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Happy to see your new FF...
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loved the beginning and the bg
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Congrats on the new FF!!
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Originally posted by: Shruthe

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Yahoo a new ff.
Congo.

Characters r intresting.
Both Maan n Geet r different.

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New FF.. Wow...
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me too excited yet nervous to see your reactions.
and yes IMPT NOTE:

1) guys do let me know if you need the translations.
pls reply so that i can go accordingly. It would save a lot of my time😳

2) language..ahem..If you have any problem with it, do pm me 😊


PART 1



She signed those admission forms for her MBA college and sent them off. The maid was already there with her breakfast tray with whatever she liked. She loved to be pampered and nothing should go wrong in that. soon as the servant was dismissed, the maid immediately served her food. She took off her specs and kept it aside. Her father came to join her and kissed her forehead, "Good Morning Princess..."

She smiled, "good morning dad..."

Her posture, her expressions, her way of speaking everything seemed to scream out her status in the society and she knew very well how to use them to her own benefit.


"how come you are up so early today?"

She nibbled on her food, "admissions dad... and am in for a day out with my friends..."

Before Mohinder could say anything, Nisha joined them, patting Geet's head, "Geet... naya college join kar rahi hain tu... at least abhi tho apne baal badha le..."

[Geet...you are joining new college... at least now grow your hairs..]

"Chachi please... not again. This is cool and am comfortable with it..."

Nisha rolled her eyes, "geet you are growing up...you will get married in a few years..."

"Chachi please...", she gave her verdict, not wanting to speak anything further. And everything was done as she wanted...even her own father wasn't spared. Nisha looked away, defeated and murmured, "Parkati...huh!"

Geet arched her brows, "I heard that chachi..."

"tho meine galat thode kaha..Parkati..."

[so did I say wrong..Parkati...]


Geet was so used to chachi calling her Parkati but she always wondered why she was called so... parkati means the one whose wings are cut...she is neither a bird nor a fairy that her wings would be cut. But she'd never stop arguing with her on that. she finished off her breakfast an ran out.

"Geet...you better be back early...its not safe late night...", Chachi screamed from behind, even though knowing she wouldn't listen. Geet just ran out, carrying her bag. Nisha sighed, "what will I do with this girl!!"

"don't restrict her nisha", Mohinder interrupted, "she would never do anything wrong... she is my pride after all..."

Geet ran out to see her friends already there, waiting for her in the car. She hi-fived them and jumped into the car and drove off.

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HE stood by the window of his 20th floor suite and looked at the city below. They looked so tiny in front of him. He felt two hands slide across his bare chest and she pressed herself close to him. he sighed but didn't even hold her back.

"good morning...", Sana whispered, biting his ears. he pushed her hands away very coldly. Sana was surprised. She held on to the sheets close to her and went close again.

"its time you should leave...", he just gave his word and she knew he meant it. but still, she gathered courage and slid her finger sexily down his lips, "How come you are not so ruthless on bed Maan?"

He gave her a cold look as if he didn't care, "I pitied you Sana...I would not like to see you here when I come back sweetheart..."

He pushed her hand away from him and slipped on his white shirt and walked out with attitude. He did know how to kill sweetly. Sana just watched him walk out. He was cold, he was ruthless and he didn't have a heart—that's what Sana concluded.


He put on his sun glasses and walked out for his meeting. He didn't even bother to button his shirt properly. Every inch of his oozed confidence and pride. The valet was there with his car already. He took the keys of his convertible and drove off. He took to the highway not before buying a coke in a nearby store. He let the roof down, enjoying the cold breeze and the dew soaked sun. He drove in one hand while opened the coke with the other.


He sipped in his drink when he saw a car coming towards him with speed. Both the cars were fast so none realized that they could have hit each other. When they came very near, it seemed they might collide. Maan immediately turned his car away while Geet's friend tried to dodge their car to the other side. Geet was standing in their convertible, enjoying the morning when the sudden turn almost threw her out. She held the dashboard for support and immediately turned to face the driver of the other car.


"You as****e...", she screamed. He did turn back to see that inconsiderate prick who tried to kill him, though not hearing anything. Their eyes met for a second...may be less than that..but it did. Everything just happened in the blink of an eye. She ignored it..and he did the same too, mentally swearing on each other. And they parted. He drove to his client selected venue, sipping his coke while she drove away to their usual hangout stations.

He threw the empty can right in front of the venue and adjusted his glasses properly. People knew who he was and what kind of personality he carried. Whoever was present, wished him but he cared a damn. He went to the conference hall and sat down, waiting for his counterpart. He absolutely hated being made to wait.


Geet and her friends went around the city, to some of her friends' places, who seemed to share equal status as her. she met up with her other friends, Rahul, Jazz etc. They sat together, chatting for a while, sipping their drinks at jazz's home bar. They spoke of admissions and stuffs.

Rahul sat beside Geet, holding a drink, "Are you going to kill those guys at your new college...looking sexy Geet..."

She gave him a sarcastic look, "Come straight to the point rahul...are you trying to flirt with me?"

"Honestly yes babes... and falsely no.."

Geet just turned away from him coldly, "then you should perhaps go to some bi*** who buys such stuffs...babes!"

"woah...good one Geet..", her friends teased rahul but he just ignored. Geet had always been like this and rahul never stopped. They sat there speaking about stuffs when jazz spoke up.

"Guys... I would like you to meet my boyfriend..."


Everyone was super excited about this new guy. Geet maintained her composure, sipping her drink while jazz brought him in front of everyone, there were screams and sighs but Geet just kept on looking at him. he did look good.. and he did look sexy as well. he shook hands with everyone and came to Geet, extending his hand.

She just gave him a look..and then winked. He was surprised by that. she slid her hands sexily into his and leaned closer, whispering into his ears, "welcome to our little world Mr..."

He smiled and offered, "Arjun.."

She smiled and very sleekly moved away, holding her glass. Jazz rolled her eyes knowing Geet's flirty nature. She was a person who could probably flirt with anyone but would not take when someone flirts with her..especially rahul. She sighed and pulled Arjun to her side, glaring at Geet. Geet caught her gaze and winked at her, telling her intentions. As they continued, Arjun invited all to the disc for the night..to celebrate his and jazz's link up. Everyone was excited and so was Geet.


She walked in wearing a short red off shoulder dress. Her dark hair was left loose and her lips were coloured blood red. He just took off his glasses and checked her out from top to bottom. She did look sexy. She sat beside him with an apologetic look, "am sorry Mr khurana to have made you wait..."

He gave his lopsided smile, looking at her intently, "Apology accepted Ms Myra..but I would have liked it more if you could have given more time to your work rather than your attire..."

"You sure know how to kill sweetly... don't you mr khurana...", she spoke, putting her one leg over the other, giving him a clear view of her white sexy legs, her red stilettos giving a red hot look...and things just happened.


He walked out, holding Myra by her waist, surprising everyone out there. She dropped him by his car and he put on his glasses again.

"see you tonight then...", she kissed his cheeks before he drove off.

"see you guys tonight then..."jazz chimed as she and arjun left in a different car, leaving Geet and rest behind.

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next: they met...and it was Toxic

Next: PART 2

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