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Posted: 12 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Mohit_monaya

wow! amazing updatee...

really like the way taani's sisters and mom support her...its sweet =D
and the gang is being so nice too...
finally for a change, feels good...heheh =D
and rey... *sigh* wohi tha na? 0_0

but awesome update...lookin forward to the next part =)



Yes I decided to write about a good relation between the gang and Taani...fed up of all the show's drama and yup that was Rey 😆
Oh...and thank you for commenting and reading!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: crazy2012

Finally completed reading of 1st chapter..

The way you describe Taani's family, I loved it and your word selection is also good.👏
Thank you! No one has ever told me that before 😳

Glad that a kriyaansh and tanha fan is writing about TaaRey, I really appreciate it and I assume that you love writing/literature, though I may be wrong in the assumption.
Nope...you are completely right. I do love writing and literature. Well I was always a fan of D3 and after the exit of Sneha and Shakti i thought to move on and just appreciate whatever came my way.

Three sisters and their mom, I am looking forward to see Taani's character exploration in the next few chapters..the concept of the story too..
You will get to see Taani alot! So yeah...hope you enjoy the story!
I have a gen ques in my mind, ll ask you later after chapter 2😉




Well, just finished reading your second chapter.

you did well here too..liked it😊 Thank you once again!

now my question to you: you are going to narrate this entire FF from Taani's mouth? just asking
Yes it will usually be from her point of view.

and read your ques and ans before the update too,

Yes, I was also keen to know if this is a TR story or not and you have cleared my doubt.

I would like to see how love blossoms between this two. My POV is, yes, you of course can take long time to make it more realistic

PS: I love TaaRey first meet😊



Thank you so much for your feedback! Really appreciate it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
Hola Peeps! What's up guys?!
Okay so this note is for all those who want to know more about me! Btw, I also would appreciate if all of you atleast tell me your name...if you want to say something more about yourself than go ahead!
I love reading so I'm up and cool over it...

Here goes...

My name: Vishwa
Nicknames: Lots and lots! Vishu, Vishi or Vishy, Munchkin, Moti, Fatty...list goes on 😆

How long have you been in I-F?


Well I am actually a very old member of I-F my old username "-scarlett-" is inaccessible to me right now but that one has been there since I think 2008 or 2009 🤔. Anyway so been here for a LONG time...know this place inside out 😆

How did you come to know about TaaRey and like them?

I used to watch D3 because I love anything that has to do with dance, you could find me in a lot of the dance show forums. Also, I had followed many of these actors from Dance India Dance so I got attracted and started watching it. But, in the middle I left and due to academics stopped. When I returned I heard about the new girl and saw Vrinda/Taani on-screen for the first time. I never had an instant liking of her but also couldn't stand her being bashed right, left, back and front.

So when Such and a very few other TR fans were denied to make an AT at that time, I had informed Such about the fanclub forum and the possibility of her opening the AT there. Then the AT started and though I was never a big part of it, Such did gave me a lot of credit (it was all her hard work though). And today...man I never thought it would happen but thanks to all the TRians...so many ATs! I am so proud!

And for TR...they just grew on me I guess 😳


And now for the random questions 😆

Favourite Author: Don't really have one...I don't like sticking to the same author as their work usually gets repetitive

Favourite Actors: I usually look at movies and see how each one acted...don't have one preference but Vidya Balan is someone whose movies I look forward to...

Favourite TV shows: I used to love Kis Desh Mein Hai Mera Dil, Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon, and such...currently though I watch Qubool Hai, D3, TBP and thats about it...maybe Madhubla once in awhile.

Describe yourself in 3 lines:
- Practical
- Chilled out
- Intelligent

That should be good enough for now, na?? 😆



Edited by -3raser- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94


"Smirks & Chillies"




I slammed the home door shut and went in to the kitchen to grab some food for my starving stomach.


"Omg Teetli! Itna khayegi toh moti hojaye gi?" Sne yelled when she saw me with a bag of popcorn, a glass of orange juice and a three layer veggie sandwich.


" Haan toh mujhe kahan kisi prince charming ko impress karna hai...hone do mujhe moti...who cares," I took a bite into the vegetable sandwich and felt pure bliss in my mouth.

The taste of the ketchup mixed in with the cheese and masala was enough to send me to heaven. After finishing the sandwich and juice, I took the popcorn and went to the living room to watch a movie or something.



"How was your day Teetli?!" Kiki asked while painting her nails.


I let out a sigh, "Well nothing out of the blue...made a few friends, met a few professors and then collided with a khadoos asshat."


"WHAT?!"


See, when your elder sister exclaims like that it means that unless you don't spill the beans she will annoy the shit out of you with the "Tell me tell me" or the "I'm going to tell mom if you don't" etc.


So I narrated my story of meeting that khadoos to Kiki and much to my displeasure my sister found that I was as fault and he was right.


"Kiki you're my sister!" I yelled at her.


"Oh but bichara...you ruined his shirt yaar'"


"Haan...toh..maine kaha tha use Nirma washing powder ki advertisement karne ke liye?" I said referring to the extremely clean, crisp and white shirt he had been wearing.


"Just leave the guy alone Teetli. Maybe he had a bad day...don't be so harsh." Saying that she walked away.



Was I too harsh on judging him?


Maybe you were Teetli...maybe you should give him a second chance. Yes, that's what I will do. I will give him a chance.


Uff'I sound like we just broke up and I am trying to get back with him...eww..ugh.

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The next day seemed to go much better. For some weird reason I have always been the type to find hard questions and lessons entertaining compared to the easy ones. Today I didn't go in the canteen during lunch but made my way to the library to check out a book on Psychological Disorders.


The library was my home away from home. Quiet, peaceful and independent. No one bothered you here and no one really cared about what you were doing either. Whenever I used to feel alone during elementary school I would find a desk to sit at and a nice book to read. Those were the best times because when alone I discovered a lot about myself.


I reached the book that I had been wanting to take out. I grabbed it and...wait...it didn't budge.


What the hell? Why wasn't the book coming out of the shelf?


I pulled it again...and...again...and one last time with all my might.

THUD!!

I had fallen on the floor. A few books had toppled on to my head and students around me were staring. They gave me weird looks and walked on.


I was confused myself. So I had grabbed on to that book which happened to be squished in between many other books and had tried to take it out. But it just wouldn't come out! I then tried to pull the book out with all my might, and that I did but then fell to the ground. It felt like suddenly someone had just let go of their side of the rope while playing tug-of-war and I had lost my balance.


I chucked all the thoughts aside and stood up to see what had been on the other side of the shelf/book. And there he was. Standing there with a devilish smirk on his face.


"TUM!" I yelled but in a hushed voice (if you know what I mean). His smirk reached his dimples while the expression lines on my forehead grew deeper.



"Well well...look who I see here." His voice was low, husky but seemed to be mocking me.


"Waise tumne meri life kharab karne ka contract le rakha hai kya?"


"WHAT?!" Was this guy for real?


"Dekho mister..."


"Singhania" He completed my sentence.


"Haan joh bhi ho. I have no interest in your life. Also, even if I was offered a contract I wouldn't accept it because I don't want to lose my precious time on an egocentric person like you." I glared at him for a second before stomping out of the shelves and to the library line.


As I made my way out I could hear him slightly mumble the word "Tsunami".


Did he just call me tsunami?! Ugh! That...that...that bitch!

You know what scratch that idea of giving that pig a second chance. Second chance gaya bhaad mein!


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I marched into the canteen and slammed my bag down on the table.


"Aaree...miss chilli express kya hogaya?" Swayam asked as Nilesh passed me a glass of cold water.


"Chodna yaar...koi khadoos Singhania meri life barbad karne pe tula hua hai." I rolled my eyes just thinking about him and his stupid smirk. How I wanted to smack it off his face.


While gulping down my cold water I saw that the boys were smiling at each other and talking in their own sign language. Confused I asked, "Yeh tum log kar kya rahe ho?"


"Allee Taaniii woh hum dance class ki plactice kal lahe hai." Amar said.


"Huh?"


"Abe..iska matlab woh dance class ki practice kar rahe the." I smiled at Bharat for translating but was still confused.


"Taani woh woh...bharatnatyam mein yun yun ankhein and expressions karne padte haina...bas aise hi hum practice kar rahe the," Vicky clarified.


"Oh accha...now I know what you guys meant. Anyway, I'm off to class. Bye guys!"

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Swayam's P.O.V

"Chodna yaar...koi khadoos Singhania meri life barbad karne pe tula hua hai." Taani said as she came and sat at our table.


We all looked at each other and thought the same thing. Singhania? There was only one Singhania in the whole college and that was...Rey!


The way that she had complained about him and gotten angry gave us a plan. A plan that might just change Rey and Taani's life forever.




Precap:

What in the name of fudgecles was happening!


Edited by -3raser- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
the update was really amazingg! loved it alot...
esp the way u write... 😳
the taani-kiki scene was really cutee...and then the taarey scene, i couldnt stop laughing 😆
poor girl... opps...ms tsunami 🤣
that scene was hilarious...
and then the gang scene...wondering what they are up to now... 😉
excited for the next part... 😃
update soon...

-sneha =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: Mohit_monaya

the update was really amazingg! loved it alot...

esp the way u write... 😳
the taani-kiki scene was really cutee...and then the taarey scene, i couldnt stop laughing 😆
poor girl... opps...ms tsunami 🤣
that scene was hilarious...
and then the gang scene...wondering what they are up to now... 😉
excited for the next part... 😃
update soon...

-sneha =)



Uff you guys are quick! 😲😆
Oh...you wrote your name! Thank you for that Sneha!
I honestly don't know why you all like the way I write so much🤔😆 but appreciate it! ☺️
Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reading through all that😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97

I loved this update...seriously I think you are one of the best writers here..by the way I am angelitha but you can call me angel.😊
I love your writing style..it's so unique and different and the way you portray emotions is so subtle yet effective. 😳

I love the part when taani shouted back at Rey and Rey called her tsunami. Seriously awesome update. I loved it and continue soon..😉

P.s humare tastes kafi milti hain 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
Di!

Sorry for that.. 😆 But I am so so so happy after reading that update. Seriously. How in the world can you write so amazingly? I want to know. Do tell me na. 😳

The name of the update kind of made me curious to read it. I loved the title. And then we saw Taani eating so much and Sne saying that she'll get fat. 😆 This makes me think that you are a foodie too. Aren't you? 😳

And the Kik-Titli scene.. Loved it. This line made me Rofl:


"Haan...toh..maine kaha tha use Nirma washing powder ki advertisement karne ke liye?" I said referring to the extremely clean, crisp and white shirt he had been wearing.

Seriously? Nirma washing powder? 🤣 And you say you can't write humor.

And the next day, the whole library scene was kind of cute. 😳 It's just Taani's second day at school and she already has two name.. 😆 Tsunami and Miss. Chilli.. 😆 Tsunami is a nice one.. I love it. I can imagine how Rey would have called her Tsunami and she would have got hell irritated. 😆 Boys ki ek khasiyat hoti hai.. Irritating people. God gifted talent. 😆

The whole chotu TR convo was lovely. The way Rey cut her and said 'Singhania' and the way he mumbled 'Tsunami'.. Loved it all..

After that the canteen scene was amazing too. I love Taani-Swayam friendship already. He calls her Miss. Chilli and that shows how nice friends they are. And te boys said they were practicing Bharatnatayam? 😆 And Taani believed them? 🤣

Swayam's POV was interesting too. But the end... 🤔 I am confused, di. How cna it change their lives? I guess now we will see why this FF was given the title, 'Convoluted'. Gosh! I am so excited to read further. I can't tell you how much I am in love with this FF and your style of writing. Just amazing.

The precap confused me more. 😆 Update soon soon soon, di. I am waiting.
😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: Angel-luvs-s


I loved this update...seriously I think you are one of the best writers here..by the way I am angelitha but you can call me angel.😊
I love your writing style..it's so unique and different and the way you portray emotions is so subtle yet effective. 😳

I love the part when taani shouted back at Rey and Rey called her tsunami. Seriously awesome update. I loved it and continue soon..😉

P.s humare tastes kafi milti hain 😆



Aw thank you so much Angel!
Wow! Our tastes are similar...hmm...aur kya kya similar hoga...can't wait to find out more...
I try to make things less dramatic though for my other SS on Taani I made kept it dramatic just like the show... I just feel that its easier to write that way because I feel more connected to it...
LOL...Taani in my FF is not going to be a quiet one for sure 😆
Glad you liked it and once again thanks for commenting!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Vishi..(I like this name and will call you by it, hope you don't mind😳)

nice knowing you😊

I am Debu..naam toh suna hi hoga😉😆

I love reading your writing..well done..just reading your small interview before update, will read the other soon..I wish to know two more things about you..

1.your fav FF writer in the forum
2. your fac FF

Love
Deb

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