MG:SS Will u marry me???/pt 38 updatd on pg 71 29th june'14 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 14


Geet & maan got up in d morning. ...all tried & exhausted.
Geet ws sleeping on maanz bck & maan hd pinned himself inside d pillow.
Geet:maan...maan utho na...maan..
Maan:hmmm...
Geet:maaannn...
Maan:hmm...sonedo na geet tumne puri raat sone nahi diya...
Geet made a o face..
Geet:wht mane mane sone nahi diya ya tumne mujhe sone nahi diya...
Maan:jo bhi ho same 2 same hai...sojao...
Geet:hmmm...maan..
Maan:plze no more go 2 sleep.
Geet:I hate u...I m going 4 bath...
Maan:& I love u...
Geet smiled & went 2 take bath..
Geet prologue:
Maan made me his...I m only maanz bt shaadi se pheley ye saab...I mean I shuld hv ask maan 2 wait till marriage. ..
Hmmm...bt we just went in a go...kuch samaj nahi raha tha wht is r8 & wht is wrong. ..
Maa noz abut us & if I call hr 2 say wht we did yesterday she will surely kill me.
Hmm...par jo hua wo magic tha...nasha tha...a type of drug whch took me away with few moments. ...actually nt drug itzsuch a nnegative word...hmmm...love...yes..it ws love.
Mine love maanz love our love bt dis love shuld b continued aftr marriage nt nw...I will ask maan 2 make all thngs wrk soon..
She ws disturbed by a knock on d door.
Maan:geet I m going 4 bath office se call aayya tha sum imp wrk came up...
I m going bye..
Geet:bt maan...
Geet took bath fast & changed herself in fresh clothes. She came down here maan ws all ready in his formals & ws leaving.
Geet:maan...
Maan:yes babu..
Geet:maan wo yestrdy jo hua wo ...wo I mean it shuld b ...
Maan:b aftr marriage r8..
Geet nodes
Maan:hmm...so I will marry u as early as possible infact if u want we cn marry 2dy also.
Geet:nahi nt lke dat...
Maan:hmmm...ok I m already late bye...
He kissed hr on lips & exited. .

Geet got busy with hr wrk & totally forgot abut hr mom.
Suddenly geetz cell phone buzzed...it ws mom..
Geet:oh no...
Geet beta utha nahi tua tu gayi samaj...
Geet picks it.
Geet:he...hello...
Rano:hello ki bachi rukh tuje batati hu...ha 1 call nahi no msg no mail nothing. ..ladka kya dekh liya bas uske sath hi busy ho gayi...yaad bhi hai ya bhul gayi ki mey teri maa hu..aur yaha india mey teri ek small family bhi hai...
Geet:maa wo...I m sorry..wo mujhe kehna tha par pata nahi chala kaab & kya bolu..
Rano:koi gaal nahi putar...mujhe pata tha ladka aacha hai...bas u r also happy I & ur bauji is also happy. ..
Geet:thank u mom...
Here again a cell phone bazzed...
Geet:maa I will call u later bbye..
Rano:ok beta...
Geet rush fast near d phone it ws maanz phone he hd forgot at home.
Geet:h...
B4 she speaks
Daadi:maan beta I m so happy at last u decided 2 marry...
Beta natasha is waiting 4 u in ur office & I hv explained hr evrythng so u don't worry she will handle evrythng.
& beta thnk u 4 making dis old lady happy. ...taras gayi thi mey...aacha nw I m keeping shaadi ki tayari karni hai aab jab tum aao gey dat tme u decided evry thg bas aabhi I will take out all ur mom jewels & make them new..4 ur bride.

Geet ws vry happy dat maan hv talkd 2 his daadi abut us & she ws on cloud 9...
Geet thught 2 give maan surprise & go 2 office.
Geet got dressed & went 2 office.
As she ws abut 2 exit d house maanz driver came at d place.
Driver :maam sir hv send sum papers plze sign dem.
Geet:now bt I m going 2 office only.
Driver:maam I will take u 2 office bt b4 dat plze sign dis papers itz vry imp.
Geet:ohk give.
Geet without reading sign d agreement papers fast.
She went 2 office.
Der as she ws parking she saw maan & natasha smiling & going 2wards d car.
Geet thught were r both going dat 2 hugging each other & why maan is hugging her .
Maan opened door 4 Natasha she sat inside & maan drived away.
Geet want 2 no wht are dey upto she took her car behind dem.
Maan & Natasha stopped outside a jewelry shop...a huge stop & a very famous location in newyork.
Maan took natashaa inside d shop.
Geet found dat very fishy she thught 2 follow more.
Geet parked hr car & went inside d shop.

Precap:wht geet sees & a cuming leap...whtz next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
oohh nyc upadte
soo maan ne sab ko pata lia h
but yeh natasha ke sath ku ghuming
waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83



yeh Natasha ka kya chakkar hai...

abhi I am not in a position to comment more because of too much confusion...

what are those papers which Geet signed...

somebody playing games with her...

interesting and confusing update...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
nice part..
i think maan is taking natasha with him to purchase things 4 geet
n geet will mu him..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
the papers she signed must be marriage papers..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Next update in an hr...it would b an small 1...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
P@RT 15


plze try 2 manage reading by bookmarks & $aved pages...plze 😳

Geet ws abut 2 enter the shop bt b4 she enter maan alone exited d shop.
Geet hind herself so dat maan doesn't notice her.maan ws on phone & in hurry he went 2wards car & drived away.
Geet waited 4 a while bt still Natasha ws inside she atlast entered d shop.
She started searching Natasha over der.
Natasha ws on phone talking 2 sum 1.geet ws very curious 2 no wht is going on here...
Natasha ws trying sum rings.
Geet opened her hair so dat Natasha couldn't notice her & went near her.
Here Natasha ws talking 2 daadi.
Natasha:haan daadi paar maan ko kucha kaam aagaya hai so he went...so even I m a bit bored.
I hv selected sum setz so will just pack dem & paid ring tua mey maan ke choose se hi lugi...
& I need his ring size also after all itz engagement.
Geet heard all dis & ws shocked maan getting engaged dat 2 with Natasha...he is cheating me bt it cn be na dat no he won't cheat me he loves me & y would he he only told he loves me...
Oh god kya ho raha hai ye...plze help me...geet ws abut 2 cry...so she just exited d shop & went direct 2 her office.
Maan ws also all day busy...geet called him many times bt he never answered any call.
Geet ws all in depression & just want 2 talk 2 maan...she cried a lot.
It ws 10 at night & geet ws still in office she ws nt in hr sense.
By d time maan came home.
Maan called geet bt der ws no rply.
He removed his cell phone & der were 21 missed call 4m geet.
He called geet she ws nt picking up.he called again & geet atlast picks up.
Maan:geet were r u...& r u f9.
Geet:haan maan I m f9 wht will happen 2 me...I m at my friends place I called u 2 inform dat only I hv send my driver also at ur place plz send my bags with him & I m shifting at my flat 2morrow so no need 2 cum bck.
& I hv send all d design with rohan & also hv fixed meeting with him only...I hv 2 go in d evening with pari 2 central plaza so won't b able 2 meet u at all...srry bt very busy.
Geet without listening wht maan will say just cut d call.
Here geet took d bag & went 2 maanz office.
She went inside his cabin & keeps a letter her eye went on d papers she hv sign she takes d papers & dey were non other den marriage certificate.
Geet thught she ws wrg...
She without wasting more time went towards maanz house...
As she ws abut u enter she saw Natasha cuming out.
Maan ws also with her...maan said sumthng in her ears & she started laughing.
Natasha:maan u need more thng 2 learn yaar tu romance ki khichadi bana deta hai...don't mind bt...ufff u r proposing me 4m last 1hr & u still didn't said wht u should say...
Maan:yes bt I m trying na...ok cum here...
Seeing dis d last hope whch geet thught ws also broken in pieces. ..
She ran away 4m der...
She toom her bags & purse & went 2 airport.
With next flight 2 indi.she was all broken down & ws nt in a position 2 talk 2 sum 1 or explain 2 sum1.


Precap:aftr 3 years...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
nice update
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
Will update part 16 by afternoon. ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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<font size="6">PART 16</font>


AFTER 3YEARS
It ws a vry nice morning.sun raised & all birds were singing. All office going pple were rushing 2 der respective office.
All schoolies taking der cute small bag & climbing bus.
Parents giving dem cya...all nana nani dada dadi were out 4 morning walks & laughter classes. .
Dis ws london...cold weather & lovely scenario.

Lady:nanu plze utho jaldi utho we r getting late..
Nanu:no...sleep & want sleep.
Lady:nanu plze babu utho na I m late 2 open my office.
Nanu:kya...late ho gaye aap...nahi sojao.
Lady:ohk nanu u b with neelam I m going 2 office.
Nanu:kya me leaving me..
Lady:yes I m leaving...
Nanu:den play jana nahi..
Lady:tumko uthna nahi tuo play jana nahi...
Lady pulls his nose & give a kiss on his cheeks & leaves.

Nanu:rukhooo...
Lady:nanu...
Nanu:nanu ke liye order karo...
Lady:order? ??
Nanu:nanu ko aabhi wala dress chahiye...
Lady:oh god nanu teekh hai mey tumhara morning wala dress nikal ti hu bas.
Nanu:& wo wala shoes bhi
Lady:nanu merey shaff bhi aagaey hogey janedo na plze...babu plze...
Nanu:lazy bump...
Lady:ooo...
Wasey itz lazy bumb...nt bump...hehe.
Nanu:ok u may go...
Lady:nanu neelam ka khayal rakhna..
Till den neelam cumz
Neelam:madam ye mera ya mey iska khayal kaku...
Lady:neelam. ...
Nanu:naalam...mey tum ra kayal kahugi...
Neelam:kakhuga...
Nanu:1 in d same...
Neelam & lady both starts laughing.

Here in india.

A man ws in his office at n8.
He getz a call.
Daadi:beta aapka aaj ghar aane ka irada hai ya nahi...
Maan:srry daadi wo thoda busy ho gaya tho...aao khana kha lo mey ghar aakey aapmo milta hu.
Daadi Nanu so gai kya...
Daadi:haan beta aabhi soi hai...itz vry difficult 2 make hr sleep.
Maan:hmm...geet hoti tho so jati...
Daadi:naam maat lo tum uska...
Maan:daadi...yesa nahi hai...
Daadi:jesa bhi hai bas geet ka nahi hai...aur aao ghar jaldi aajaiye...
Maan:hmmm...

Aftr an hr or so maan came home he sstraight away went inside a room.
Der ws a cute little princesses taaked in quilt. Maan came near her & kissed hr on hr forehead. ..
Maan:good night nanu...
He went away 2 hv his dinner.

Precap:thinking... 😉
Edited by nimi216 - 12 years ago

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Marry me, please.

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