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User123

@UserM123

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Riiaaa !
its Was Sooo Awesum... Can Just Say this that i loved it to the core.. <3 <3 <3

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osina

@gal.angel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

wow Ria.. u hav written it soo beautifully n vm iz superb ..
poem iz juz awesome

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uhs313

@uhs313

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

awesome os...loved the poem 😊

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Awesome one shot..Wonderfully written...Just loved the way u bring all the emotions and feelings of sharon's frame of mind..i really liked u'r words with that MP3 movie song..Perfectly penned down the true essence,true feelings of love..
In short words of OS..u just expressed the definition of love in sharon's POV..
And now,a beautifull Vm by VM specialist shrutika...Great work..
Last,i liked the little poetry at the end..Its beautifully and perfectly written in sharon POV..Good work lalita..

Thanx for PM
Prateek

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vrushanharshi

@vrushanharshi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Lovely os but in swayams words khoobsurat os

Just loved it

U beautifully explained her feelings n all the flash backs of pure love

N loved those lines which u wrote on love was

N couldn't stop smiling more over blushing while reading it n watching the vm

Her feelings could be felt while reading

Shrutika di the vm was awesome loved the song n scene selection

N even loved the poem written it depicted sharons feelings so beautifully

In all the trio of u three is amazing it was a super duper awesome khoobsurat os

Loved it!!!

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priyanka/pari

@ProngsPadsMoony

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

shrutioka di beautful vm

lali jaani i loved the poem

and ria superb os

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TEJUSWARON22

@TEJUSWARON22

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Beautiful post Ria 👏 superb VM ❤️

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

ria----

sorry for being so late in replying, but i was out of station without my lappy re.

marvellous vm...

and the write up was so full of emotions...and i seemed to just...lose myself in it...like music.

and lalita----fantastic poem----one of the best hindi love poems i have read on the forum. many people on the forum write poems without having anything to say------so it turns out big words---empty of truth. but yours was really great.

---love---medha