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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the PM!! YES you should continue to update when you can b/c its a rocking story!! Abhi to Rey ko last 5 years with Kria yaad nahi and Taarey ki wedding bhi to honi hai!!

But so far I love the taarey scenes, its so romantic😳 and i'm glad ke viaan ko bhi koi mil gaya, b/c as Taahira said he really is an angel and he deserves someone special! I love that even with Kria, Rey to sirf Taani ko pyaar karta tha and ya i also loved the Reyam convos 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
ok ok ok i am sorry kaan pakadke dear!
its just that kuch din se mai kuch personal cheez ki wajahse mood mein nahi thi itna bada update ek saath padhne ke liye!
i used to only read small one shots who don't require much time
but not i am here for you!😊
ok talking about part 28:
mindblowing update!👏
gang entry! i am happy with the way you portrayed it!
where is my fav. couple of your ff in this part? you know whom!😉
awwe the kids are so sweet!😳(especially samaira-i specifically liked her pic)
omg firse d3! yippie!
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 29:
again a very nice and funny update dear!😆
rey ke romance ki band baji n he threw water on his friends!🤣
i mean that was out of the world dear!😉😆
wow taarey passionate scene in the next one
please continue soon dearo!😊
now waiting for your updates
aur agar mai zyada time tak update na karu to tu mujhe humesha ki tarah pareshaan kar lena!
mai one go mei to comment kar hi deti hu!😆
speaking about comments
madam i guess you have not commented on my os gallery
chalo chalo abhi comment karo uspe!😆
Edited by nuckts - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sry sweety i I don't get time to read the chapter
So couldn't comment, te chapter was amazing and I also read that u r leaving the forum Plzzz don't do that than who will write all the amazing stories.
I knw u have ur studies but just cum on the forum some time we can wait for the update for as long as u want.
So plz don't tlk about leaving
Love u loadzzz
And again sry for the veryyy l8 comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorrryyy for the late comment...exams are a bad thing to happen!!!
But I loved the update...in fact I was so happy to see that you updated!!!
Finally the 3 D's of Rey's life are back!!!
And the promo was just wow!!!!!!!! Cant wait for it!!!

Please take as much time as you want but just dont quit IF...!!
I want to read both the eternal love story n 12 step journey!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
omg i still cant control my laughter dat water seen was simply D BEST

n ya abt ur question JITNA TIME U WANT TAKE IT
but dont stop writing PLZZZ

n dont quit IF yaar plzzz


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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry yaar
exams the na to comp pe aana hi band kiya tha maa
ne soory yar
kaan pakadke
cmmnt na kar paye
bt awsum update yaar
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Posted: 12 years ago
Plzzz update soon dear dyeing to read nxt prt... 😊 [EMAIL= ][/EMAIL][U][/U]
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey guys I m here with an update rather a taareylicious update 😆
guys thank u all for all the likes and comnts. they are really the only source of happiness in my life so please continue pouring in ur love.

CHAPTER 30

All of them entered the house and made themselves comfortable.

Each one of them had a glow on their faces . It seemed as if the whole environment was indicating to the world that the LOVE HAS MADE A GREAT VICTORY BY DEFEATING ALL PROBLEMS for all these couples. Sharon and Taani looked after the beverges and drinks.

Everyone was engrossed either with their life parters or with their friends but there were a couple of eyes that were popping in excitement and thrill but when no one gave them the attention then they cried their pains out by shouting and giving way to the squeezy voices : yes these were the sweet kids.

The scenario suddenly changed and now everyone was looking at the young attention grabbers.

They exchanged looks and then they gave a big laughter.

And the ladies got busy in looking after their cute angels'..

Rey: abbey yaar tum log bhi kuch bhi karte ho ?

I mean ekk sharat ke liye u guys adopted kids''

Everyone was a bit moved'..seeing someone calling their own kids adopted was happening for the first time.

They all were feeling really awkward but they knew that Rey is not in condition to see the clear picture so they all decided to be mum.

Vicky:haan dude but all this is because kaku didn't agree that I can be a good father !!!!!!

Taani was relieved that the gang will now look after the situation and the prankster boys were there to handle it all'.

Neha too used all her abilities of dramatics captain and said

Neha: Babu I said it because u can't !!!!!!!

And till the time I will be sure whether u can look after this baby , we will not at all think about our family'..

Viaan: oh please u don't want to have a family because you are scared of responsibilities and your so called looks and beauty ''.

Tahira : cut the crap Mr. Viaan we girls are more responsible than you but we are scared because we have our life partners like you'.Rey was surprised to see Tahira speaking openly to Viaan and he gave a " WHAAAT ?"look to her'.

Tahira : kya ???? yahan par sab couple mein hai to agar yeh single Viaan kuch bolega to girls ki taaf se main chup thodi na rahungi ?

She said angrily ''

Viaan: waise bhi tumhe jhagda shuru karne ke liye kabhi kissi reason ki zarurat thodi hai '.. (he too smirked)

He held his ears when nobody took notice and appologized to her.

While Tahira too gave Viaan a flying kiss''

She was over the top with all her actions so this gesture too Viaan made fall for her ''.

The gang was looking at Rey's face to read whether he is convinced or not''to make him believe the whole gang smirked at each other and signaled the start of drama'.

Nil: tum girls humare potential humesha underestimate karti ho na ?

Simmi: dude !!!!!!!

Plsss potential hai kahan tum logon mein ?

Rey smiled at Taani ''

Simmi blinked her evil eye'..

Bharat: abbey gaali di kya ????????

Ruk tujhe batata hun''

Vishakha : Bharat usne galli nahi di'.to tum chup rahe'..(and she faked anger)

Rey was again amused and he felt nice to be back with his group somehow he was feeling complete .

His heart spoke loud that " YES THIS IS MY LIFE" '''

He felt as if it was after ages that he met his true friends in life.

Sharon: waise to tum bahut romantic ho lekin kya baby dhyan rakh payogaye ?

Swayam: Sharon tum agar shaadi ke liye haan kaho to main kuch bhi karunga !!!!!! (he naughtily winked)

Sharon: acha itna over confidence to theek hai I accept challenge !!!!!

Agar tum baby ka dhyan theek se rakh paye to I ll marry u right then'.

Swayam: (faking excitement)

What ?

Everyone faked shocked and surprise.

Rey : seriously what ?

Dude that is a golden opportunity don't let it go !!!!!

He said it with a broad smile.

He hugged Swayam tightly'

Rey: I m so happy dude !!!!!!!!

Swayam (to himself) : abbey saale tujhe khush karne ke liye hi to itna sab kuch kar rahe hai.

Ab bhi khush nahi hoga to kab hoga ?

Smirked at Sharon'..

Rey then walked up to Taani and hugged her.

Rey: thank u Taani inn sab ko yahan bulane ke liye and mujhe itna happy karne ke liye'.

Taani had tears in her eyes''

Taani : (to herself) aap par bharosa karti to yeh nahi hota'. To isliye don't thank me Rey rather I should thank u ki aap vaapas meri life mein aaye.

She smiled while her tears continued to wet the surface area of her cheeks.

Taani signaled Swayam something and just within a second Swayam understood that Taani meant the start of plan B'.

He signaled to the the whole group and the all the members enthusiastically marked the beginning of plan B'..

Rey was staring at the kids and and the then at the faces of his friends''

And after a detailed analysis he exclaimed with a puzzled face''

Rey: guys u know I understood that u adopted kids but u know what the kids totally resemble you all''

Everyone was shocked and they were clueless about the answers to the questioning scenario.

They looked at each other excepting an explanation or in a hope that one of them manages the situation'..

Taani stepped in and tried to control the situation.

Taani: haan rey you are right''but its just a coincidence na'..

Rey:haan but''

Vicky: arrey dude what ?

Stop investigating and chal I will intoduce to our lovely angels''

Rey made his way to the lobby dubbies ''

Viaan: hey guys I got to go as I have some problem in the office'.

Rey: what happened dude all okkk na ????

Viaan: no Rey actually there are some international sponsers willing to work with us but they need a dance troop to publice there work''its their creative input you know !!!!!!

So I have planned so many auditions of about million troops but they didn't like any''

Rey: stood up with a jerk''hey but we are there na ??????????

So why auditions'..

Everyone was thrilled as their plan was going great. They all faked surprise and shock .

Viaan too showed that Tahira had affected him and his personality by showing his acting talent and his impeccable expressions .

Viaan: ya right !!!!!!!

How could I miss this angle ?????

Tahira (to herself): mera prince charming to super awesome hai kya acting karta hai ?????

She was standing their smiling showing her bright white 32 teeth''

Sharon noticed this. She nugged Tahira and whispered to her'.

Sharon: why are you smiling at Viaan for the past few minutes ?????

Taahira: what ????

Main ????

(she was nervous as she was caught )

But before she could answer Taani continued her conversation with Viaan'

Taani: yes Viaan the D3 group is gonna perform for you !!!!!!

What say everyone??????

The group exchanged looks for a few seconds'

Taani( to herself) : why are they not replying'..

And suddenly they shouted in unison "Yes ofcourse we will do this for Viaan"

Tahira: cool '.so I take care of the clothes

Taani: and I will babysit your lovely angels she said it pulling Raghav's cheeks ''

Viaan: But guys it is gonna be huge stage show so Rey are you ready for it ?

Rey: ya dude I am ''waise bhi lagta hi iss event ke baad mujhe mere kafi questions ka answer milne wala hai.

All of them were quite for a minute they did not know how to respond . they were hiding so much that if comes out at a go it is going to be a great trouble for all of them.They could not make an eye contact.

Suddenly Nil spoke breaking the silence hey guys lets gear up as Viaan said it's a huge event so we must start the rehersal soon.

Rey: yes u right .

Swayam:Lets start from tomorrow morning at my Club

Rey looked at him with his perplexed brown eyeballs'.

Rey: Ur club ??????

Swayam: wo '..wo I mean my dad has bought a new club that has a rehersal hall so lets reherse there'.

Rey: oh ok '.

Swayam: ( to himself) Oh god isse jaldi theek karo warna main pagal ho jaaoga !!!!!!

He said it looking upwards'

Sharon noticed this and smiled at his antics.

Rey: ok guys lets meet tomorrow morning for rehersal.

So good nite.

Bharat: abbey tu hume bhagana chaahta hai kya?

Nil: arrey dude understand na hum jayen gaye tabhi yeh log romance kar payenge na ?????

(he smirked)

And everyone gave a big laughter.

Taani was red listening this, Swayam was feeling a bit awkward.

Rey: oh guys shut up and leave !!!!!!!!!

Vicky: yehi sanskar diye mummy papa ne ,mehman bhagwan ke jaisa hota hai and u are insulating your guest !!!!

Not good'.

None could resist and their smile broadened.

Swayam: ok guys now lets leave. Its quite late.its going to be a hectic day for Rey tomorrow so he must rest properly .

Viaan: Ya lets leave.

Rey bid farewal to the cute angels and kissed them.

Taani too did the same but she was constantly looking at Rey's face that was illuminated like a Diwali night.

Everyone left and Rey went to his room and sat on the bed and smilied .

Taani too followed him and she was too delighted to see Rey happy.

She was standing at the door looking at Rey who was lost in his own thoughts and rejoicing the beautiful moments.

After a few minutes Rey looked at Taani and was surprised to see her standing at the door.

Rey: hey Taani tum kabse aise khadi ho ?

And what are you doing at door ?

Come here na !

Taani moved closer to him and sat on the bed .

Rey held her hands '..and his eyes had tears.

Rey: na jaane kyun Taani par aisa laga ki saalon baade apni zindagi se mila hun'.

Saalon baad apne doston aur apne pyar ko itna kareeb se mehsus kiya hai''I m feeling complete today Taani.

He started shivering and this even made Taani shiver and she was too in tears.

Rey: thank you Taani meri life mein itni happiness lane ke liye , mujhe itna special feel karvane ke liye, meri dil ki har baat ko mere bina kahe samjhne ke liye aur mujhe apni zindagi se zyada pyar karne ke liye'..

Thank you so much Taani. I love You.

And he hugged her tightly. Taani too did the same and soon they were lost in each other's arms.

Taani: Don't thank me Rey . What I did for u is ordinary but your love me is extraordinary.

You have given me everything in life.

Your love had no conditions and no demands so you completed me as an individual.

Rey ke bina Taani kuch nahi hai Rey. Taani aur Rey mil kar hi Taarey banate hai to isliye aap mujhe thank you matlab bolo.

I love You rey more than anything in this world.

The two were badly sobbing. The aura of the room was totally different dim lights , a couple in each other's arms crying their pain and sharing their happiness. The rose frangance of the room freshner was pumping high rate of blood to their bodies.

Rey held Taani's face in his parms and kissed her foreheld. Taani's blood froze, she was craving for his touch throughout her life. She clinched her dress tightly , his touch was making her fall for him over and over again.He gently put her curly hair aside and reached her shoulder, he rubbed his chin on her shoulder and put away the straps of her dress.He unzipped the dress making her back go bare.Taani wanted to stop him but the warmth in his touch didn't give her any opportunity for the same.

He placed endless wet kisses on her shoulder and pulled her more towards him. She was now too close to feel his breath, she was shivering in anxiety. She arched his back while he gently put his lips over hers. Soon they lips were locked and their tongues were twisted and they were tasting each other's saliva but were not ready to separate. Her luscious lips were rubbed against his. She was caressing his back that made him pour more and more wildness in the kiss.

This passionate moment lasted for a few minutes and then they were out of breath. Taani's eyes were close as she was too lost in the ecstasy of the moment.Rey then took her in her arms and made her lie on the bed ,very calming undressing her, he too laid naked next to her.

They were lost in each other's embrace and found it hard to even look away from each other's eyes.

His coziness was making it difficult to control her self so she hugged him tightly and made her nails pierce through his skin. He moved his fingers on her bare body while she tried not to look at him as she was too shy.

Rey were calmly pulled a chiffon blanket over them and switched of the lights .

And then they were lost in the beauty of the night that made them one forever and ever.

bas bas it has ended😆😆😆😆
stop ur heart 😉 naughty ppl 😆
PRIYANKA DI I HOPE NOW THE PASSION AND LOVE WASNT LESS 😆😆😆😳😳😳😳
NOTE: all the lazy ones please comnt yar, I knw that I m not quoting the comnts because of shortage of tym but guys, I do read them ol. trust me after a hectic day the only thngs dat make me relaxed and happy.
so pls like and comnt.
PRECAP : AS U ALL KNW THAT THE STORY IS AWAITING ITS BIGGEST TWIST where rey will regain his memory SO TODAY HERE I M PRESENTING THIS VM BY NAWREEN DI TO SHOW WAT THE STORY HOLDS.
ENJOY
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Edited by shivi77 - 12 years ago
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sabse pehle maafi plzz yr kya kru har baar late bt koi nhi abhi toh maine kr diya naa bass ab lo suno
dii kuch kehne ki zarurat hai u know dis was sooo awesome super duper mast fab cute lovely romantic update or words yaad nhi aye hehehe koi nhi koi nhi fir kabhi hehehe by d way really it was too good plz update soon n dont forget 2 pm me 😉
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