hey guys! mai bohot confused thi ki kaunsa update karoon! because i had two leading stories one is this one taarey ss prince charming which is my first story n other one is taayam ff raksha bandhan, the all time popular! though taayam ff got more votes i decided to update taarey ss prince charming! hope you guys are happy! ok guys ye part 10 ka title padhke mat bhaag jana! n to make it a little bit funny i added my comments on some dialogues in bold letters! i didn't intend to hurt anyone's sentiments! here you go-PART 10: GHANCHAKKAR BABU
It was a bright morning n both weird creatures (rey and taani) in the house were sleeping with a smile plastered on the face. Rey hugging the pillow while she hugging her teddy buddy. Suddenly taani's phone rang. She gets irritated with this and cuts the call even without seeing who was it. The person who called her again dialled her number again to put down his call by taani. Then he got irritated and little bit worried. Just before he could get horribly negative thoughts about this he called rey. Here his phone ringed.
Sun oye ghanchakkar babu
Tere chakkar hain bekabu
Hua bheja talke saabudana re!
Confused? Arey guys it was his new ringtone!š His ringtone continues!
Karta apne mann ki
Bhook badi hai dhan ki
Sabne tujhko sanki mana re(maine bhi mana)
Oh lutiya, oh khatiya, oh lungi
Continuous thukkamm patti
He half opened his eyes n took phone in his hands.(oh thank god! Ghanchakkar babu ne zyada chakkar nahi lagwaye uss person se)
Rey taking the call- kaun hai itni subah subah?
Person- tera best friend!
Rey- oh hi Sharon but tumhari awaz ko kya hua? Bilkul swayam jaisi lag rahi hai! Lagta hai uski yaad me tum uske jaisi ban gayi ho! Aur batao tabiyat kaisi hai tumhari?(still sleepy)
Person- abe kamine meri awaaz swayam jaisi hai kyunki mai swayam hi hoon sharon nahi! Please mera jender mat change kar!(bechare ka gender change mat karo)
Rey- oh good morning saale!(haaye shaadi kab hui taarey ki? Mujhe nahi bulaya!!!*angry*)š”š¤£
Swayam- what! Saala! Tune kahin taani ke saath kuch aisa waisa toā¦ urgh! Isiliye taani mera phone kaat rahi thi! Hai na?(WTH!!! Wo sab bhi ho gaya aur hume kuch khabar nahin!!!!)
Rey fully awake now- ae tu kya bak raha hai? Paagal ho gaya hai kya?(paagal to mai ho jaaungi)
Swayam- to saala kyun bulaya mujhe?(ab saale ko saala nahi to kya sasurji bulaayega?)š
Rey- yaar mai pehle bhi to bulata tha! Ab kya ho gaya?
Swayam- haan pehle tu taani ke saath poori raat akele ek chat ke neeche to nahi tha na!(swayam sach batao! Kahin jealousy to nahi ho rahi? Tum dono ka dostana!!! Haaye ab taani n Sharon ka kya hoga!)š²š¤£
Rey- swayam don't you trust me? Urgh aisa kuch nahi hua hai! Che I didn't know tu mujhe aisa samajhta hai!(hum to bohot kuch samajhte hain! Swayam se bhi gaye guzre!)
Swayam- oh sorry rey! Ab taani baar baar mera phone kaat rahi thi to mann me ajeeb ajeeb khayal aa rahe the! Wo uth gayi hai kya?(ab subah subah bheja fry karoge to phone kaategi na! These boys urgh! I tell you!)
Rey- mujhe kya pata? Mai khud abhi utha hoon!(lazy lad)
Swayam- to jaake dekh na!
Rey- haan jaata hoon!(mann me laddoo phoota)
Rey goes out n opens the door of her room. He just get lost in the beautiful scene before him. Here swayam was calling him out.(kyun chilla rahe ho! Dekhne do use shaanti se)
Swayam- rey!!!!(shouting very loudly which startled rey)
Rey- haan? Haan? Kya hua?(pyaar hua! Tumko pyaar hua! Poori hui duaa!)
Swayam- tabse bula raha hoon! No response!
Rey- wo mai iss sundar nazaare me kho gaya tha!(nazaara? Kahaan hai? Rey wait for me! I want to see that nazaara! Hum bhi to dekhe aisa kya hai ki rey janab kho gaye)
Swayam- kaunsa nazaara?
Rey realizes what he was going to tell- wo tere ghar ke bahaar ka nazaara! Kitna beautiful hai!
Swayam- accha? Maine kabhi notice nahi kiya! Ek minute tujhe taani ke bare me poocha tha maine!(wahi to kar raha tha bechara! Lekin tumhari behen khoobsurat nazaara kabse ban gayi? Ab tak to 7 wonders me taani ka naam shamil ho jana chahiye tha!)š¤£
Rey- haan wo so rahi hai!
Swayam- ok tu use jaga! Mai abhi wahaan ke liye nikalta hoon phir hum sab saath me jaayenge!(oye koi mere swayu ko kabab me haddi mat bolo! But still I agree! Kabab me haddi kahinka)š¤£
Rey- ok bye!(he again started looking at the beauty)
He started walking towards her. He sat beside her. She was looking so cute that he felt an sudden urge to kiss her. He bent down n kissed her softly(oye mere besharam taareyians!*neha style* Forehead par kiss giving he is! Hmm naughty minded you all areš³)
He gave a sweet kiss on her forehead which made her move a little bit. He called her.
Rey- taani!(haaye kitne pyaar se naam le rahe ho! Suraj kahaan se uga hai aaj?)
Taani opened her eyes n saw rey infront of her. She thought it was a dream.
Taani- aap kitne dino baad phir mere sapne me aaye hain!(kyun sapne wale rey ne vacation li thi kya?)š¤£
Rey- taani tum sapna nahi dekh rahi ho! Mai hoon yahaan pe haqeekat me!(haaye abhi tak dream wala rey vacation pe hai!)š²š¤£
Taani fully opens her eyes n gets up n sits on her bed.
Taani- aap yahaan kya kar rahe hain?
Rey- wo tumhe uthaane aaya tha!
Taani- aapko kisne uthaya? I mean aapko dekhkar lagta nahi ki aap apne aap uth gaye!(don't worry taani! Kuch saalon baad tum hi roz rey ko subah uthaaogi)
Rey- swayam ne uthaya!
Taani looks at him weirdly- bhai ghar bhi aa gaye n aapko uthaane gaye?
Rey- oh hello! Aisa waisa mat socho! Wo usne abhi phone kiya tha! Tum uska phone kaat rahi thi na isliye!
Taani- accha to bhai the jo itni subah subah phone kar rahe the!
Rey- accha tum ready ho jaao n please jaake breakfast banao! I am feeling like elephants mere pet me circus kar rahe ho!(haww! Rey tumhara pet itna bada hai ki elephants bhi sama gaye!!!š² N mujhe nahi pata tha wahaan circus bhi hota hai!š Meri taraf se saare tickets booked! Mai saare taareyians ko leke aaungi!)š¤£
Taani laughs- ok ok! Aap jaayiye n brush karke aayiye! Muh se baas aa rahi hai! N naha bhi lijiye warna aas paas ke saare phool badboo se murjhaa jaayenge!(arey humaara pc/laptop/mobile kharab ho jaayega! Jaldi nahake aao!)š
Rey- what the hell!(haww rey tum hell bhi ghoomke aa gaye? Hum taareyians ko nahi bulaya!:( tumhare saath to hell bhi heaven lagta hum sabko)š
Taani laughing hardly- mazaak kar rahi hoon! Ab jaayiye!(mujhe laga tum sach bol rahi thi)š¤£
Rey goes from there.
Rey on the way- huh! Subah subah insult kardi meri!(ahan! Rey you again MU taani! Insult to maine ki)š
Taani goes n freshen up n goes to prepare breakfast. Breakfast was ready but rey was still in swayam's room. She gets irritated as it was a long enough for a person to take a bath n get ready.(me too wonder this! Girls ka to samajhme aata hai but why do boys take so much time to get ready! Urgh these boys I tell you!)š”
She goes n opens the door n she was just rooted to her place and was looking at rey with eyes open wide. Rey looks at the door n sees her n tries to wraps a shirt on his body.(I know you guys are also longing to see him like that)
Rey- taani! Aise kya dekh rahi ho? Muh udhar karo! Knock karke nahi aa sakti thi!(apni property par nazrein gadana is totally fair! Kyun kare muh udhar? N tumhe kya padi thi shirtless ghoomne ki?š¤£ Oo to hum sabko impress kar rahe the)š³
Taani- maine aapko pehle bhi shirtless dekha hai!(haan do baar! N humne bhi dekha hai tumhe aise kayi baar)āŗļø
Rey- taani I am just in a towel for god's sake muh udhar karo!(kyun kuch pehen ne ko nahi mila?)š¤£
Taani looks at rey fully n realizes that he had just wrapped a towel over his body. She turns around quickly.
Taani- ah wo aap itne der se kya kar rahe hain?(lagta hai nahate nahate bathroom me so gaya tha)
Rey- wo mujhe samajhme nahi aa raha ki kya pehnu!(rey stop behaving like girls)
Taani gets irritated n forgets that rey is in a towel and turns to him. She goes near him who was near swayam's cupboard finding something for him.
Taani- bhai ka itna bada wardrobe hai! Kuch bhi utha lijiye!(wahi to! Hey Krishna ji! Iss rey ko kuch sadbuddhi dijiye)
Rey trying to cover his body- taani tum kya kar rahi ho?(wahi jo tum kuch der pehle kar rahe the! Kudrat ke iss sundar nazaare ko nihar rahi hai)
Taani shuts her eyes tightly n says sorry. Rey gets lost in her innocence but suddenly he realises that he was in a towel infront of a girl. Rey grabs a shirt and jeans from the cupboard n barges into the bathroom. He again peeps his head out of the bathroom only to see taani still standing there with her eyes closed.
Rey- ab aankhein khol sakti ho!
Taani opens her eyes n founds rey is not infront of her.(the invisible man ban gaya hoga)
Taani- rey aap mujhe nahi dikh rahe par sunayi de rahe hain! Kahin aap Mr India to nahi ho gaye!(*neha style* nahiii! Ye kya anarth ho gaya)
Rey from inside the bathroom- mai Mr India nahi bana hoon taani! I am in the bathroom!(oh chalo chain ki saans lo sab)
Taani- ok aap jaldi ready hokar bahaar aa jaayiye! Mai jaati hoon!
Taani goes outside n thinks about what happened seconds ago.
Taani in her mind- unki body kitni hot hai! Wait a minute! What the hell I am thinking! Taani control!(wah maan gaye tumhe! Mai hoti to I wouldn't be able to control)
Taani was in the hall when rey comes there. Both look in one another eyes. Taani got a little bit conscious. Seeing this rey moved towards her butā¦ dhapp! Rey fell down with taani under him. Taani forgot to tell that water has just fallen on the floor. Both got lost in each other for god know how much time.(guys let's skip this look look hawa hawa part otherwise you all will get bored! Wo kya hai eyelock dekhne me accha lagta padhne me nahi)
After 15 minutes-
Someone outside the home was ringing the bell for the 100th time but no response.(itna kho gaye ek doosre me taarey) Oh it is our possessive and protective typical indian bro swayam shekhawat.(oho! Taarey to gaye kaam se) He rang the bell for one more time.(I think shagun ke liye! You know guys 101)š¤£
Swayam- koi darwaza kyun nahi khol raha hai yaar! Urgh chodo! Mai hi duplicate key se darwaza khol leta hoon!(uribaba! Ekhana ki ghatabe! Sorry excitement took over hehe! Matlab- ab kya hoga!!!)š²
He took out the key n put it in the key hole. Two scenes are shown. In one swayam putting the key n trying to open the door n other side taarey on the floor lost in each other.
ok guys that's it! chappal tamatar sab allowed hain par mera kuch nahi jaayega! aap logon ke laptop/pc ka screen kharab ho jaayega! guys nahi poochoongi kaisa laga! bohot crazy tha na? i don't maine wo title kya samajhkar rakha! mai paagal ho gayi hoon guys! bear my craziness! do comment n accha laga ho to like bhi kar dena!
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