Asya OS: Their Story *Updated Part 2 on pg4*

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mrsNiallHoran

@mrsNiallHoran

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: linu199627
You know i skipped some parts cuz i dont want to cry...😉...!!!!so painful nd touching story..🤔...
.in the serial if it happens i will sit and cry for sure😆

Great job yaar...you desrve dis👍🏼

Well I hope u liked whatever you did read 😊 Trust me if this happened in the show I would be sobbing and freaking out 😆 Thx for your comment! 😃

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mrsNiallHoran

@mrsNiallHoran

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: yashasvi_88
hats off to u... u made me cry... u sholud write more often

Aww thank you! 😆 I'm trying to write more, in hopes that I'll improve as a writer 😃 I'm planning on writing another story, that will be more light hearted and not sad at all 😆 I think it will be an OS but if it's too long I might make it a SS@ We'll see!

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rajnid68

@rajnid68

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

oops i had tears by the time i finished...which i rarely do..

your flare in this story was awesome...

love to read moe

re of ur works..

do pm when ever u pen...

oh thanxs for the lovely piece of work

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JeeLeZaraa

@JeeLeZaraa

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

very emotional ! nicely written

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Aishah8

@Aishah8

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Crying so sad! But very well written

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Revelio

@Revelio

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Girl, what have u done to me?! I'm crying and smiling right now! Plz next time make a happy story, i cant stand a sad ending and that to ur extraordinary writing skills which is making me cry rivers right now. And u described every scene so beautifully that I could imagine each scene so vividly. U r seriously awesome, that's all I can say.

Edited by stereohearts200 - 12 years ago

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Fimmy

@Fimmy

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

awesome n emotional part!
loved it!

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mrsNiallHoran

@mrsNiallHoran

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: rajnid68
oops i had tears by the time i finished...which i rarely do..
your flare in this story was awesome...
love to read moe
re of ur works..
do pm when ever u pen...
oh thanxs for the lovely piece of work

Aww! Thank you! I'm glad I could make you cry..I think? Lol 😆 I wrote another OS Too late writing a FF Love's Sacrifice and I'm planning on writing a happier OS soon. Ill pm you when I write it 😃