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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vrushanharshi

interesting promo

n update wen u feel better
1st take care of urself
thanks for pm
will be waiting for next update
but i wont say update soon intead get well soon...

thanks a lot dear n u r welcome will be updating in a while :D
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: prakriti4u

awesome promo!! 👍🏼
totally excited to read the upcoming chapter.. 😆
it's gonna be interesting!!!
update whenever u feel like 😃
will wait for ur update...
thank u for the PM dear 🤗

thanks a lot dear will be updating in few and u r welcome
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Nikiee

Awsome promo but please just dont make Swayam fall in love with Ganga :P

hehhehe will try dear 😳 and thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanks a lot guys for your lovely comments, support and wishes. My back is still there but when I felt a little better so wrote the update and stopped as soon back pain came back. So it's kind of short. I hope you guys understand. Please do comment.

Part 10

He reached her and holds her from her upper arms. She was shocked and scared too and somehow manages to ask "what… ar….are yo……ou d….doing?" He doesn't reply and kept staring in her fear filled eyes which were on the verge of crying. As she doesn't get any reply she pleads "leave me, please" and a tear rolled down her beautiful eyes. But he didn't care his hatred was stronger than his good side at the moment. He didn't care about anything but the pain she gave it to him. His hold on her upper arms gets tighter and tighter. "Aaah" she screamed in pain "you are hurting me" she said while tears rolled down her eyes. "After giving me such a big pain of a life time you are talking about yours" he said showing all his venom through his tone and eyes.

"What did I do?" Sharon asked not understanding anything. Listening to her, he leaves her no he pushes her away from him. "You know what? You are not worth it, neither for my hatred nor for my explanations. I am done with you" saying this he turns around and sits in his car and drove away roughly.

Sharon was numbed and has no idea what happened with her in these past few minutes. She looked aimlessly at the car going away with speed. She looked around her surroundings there was nothing around her, simply nothing. With teary eyes and feeling of chill due to the cold night she started walking in that dark and scary street.

Aye thay jis ghar hum duniya choray

Uss k hi dar pe sapnay toray

Tuney churaliya joh daman

Ja rab rakhay tujhe sajan

Meri dua mera rab tere sung dholna

Ja b gai tere hi sung dholna

After walking for a long time Sharon reaches a taxi stand. Rubbing her hands and arms she walks up to one of the taxis and hires it and leaves still silently crying. On the other hand, Swayam reaches his all time favorite place 'beach'. He would go there when he is very happy or sad and especially at night. He loves the calmness of that place, a wide sky with a never ending sea, cold breeze, the stars and moon lighting and making the waves glow and the sands glitter. He parked his car and came out and sat on the bonnet. He always does that to feel the wind and to be able to listen the sounds of waves clearly.

tanhai
sang dil tanhai sang laai yaad teri sang laai
baar baar woh bahaar phir se yaad aayi
sooni sooni raah dil ki jisne thi sajaai
tanha dil
roya re dil roya re

He clutches his hairs remembering her seeing after many years for the first time in club. He then remembers her dance, talks, fight and her real self. The more he thinks the more helpless he feels and anger was increasing every single second. Only thing he remembers or knows is that she ruined everything. He sits there for an hour or so while crying and thinking about his past and finally he decides to leave for home.

After a while, THAP a sound of door closing makes Ganga jerk up from her bed. She thinks lagta hai sahab ghar aa hi gaey itni dair se. magar itni zor se darwaza patka kyun? Woh toh bilkul shor nahi kartay. Aur kabhi zayada pi (drink) k bhi nahi atay k unse sambhla na jaey. Crack another sound brings Ganga back to world. It was a different sound unlike the door shutting voice that came earlier. She was scared to death she slowly gets off from her bed and walks towards the door and picks the vase nearby and thinks gaon (village) ki chori hoon chor (theif) ki sahi ki dholai kr doongi. She opens the door and 'Aaah' two loud voices echoes in the house. Swayam who was walking towards her room to check if she is ok as he never gets very late and she was all alone and Ganga who was ready to beat the thief both gets scared seeing each other. "What the hell you think you doing?" Swayam screams afraid of the vase that was about to hit him. "w…woh" Ganga struggles with words and Swayam repeats again this time a little bit calm than before "yeh tum kiya kr rahi thi? mujhe lag jati toh?" "Who m…mujhe laga chor hai kyun k ap shor nahi kartay jb ghar atay hain" Ganga replies innocently. "Sorry" Swayam replies and goes out again unable to control his emotions and doesn't wanted to break in from of her. She sees him go out and doesn't know what happened to him and why he left like this when he just came home. She stands there for a while and thinks kiya karoon bahir ja kar dekhoon? Sahaab dukhi lag rahay hain mujhse zayada laray bhi nahi. Ja kar dekhti hoon kiya kar lainge dant he dainge haina? Theek hai toh mei ja kar dekhti hoon yahi sahi rahay ga. Deciding to go check on him she walks towards the door and slowly opens it while feeling the door opening Swayam wipes his tear which doesn't get unnoticed by Ganga.

*Part 10 Ends*

Hey guys I know it was short and as promised the reason or secret isn't revealed in this update. But as you can see I am on it so next update will have it so no worries you guys will know about it in next update. Just a little more patience and support all that I want from you guys. Please forgive me for the short update and mistakes if you find any and also if songs selection wasn't good as couldn't think much at 1 at night.

Please do comment as they mean a lot to me.

And ya one last thing, no one is planning to make banner for this FF right? As I haven't receive any pm or scrap related to it except one and wanted to make sure. And this is my last call for the banner and anything you guys want to do for Swaron or me. After this no reminders will be out for this FF.

Love you all

TaSha

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey great update tasha..and ganga thinking swayam as chor was really well written😆...and short update toh theek hai but u said this one will have some revealation but nothing was there😡anyway i understand ur not well so its ok but next update mein i want some revealation or else no comment😈


GET WELL SOON😉😳
Edited by ChaitraJoshi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey tasha I loved the update.. Swayam's anger frustration and sharon's innocence about not knowing in what way has she harmed and ruined swayam's life.. I loved the part when ganga thinks swayam is a thief and wants to beat him black and blue being a gao ki chori.. 😆. Ill wait for the next update to know the real reason why swayum has feelings of hatred towards sharon.. U take care and get well soon.. 😊 . Loved the update.. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Thnx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
TaSha, loved the update, dear...
The way you wrote about Swayam's feelings was amazing..
His anger, frustration and the outburst..
But, why is he angry??
What has sharon to do with it..
How was his past ruined..
Waiting eagerly for all these questions to be answered..
Loved the way you desvribed the beauty of that beach scene...
Haha!!! Ganga thinking Swayam as a thief was funny...
Loved that scene...
Eager to know what happens next...
Update after you get well..
Take care..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Short but sweet , waiting for the next update, tc 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey nice update dear...
swayam chor was superb...
gang is gang...
they can do or think anything...
anyways loved ur writing...
take care...
get well soon...
n after u get well do update...

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