THE LOCKET(6), MG FF, link new thread pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 94

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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing one dear
loved it
thanx for the pm
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg I have no word for Brij in my so called dictionary.Actually i donno wanna to abuse a word to represent for him ...Hopeboth female leads plus any gal not face wid his cruelty
ohhh maan is hilarious Jiji n GG..I really feel pity for nakul bechare maan n dev kae pyaar maar
loved the update Amazing
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Posted: 12 years ago
😃😃


brij is sick..😡

poor chandan and poonam..
i'm sure even jeet wud be prey of Brij's saajish ...

now coming to maneet..😆

poor nakul..😆😆😆
jiji and GG... maan pyaar me pagal ho rakha hai...

loving this 'crazy in love' maan..😆😆😆

Edited by mannubhardwaj - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chi Brij, how sickening 🤢 but thankfully reading Maan lost in Geet's thoughts was more than enough to make up for it, poor Nakul is on the receiving end instead 😆

Can't wait for the next part of the update, thanks for updating 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Yeh toko toko kya hai?


ye wo jo end me bolta hai ye wo tha..😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful update...

thnks for the PM...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
what is going to happend next in your story
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Your extra bits on the thanking note made me laugh. Indeed, it might feel like writers are crybabies. 😆

Since you said that the first portion of this chapter is a continuation from the previous chapter, this means that it is two years ahead of the timeline from Maan's portion, haina?Yes the part was about a year and some months before present...Good catch, I purposely did not put the timeline...

I don't really want to comment on Brij's way of entertainment for himself. I can't find any strong words in my vocabulary to tell how much I am hating him. The scariest part for me was him thinking he'll find a prettier girl the next time. I really do not wish that any girl - let alone the female leads of the story - fall into his trap anymore.

Hmmm... he is hateful but in all stories good must conquer evil...🤔 and I have two heros with fit and fine bodies...😉

Sibling rivalry. Something that starts deep within and only begins to grow at a very slow pace which doesn't let the parents know or control it. After reading how much a flesh and blood brother hates his own kin and what he has done to get put him down, I have one wish. I very desperately want this man's downfall. I want him to be robbed of what wasn't his own to claim in the first place. In my opinion, if sibling rivalry takes root in one of the children, the parents are still to be held responsible for it, it doesn't matter that they're not usually aware of it. Even though Brij had hidden his hatred for his brother under the guise of care and concern, the parents should have realised that they need to pay attention to both their children rather than just one of them. No matter how old a child gets, he still will want his mother to feed him with her hands, so it's quite natural that when he finds his younger brother being pampered by his parents, he felt neglected and that led to him hating his brother who was the point of their parents' attention. I wonder, though, why there was this injustice and why the Thakur couple favoured their younger son - if that is the case at all, because this is only one side of the story.They did not favor him. Most of Brij's problems are his delusions which have a root in his habits... now I will zip up so I don't give it out.. you must have guessed..

Needless to say how much relief Maan's portion brought to me and it was not because of SBV or anything.

Him staring at his body in the mirror and challenging SRK to beat that and then that GG and jiji part was all hilarious. Poor Nakul! He is going to go mad by the time that both the brothers get through to their feelings and their love interests. 😆Nakul ke liye ab aur tortures baaki hai... plus Maan will have a new helper...😉 Manisha...

And let me tell you, SRK can't beat Maan's body. 😳
Are you sure? Did you check properly? 😆

You know, I have never really found out what a colour or the colour of rose represents, but I've always been intrigued by it. That is the reason I loved Colors by Palin. Maan's choice of which rose he wants to give to Geet and the meaning behind it is apt. And yes, imagining his parents plant those roses in the garden so lovingly brought a smile to me. Precious memory, isn't it Avi? 😉Hmmm... keh de Avi is rose mad... I won't mind...😆

I haven't heard the song but the lyrics and translation seems nice and well-suited for this chapter.
You must hear it. The YT is by bubblygal.. look it up.
Will be waiting for Maan to actually attempt gifting Geet a rose. 😆

Thanks for updating Avi! And apologies for you know what. 🤗



Thanks Mari! 🤗
Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

is it that bad? 😭

Arey padha hi nahi abhi tak... padhne toh de... I'm sure its again a gem 😃

Woh emoticon toh late hone ke liye tah ... aaj kal I'm so late everywhere... late latiff...

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