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This is a story of two lovers who died for their love and set the path for other lovers. These two lovers fought with all they but in the end they sadly died. Oh, how we wished they had survived to tell others of their battle, but alas they did not survive to tell their tale. Others wrote it down so no would forget it.

Our tale starts in a village of Analgesia, where a young babe is born to a rich family of high nobles. Her name was Araya. She was born with a strange birthmark on her palm of a rose petal.

In the other village of Agony, another babe was born to a high noble family. The babe's name was Garrow. He also had strange mark on his palm when he was born, bur of a thorn of a rose.

These two villages, Analgesia and Agony, were sworn enemies. There were constant battles between the two villages. Almost nearly everyday people were lost. The king couldn't do anything either. It didn't do any good because they still had conflicts in secret, so in the end the king left the matter in the villagers' hands. It was a hard life for everyone, and there was a lot of suffering among the two villages.

When both of the children were around four their parents brought them to a carnival in Galicia. There were fools, dare-devils, food, exotic animals from all around the world. The two children were really excited and so eventually they wondered around. They found each other looking at flying panda. The animal was cautious but let Araya and Garrow pet him. For a second they looked at each other until and then at their hands. They put their hands together and found the strange birthmark on their hands. It sort of tingled when the two rose parts came together. And then….

Yo dis my 1st fan fiction, so tell me if i should contiune AND LEAVE PLENTY OF COMMENTS!!!!!!!!!! i no its not so good and tell me wut i should improve

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Posted: 18 years ago
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are you kidding its great....... awesume...... continue sooon.... will be waiting......
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hey
great part. love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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