf dekhte huye: apki tariff..!!

Aurat: Anuradha Shannal..Vishnu ki bua hoon... aur Vishnu ki tabiyat thik nehi hain….applog eye sawal jawab bad main kar lije ga…

Arjun: jab abb ham eha hain aur apke bhatije bhi toh intezer kis baat ki…Haimain kiya karna hain kiya nehi eye hamain apko batane ki jarurat nehi… samjhey ya samjhayun…

Wo aurat chup ho jate hain..

Arjun: Neha ki mout ki pehle Vishnu tum neha se mili thi…

Vishnu phirse kuch bolne lagte hain paar Anuradha bich main bol parda hain: nehi..uss din pura din wo ghar main hii tha…bahar nehi gaye the…

Abb Riya: Sawal Vishnu se kiya gaya hain..aapse nehi..toh behtar eye hoga ki app apna eye mu band rakhiye…

Abb wo aurat ekdaam chup ho jate hain..

Arjun: tum mile the ya nehi Vishnu?

Vishnu Anuradha ki taraf dekhte huye: Nehi..nehi mile the..

Abb Anuradha: abb shayed applogoki sawal jawab khatam ho gayii hogi!!!

Arjun aur Riya uski taraf dekhte hain,Riya uneh kuch bolne lagte hain paar Arjun Riya ki kuch kehne se pehle bolta hain…Haan khatam hain..hum chalte hain…

Riya shocked ho jate hain..aur wo baas arjun ko dekhte jate hain…

SaSha Pov

Sameer And Aiesha looking for that nurse house..

They found the house But they can't find the nurse..uss nurse ka hii pata galat nikla…she was not staying here anymore…

Aiesha: sir hamain toh ehii address diya gaya…

Rathore: galat address diya hain…

Aiesha: paar sir jinone eye address hamain di wo jhut nehi bool rahe hain…

Sameer: jhut wo nehi uss nurse ne kaha jiska eye address hain…paar eye ja kaha sakti hain..

Aiesha: pata nehi sir..aaspaas ki log toh kehrahe the iss ghar main koyii nehi rehta….kamse kaam 10-12 saalse eye ghar band hain…

Sameer: hmm paar ekbaar eye ghar assise check kar lete hain..hona ho iss ghar se uss nurse ka koyii na koyii connection toh jarur hain..hamain kuch na kuch toh milna hii chahiye…search it properly Aiesha..

Aiesha: okey sir…

Pher dono do taraf jake ghar seach karna shuru karte hain…

ArIya pov…

Vishnu ki Ghar se bahar nikal ke ETF car ke samne khari hain..Aur uha bhi Riya baas shocked mood se Arjun ko dheke ja rahe hain Arjun Car ki Front mirror main dekh leta hain.. aur use aise dekhte huye dekh arjun : aise ghur ghur ke na dekhke jo puchna chahte hoo puchlo??

Riya Arjun ki batose chouk uthti hain..maan hi maan sochte huye[main ineh ghur ghur ke dekh rahi hoon eneh kaise pata main unke piche khari hoo..inke piche bhi akhe hain kiya!!]aur pher kuch bina samjhey : Sorry sir mujhey kuch samjh nehi aya…

Arjun aab ghumke uske taraf moodke: maine bola agar kuch puchna chahte hoo to puch sakte hoo..mujhey ghurna band karke…

Riya abb Arjun ki dar se har bara jate hain..aur bolte hain: ne..neh..ne..nehi nehi sir mujhey kuch nehi puchna…Aur main apko nehi dekhrahi thi..wo toh main..main baas…abb office chalte hain na sir…

Arjun pher Riya ki taraf apne akhe bare karke dekhte hain aur Riya aur dar jata hain..Aur arjun ki taraf dekhte huye apne anjane main hii piche ki taraf jane lagte hain...

Aur use piche ki taraf jate dekh arjun ko kuch samjh nehi ata phir wo Riya ki piche Gari ki thorii right side main ek gaddha dekhte hain aur wo dekh wobhi Riya ki taraf badne lagte hain..Aur Riya use uski taraf barte huye dekh aur harbara jate hain..Aur aise main Riya ki piche jake gaddhe main apne peir dene hii wale hota hain Arjun Riya ki Hat khichte huye Use uske taraf khich leta hain…

Aise main Riya Ake apne hatse Gari ki windows ko pakarte huye gari ke Windows ke paas aa jate hain aur arjun bhi uske saath aa jate hain..eha ek halki si hug milta hain dono ka…pher dono baas ekdusre ko dekh apne app main hii gum ho jate hain..aur aise main Arjun ki phone bazta hain aur wo dono scene main wapaas aa jate hain….

Aur scene main wapas ate hi dono ek jhatke main ekdusre se dur aa jate hain…

Arjun kuch kehne lagte hain paar mobile ki ring hone ki awaj sun wo call recive kar leta hain…

Arjun: Hello..

Uss tarafse Rathore: Arjun nurse ka eye address galat hain…ek band pari ghar ki address hain…

Arjun: ghar ka owner koun hain??

Rathore:records ke anusar kisi prava shannal ka…

Arjun: prava shannal..matlab nehi ki maa…

Rathore: pata nehi..koyii aur bhi ho sakta hain…hamain ehape kuch papers mila…Aiesha ko ek photo mila hain usma ek aurat hain paar wo neha ki mother nehi hain…

Arjun: thik hain Hum abhi office pohoch rahe hain..

Rathore: okey…

Arjun Rathore apna call cut karte hii Riya ki taraf dekhte hain jisse riya thora dar jata hain aur pher uss gadhhe main girne lagte hain..par arjun uski haat pakar lete hain aur wo nehi girte..

Paar Arjun ka gussa uske upar baras parta hain..tumme akkal nehi hain…dekhke nehi chal sakti..!! haan tumeh kisiko ghurne se phursaat mile tab dekhke chaloge na.. stupid kahika…. Riya chup hoke baas Arjun ki lecture sunnte hain.. aise arjun ki lecture ki bich uski kuch bolne ka himmat nehi ho rahi..Wo maan hi maan soch rahai hain..hey vagwaan koyii mujhey bachao isse..warna aaj toh main gayi…kuch toh karo vagwaan jii…..

Aur jaise Riya ki baat mante huye vaagwaan ne use bachane ke liye Barish ko bhej deta hain…Riya ki dua unpe barish baanjke girne lagte hain…

Aur barish dekhte hii Arjun Riya ko dhamkana chor gari ki driving seat main jake baith jata hain..Aur Riya ko bulane lagta hain..

Aur eha Riya gari ki bahar Barish main vigti huyii..chillakar bol parta hain thank you vaagwaan jii..thank you so much…

Arjun gari ki andar se use vaagwaan ko thank you bolte sun maan hii maan..eye ladki pagal hain kiya!!pher wo Riya ko bulane lagte hainj..Riya Riya..andar aao..

Paar eha Riya..barish main khoyii bhigne lagte hain aur Arjun ke bulane pe koyii jawab nehi deti…

Sasha pov

Rathore apna call cut karne ke baad Aiesha: sir eye ghar ka adha hiissa dekhke lagta hain ghar main aag lagi thi..adhe se jiyada saman jail huyii hain…

Rathore: paar eye baat bohot ajeeb hain ki adhe hissa jale huye aur adhe hissa bilkul thik…

Aiesha ghar se balcony ke taraf jate huye: sir ek ajeeb baat hain..iss jali huyii adhe hisse main eye balcony bhi ata hain paar eye bilkul jali nehi…ek dam alag hain…..

Rathore Balcony ki taraf jake : haan...

Aiesha: paar eye kaisa huya??

Rathore: mujhey lagta hain kisine jaan bhujke iss ghar ka kuch hissa jala diya..kuch na kuch chakkar toh jarur hain…

Aiesha: mujhey bhi aisa hii lagte hain sir.. eye kehke jab wo Rathore ki taraf mudne lagte hain uske peir main kuch lagte hain jisse wo apna ek peir ucha karlete hain aur dusre pe pura body ka pura balance chor deta hain aur isse wo disbalanced ho jate hain..aur girne lagte hain…

Parr Rathore use pakad lete hain…aur eha dono ka ache milte hain..aur aise main barish hone lagte hain…Aur balcony ki upri hiisse main kuch na hone ki wajah se wo dono vigne lagte hain…barish ki wajh se wo dono apne kheyal se bahar aa jate hain aur dono embaresed ho jate hain..phir dono dourke kamre ki andar aa jate hain aur uha ake undonoko ek dhakka lagte hain…phirse dono ki akhe milte hain..paar Aiesha apni najar bachake dusri taraf chale jate hain...Rathore baas use dekhte rehte hain…

ChoShriSa Pov…

Medicine shope ki bahar khare hain teeno …. Shope se nikal te hii barish shuru ho gayee hain…teno phasii huyii hain barish main…

Chotu: Bhukh lagi hain yrr..abb iss barish main khana kahase milega??!!

Shree: haar jagah baas tujhey bhukh hii lagta hain..kabhi toh khane ke bare main na socha kar..kabhi toh apni 11.30 wali ke bare main socha kaar…wo bechari agar tujhse shadi hoo gayii na..tujhey khana khilate khilate hii khatam ho jayegiii…

Chotu: Abe subeh se kuch nehi khaya maine…

Shree: hamne bhi nehi khaya..[lisa ki taraf dekhte huye]waise nehi uski toh pata nehi maine bhi nehi khaya…

Lisa eye sunte hii: Hello mr main bhi subeh se kuch nehi khayii…samjhey specky sen??

Shree specky sen adhe adhure sunte huye anjane main: Thik Hain..aur phir kuch samjhte hii…waise kiya kaha tumne??

Lisa: kiya kha??

Shree: eye abhi jo kaha??

Lisa: maine bhi khana nehi kaha eye bola…

Shree: assa!!Mujhey toh kuch aur…

Lisa: kiya kehrahe hoo…

Shree: kuch nehi…

Lisa Paas ki road main Vutta dekhte huye chilla parta hain..hey guys kuch mila hain..khayoge kiya!!

Chotu: kiya mila hain??

Lisa: samne dekho na…Wo vutta wala..garmagaram vutta bech raha hain..chalo na khate hain..barish main garma garam vutta khane ka kuch alag hii maja hain..chalo na chotu??

Shree: aab Vutta khayenge???

Chotu: iske alava kuch aur nehi hain kiya..vutte se bhuk ka kiya hoga…

Lisa: abhi toh apne bhukh se bachne ke liye ehii mil sakte hain…

Shree: vutta eye koyii khane ki chij huyii..i don't like it yrr…mujhey nehi khana…

Lisa: specky kuch chije tumhare pasand na karne se bure toh nehi ho sakte hain na..wo bilkul bura nehi hain khane main…try it na…

Shree:Kiya matlab hain tumhara..??eye tum mujhey specky bulana band karoon..aur tum bhi mujhey kuch khas pasand nehi hoo…

Lisa: Exactly specky..tumhare pasand na karne se main burii thori na hoon..kyun chotu…!!

Chotu lisa ki taraf dekhke haste huye: haan wo toh hain..[phirse Shree ki taraf dekhte huye Shree ki gusse se darke] pata nehi yrr..

Aur lisa uske antics paar haske bolta hain..guys main toh chali vutta khane..agar tum logoko khana hain toh aa jaoo..warna ehi pe bhukhi khare rahoo…..

ArIya pov..

Eha Arjun abhitaak car main baith ke Riya ko bula rahe hain..Riya..Riyaaa..come here…I said come here…

Aur Riya apne app main gum akhe band karke barish enjoy kar raha hain…Arjun ki bate toh uski kaan taaak pohoch bhi nehi raha…Riya apne aap main hii bak raha hain..moonsoon ki pehlii barish…wo bhi uss akdu se mujhey bachane keliye…thank you thank you vaagwaan jii…

Arjun ki bulane par awaj na dene ke wajah se Arjun ko Riya pe aur gussa ate hain..pher Riya ko aise Apne appmain gum dekh aur bhii..aur wo gusse main car se phirse bahar nikal ate hain…

Aur bahar nikalte hii wo pichese ake riya ki hat pakarke uske taraf kich leta hain..jisse Riya apnke akhe khol leta hain..aur akhe kholte hii wo apne appko Arjun ki baho main pate hain…wo thori dar jatae hain…

Aur Arjun Riya ko aur jorse pakarte huye: kaab se bula rahii hoon tumeh sunaii nehi deta kiya..eha hum barish enjoy karne nehi aye hain kaam karne aye hain…

Riya kuch bolne lagte hain paar arjun use bolne ka mouka nehi deta aur uski and ko twist karke dusri taraf lake aur jorse pakar lete hain aur bolte hain..agar bajpana hii karna hain toh ETF se bahar jake karoon…


To be continued……


Precap: Dard ka dard...

Todays update is complete dear..i hope you all are enjoy this one..Friends waiting for your most adorable feedback dear..😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
that was such an awesome update :) loved it
chotu got hit by door on his forehead 😆 poor guy
oh so that's why shree had to bring chotu and liza with him
loved ariya's POV :)
case is getting very interesting
riya was staring at arjun
and arjun caught her
arjun saved riya from falling <3
and ariya lost in each other <3
fantastic siggy moumi ❤️
arjun scolded her
and it started raining
riya saying thank you to god how cute :)
and was lost in rain
sasha scenes were lovely :)
choree and liza scenes were funny 😆
omg arjun again got mad at riya
can't wait to read more
thanks for the pm
continue soon
Edited by fatima15 - 12 years ago

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