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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 3:

Rey (ST): how did everything come down to this? Why did I think of this stupid plan? How can I be so stupid to think a girl like Taani will not have any aim? Just because she gave her attention to me how could I think she doesn't have anything else to do other than me? And moreover I never really tried to get to know her. She became GS for me, she started learning dance for me, hell she even got into a fake relationship with Shivam for me. But what did I do? I did nothing except hurting her. I loved her but never trusted her or understood her.

Rey was cursing himself and was crying.

Sharon came there that time to look for Rey since it has been a really long time since he's gone.

She saw Rey on his knees crying his heart out. She rushed towards him

Sharon: Rey what happened? Why are you like this? Did you talk to Taani?

Rey: yes.

Taani: what did she say?

Rey: it's over

Sharon: what are you saying?

Rey: everything is over Sharon.

Sharon: please tell me clearly what the hell happened Rey.

Rey: no Sharon. It's between us. I don't want to discuss about this with anyone.

Sharon: Rey why are you talking like this suddenly? What happened to you? I am your best friend

Rey: but Taani is my love and I think it's better if we sort out ourselves. Did you tell me what's the problem between you and Swayam? No right. Same way please don't force me

Sharon: ok Rey I understand. I am always there for you.

Rey: I know. But my biggest mistake was confronting you instead if talking with Taani. I wouldn't have broken up with her even if it was not real if I had not spoken to you. I am not blaming you. You told me what you felt was right at that moment. I am upset with myself because whatever happened I shouldn't have even thought of break up.

Sharon: sorry Rey. I shouldn't have suggested to you about the break up. But wasn't it for her own good?

Rey: I am only at fault. I know you meant no harm and it's ok you needn't feel guilty. Not you. And no it was me who had misunderstood her. She was not without any aim. She did have. I was only blind. Now I am paying for my deeds.

Sharon: I am so sorry Rey. I don't know what to say.

In the meantime Swayam came there.
Sharon explained to him everything.

Swayam: I know you did for her good. But dint know you hurt her by your words this much

Rey: am really sorry Swayam I dint do it wontedly. Please forgive me. I can't live without her. Please Swayam. I need her back

Swayam: don't worry Rey. We will help you.

Rey: no Swayam. It's between Taani and I. I created the mess so I will solve it. I will completely trust and love her and also win her trust back.

Swayam: that's the spirit. We are there to support you.

Rey: thank you so much. Now I have to go. To plan on winning my love back

Sharon: that's awesome. All the best

Rey: ya bye guys.

Rey went to his home to think of a plan to woo his love Taani.

In the meantime Taani's state was not any better.

Though she rejected Rey she was feeling miserable

Taani (ST): why Rey why did you do this to me, to us? I loved you unconditionally but you? Put up a fake break up and hurt me and my self respect. What did he think? That like a fool I would forgive him and run back to him? He should have spoken to me directly instead of planning behind my back. I love you Rey but I hate you so much for hurting my ego and making me cry. But I still love you and I hate myself for that

In the meantime Rey reaches his home and takes Taani's picture from his cupboard.

Rey (ST): I am so sorry sweetheart for all the hurt I have caused you. But I won't let you leave like that. I love you and I know that you love me too. I will convert all the bad memories that I have caused into good ones. We both are meant to be.

Scene shifts to Taani

Taani sits there crying when Swayam comes there for Taani and sees her crying

Swayam: Taani I know. I am sorry Taani. I know he did this fake break up. But I dint know that he said all those hurtful words. Am so sorry Taani.

Taani: you too bhai? It's ok what more can I expect from you. You are his friend after all.

Swayam: Taani please. I knew it later only. But I was sworn by his promise so couldn't tell you. And I was just happy that he still loves you and you will be happy as I know you too still love him.

Taani: no bhai it's ok. And no I don't love him

Swayam: please Taani. I know I have hurt you. But you can't lie to me. You won't be crying here if you don't love him.

Taani: yes bhai I love him. But I can't trust him or go back to him with the fear when he would break my heart again.

Swayam: but Taani you love him and he loves you too. I understand he made a very big mistake but why are you punishing yourself for that?

Taani: I have to. For loving the wrong person. Please don't talk about this again bhai. Let's go home.

Swayam: come let's go. I am sorry I won't talk about it again

Swayam (ST): whatever you say I know you can't be happy with anyone other than Rey. I hope he woos you soon.


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Edited by srivi01TRpmlist - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
RES..😉

Yipee!! That too before pm..😆


UNRES..

Brilliantly written..
It was very emotional..
At last Rey realised his mistake...
But he was so shattered..
But loved how he did not let Sharon and Swayam interfere in their matter...
Now I am just waiting for him to woo her back..
They love each other but of course Taani is right from her POV..
Loved the update, dear..
Edited by Ayesha_Hasan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
Plzz continue
It was jst awsum
Reys emotion
N accha hua he decidednot to teell any1
Plzz continue n pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
awesome
just lvoed it
both are so much in love
agreed with taani pov
she loves him but cant trust him
try to cont. soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Awesome mind blowing!! Loved it! Quite emotional! Thnx fr d pm... update soon... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Wonderfully Written !! It was awesome how you portrayed all their feelings !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
superb yaar.so painful:( but you portrayed thr emotions so well:P
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
wooow great update 👏👏
for the first time in your story i felt bad for rey 😭
and even taani is hurt
loved rey's line towards sharon , finally he said something right
brilliant update and update soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
That was very emotial.

I felt bad for Rey & I hope he gets Taani back.


Please continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Plzz continue
It was jst awsum
Reys emotion
N accha hua he decidednot to teell any1
Plzz continue n pm me

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