RaHi OS: Deal with (no the) Devil

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Jhankaar

@crazy4lyf

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

okay, this is crazy... and probably the most insane piece, i hav ever read... but that doesn't make it bad. In fact, it is a great tale. A completely new level of Satyavan-savitri's story... Or should i say, The Devil's Take on Accident...😳

anyways, a gud story that kept me binded as if by some magical attraction... superbb!!!!!

with love,

jhankaar

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Priyanka

@CoffeeAddict

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Devil owned the show!! Amazing...

It was completely OOC... Honestly. But I loved it. I don't have some absurd affection for the original characters anyway...

You have an amazing comic timing. There were a lot of dialogues that cracked me up... One specifically brilliant was --> "You dated Time?" I asked. "No wonder she's so bipolar."

Considering that Mais called dibs on my characters already. I'm stealing yours! I love Devil!! 😉

Great job!

Luv,

Pree.

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P.S. What's your name?

Edited by CoffeeAddict - 12 years ago

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sravya

@rocksravya11

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

kk dis was smthng difrnt n worked out very well..it was just like a fairy tale story..but i luved d way u described it... luvely dear gud work..n dis os was fab