MANVEER FF.. UNEXPECTED LOVE chppy 5 pg 34 :D pm tomorrow - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
tis is awesome...
really nice...
luv the full concept...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
CANT WAIT FOR THIS ITS SIMILAR TO VEER ZARA
PM ME SOON
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: -Sans-

nyc CS👍🏼
update kb aayega??,

thanx de dungi wait ... kar le 😳😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi



NIce prologue Kritika.👏.i loved the concept..this will be definitely different..n i love diff concept😊...update 1st chapter soon

thanx gargi meri jaan... kk i will update soon 😳😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: prernakhandelwa

nice cs...update soon...nd thnx for pm...

thanx 😳😳😳 n ya i will update soon ... ur welcome 😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: anushruthi

nice CS

Cont soon
thanks for the PM

thanx ... 😳😳😳

n ur welcome ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: anushruthi

nice CS

Cont soon
thanks for the PM

thanx 😳😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guyz howz u '.. I hope u guyz gud so u guyz like my prologue n concept n character sketch also thanqu so much guyz I know I m late latif but mai de deti hu huh ' thanqu bolne ki zaroorat nhi hai so here the 1st update of unexpected love '. I hope u guyz like it '.its really different concept n its really difficult for me to write this type of story n really I m trying my best if u guyz gave me not a gud response so I discontinue this story if u like it so plz do comment n like also so I will continue this story so here ur update plz forgive me for my grammitical mistake love u '..

Unexpected love

Chapter 1



Mom dad today I m 20 years old n I m so happy i love u ammi I love u abbu plz keep blezzing me n I know that ur blessing give me my all wishes come true ' n I don't want anything '.. !!!( she luk at her parents photo '. Who was hanging on wall her hawt tears were fall down on her chicks she wipe her tears )

Suddenly one voice came '.. !!!

ZINIA '''''''!!!!

She turn around n luk that person who call her name !!!

Mammu jaan Aap ?

Mammu jaan:Zinia happy b'day humari mummtaaz!!!

Zinia: thanx mammu jaan !!!

Mammujaan: humare pass apni pyari si mumtaaz ke liye kuch hai ?

She asked him wid excitedly

Zinia:gift? watz that?

Mammujaan: pheli apni akhe band kar '. !!!

She closed her eyez '. !!!

Mammu jaan: ab apne hath age kar ' !!!

She fallow his instruction'!!!

Mammujhan put one envolope on her hands

She open her eyez n luk at that envolpe

Zinia: ( confusingly)wat is this mammu jaan where is my gift ?

Mammujaan: this is ur gift ' !!!

Zinia:hey ALLHA agar ye humara gift hai tho ye gift aap hi rakh lo '. Hum kya karege is envolpe ka ?

Mammujaan: are meri mummtaaz ise khol tho sahi ' !!!

Zina open that envolpe n she find one photo in that envolpe she luk at that photo wid shockingly !!!

Zinia: mammujaan ye photo tho !!!

Mammujaan: usi ki hai jisse tera nikha thy hua hai '. !!!

Zinia: apne mera nikha tey kar diya ' ?

Mammujaan: ha mumtaaz '. !!!

Zinia: mammujaan hum ithni jaldi nikha nhi karna chate hum!!! ( she try to complete her sentence her sentence but mammujaan cut her)

Mammujaan: ZINIA hume kuch nhi sunna '. Humne tumhara nigha tey kar diya hai !!! ab tum is nikha ke liye inkaar nhi kar sakti ' !!!

Zinia: aap chate hai mai apne khwab pure na karu'. ?

Mammujaan: mai chata hu tu apni zidagi '. Ek sahi insaan ke sath bsale '. Tera bhla hi tho chata hu na ' !!!

Zinia: par '!!!

Mammujaan: par var kuch nhi ' !!! tum amir ali se hi nikha karogi or ye mera hukum hai '. !!!

Zinia: smrha bol na inhe hume ye nigha nhi karna

( smrha zinia's best frnd in delhi)


Aditti Chopra

Smrha: haa'.(she try to say some thing but mammujaan cut)

Mammujaan: hume kuch nhi sunna tumhara nikha ' amir se hi hoga ' !!! or ye humara akhir fesla '. Hai !!!

Zinia rush to her room ' she hide her tears '. N lock the rum door '. !!!

Smrha: zinia open the door yr ' !!!

Zinia: plz smrha hume akela chod de plz !!!

Smrha: zinia I know tu abhi gusse mai ye drwaaza khol '. Mai tujhse bath karna chati hu ' !!!

Zinia: plz smrha hume akela chod de '. !!!

She sit on the floor n she crying like a hell '.her hawt big big tears fall down on her chicks ' !!!

Zinia: ab hum mumbai kese jayege '. !!!

Suddenly she luk at her mother's locket '. !!! she go toward her study table she put on her hand n she kissed that locket ' suddenly her mind bulb is glowing suddenly her face expretions is change she have a huge smile on her face '. She put a cell on her hand n dilled a n.o '. !!!

Zinia: hey !!!

Person: hey howz u ?

Zinia: I m fine '. I just tell u that ' I m coming !!

Person: when?

Zinia: on wednusday!!!

Person:but he '!!

Zinia: don't worry I will be handel everything '. !!!

Person: cool !!!

Zinia: bye !!

Person: bye!!!

She disconnect the call ' !!

She open her door rum n luk at mammujaan wid smile !!!

Zinia: hum ye nikha karne ke liye taiyaar hai !!!

Mammujaan: I love u beta !!!

He huged her '. Wid great happiness ' !!!

In other side' !!!

Dada can I ask u something ?

Afcouse choti '. !!!

Do u love her ?

Who?

ur mangetar minakshi !!!

n suddenly why r u asking me this question '?

Couz I care for u ' couz I love u '.

Unnati I love u to ' !!!

Unnati: tell me dada did u love her ?

he luk at her wid irritatingly !!!

No '!!!

Unnati: so why r u doing this to urself ' !!! its commited sucide!!!

Unnati she is my mangetar '. !!!

Unnati: so wat? Aap kya chate hai dada

Hum chate hai ki devghar or jayghar ke bitch bhoth pyaar ho or jab hum mharaj bane tho jayghar ke sath sath devghar ki riyast bhi humare sath ho '. !!!

Unnati: ye yuvraj udayveer singh bol rha hai uday nhi

Uday: choti'!!

Unnati:plz dada vo kithni selfish irrtating or nakchadi hai hume vo bilkul pasand nhi hai

Uday: hume bhi

Unnati : chalo hum dono ki kahi tho pasand milti hai



Uday huged her n kis her on her chiks

Uday: humari choti mai bhoth gussa hai haina

Unnati: hum tho sirf apko khush dekhna chate hai

He pick her cups n luk at her eyez n said

Uday: hum khush hai

Unnati: tho hum bhi khush hai

She gave him a cute smile

Suddenly his phn is buzzing he luk at his phn '

N luk at unnati wid smrick

Unnati: wat ?

Uday: call the devil n devil is come ' minakshi !!!

He picked the call ' !!!

Uday:Hey sweety ..

Minakshi:Hey baby howz u ' ?

(He rolled his eyez n said wid irritatingly)

Uday:Yes babes I miss u so much infect abhi hum choti se tumhare bare mai bath kar rhe they !!!

Minakshi: how sweet of u ' !!! i called u couz i just tell u something I m coming babiee in india !!!

Uday: it's a gud newz '.but when?

Miakshi: on wednusday'. !!! so baby can u pick me on airport '

Uday: afcouse babz I pick u ' !!!

Minakshi:bye babiee!!

Uday: bye sweety!!!

He disconnect the call n luk at unnati wid smrick on his face !!!

That's it guyz I hope u like it plz do comment n like also ' luv u '!!!

Precape: zinia's nikha'. !!!

kritz...😳😳

Edited by priyash.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
I OVE IT AND I DON'T GET THE PECAP
CAN U EXPLAIN THE PRECAP TO ME AND UPDATE SOON
THAT MINAKSI IS SO IRRATING
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: fireroad99

I OVE IT AND I DON'T GET THE PECAP

CAN U EXPLAIN THE PRECAP TO ME AND UPDATE SOON
THAT MINAKSI IS SO IRRATING


are zinia ki shadi ... !!! 😃😃😃 n thanx yr yup she is really irritating !!!

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