Taarey OS-Bezubaan- Dare Completed!

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Hello to all my fellow monkeys and the nemesis pandas (loll, just kidding hehehe),


Ive completed my dare given to me by -3raser- aka Vishwa.

Here is a copy


I, Vishwa, being a dare devil,
give a dare to "miss_neha",
on the song Bezubaan from ABCD
to be written on TaaRey and can include whatever other characters she would like.
Situtation could be anything :)


Hope u guys like it, but have to warn you, it didnt come out so great!

Bezubaan!

The gang had passed the semi-finals and were on their way to the NDC finals. Swayam's shoulder injury was also now healed and the gang were back on track. One evening, while the whole college was empty, Rey was in the rehearsal hall coming up with a routine to show the gang the next day.

However, he was not alone, like he had previously assumed, Taani had also been working late that night. Taani had finally finished her work and was leaving college, when she heard music coming from the rehearsal hall.

T (thinking): Shayad bhai honge, unhone kaha tha ke he may rehearse till late.

Taani went to the rehearsal hall and was stunned to see Rey rehearsing; she was just about to leave when Rey spotted her in the mirror and stopped dancing. They both were staring at each other when Taani snapped out.

T: Uhhh woh mujhe laga shayad bhai honge.

R: Actually he had to drop Sharon home.

T (nodding): OK

With that Taani turned to leave, when Rey called her back.

R: Did u find out the date for the NDC finals?

T: No, not yet

R (with attitude): Taani, you're the GS right, you should know the dates.

Rey knew he was starting a fight for no reason, but he couldn't help it, the only way she would talk to him these days was through a fight. So he kept on having intentional arguments with her.

T (annoyed): Rey, I checked in the day and the dates were not posted yet, but I have not checked after that.

R (thinking of a way to continue the fight): Uhh, uhh, so what, you should have checked again

T: WHAT?

R: What what? You should have checked. Kaisi GS ho tum, ek kaam karo GS ki post chor do

T: Rey, aap bina wajah mujhse kyun jhagad re hain

R: Bina wajah? Come on Taani, you are not doing your job efficiently; I'm just pointing that out.

T (takes a deep breath): You know what Rey, I'm done.

R (confused): Done?

T: Yah done, done with this, done with us. That day you were right Rey, I did still think about you, I did still care about you. But now I'm tired of all these fights, of always arguing with you. I'm just done Rey. Ab aur nahin. Now I can confidently say Rey, we are over, aaj se aap mere life mein kuch nahin hain. I'm over you.

Rey was shocked hearing all this, he never in a million years expected Taani to say that.

R: Taa..

T (interrupts): Actually Rey, I don't know main aapko yeh bata bhi kyun rahi hoon, because I know it does not make a difference to you at all. Kyunki aapne toh kabhie mujhse pyar hi nahin kiya, you never loved me.

Saying that Taani was about to leave, but Rey was furious hearing those words. He grabbed her arm and pushed her against the mirror, pinning her against it and blocking any way out for.

R: Tumhe sach mein lagta hai, that I never loved you?

T (was a bit scared but wasn't about to back down, she pushed him back): HAAN, you never loved me, it was an attraction that's it. Aap kabhi pyar kar hi nahin sakte Rey, aapko pyar ka matlab bhi nahin pata.

Saying this, Taani ran out of the rehearsal hall with tears in her eyes, while Rey fell on his knees crying.

Hai jo lahu mera, behta chala
Dekho junoon mera, kehta chala
Khaabon ka tha makaan jo dehta chala

He remembered all of his special moments with Taani, ending with the break up.

Bezubaan kab se main raha
Begunaah sehta main rahaa (x2)

After this day Taani completely ignored and avoided him, she didn't argue at all, she just didn't talk to him, if she ever needed to, she would send a message through Swayam or someone else. And the rest of the team got into practicing for the NDC finals; however Rey was a bit distracted, but still tried his best to concentrate.

The gang were practicing some hip hop moves.

No pains, no fear, no shouts, no tears
I wanna make my life peaceful and clear
Its me and u who wanna live here
So just let me breathe

Bezubaan kab se main raha
Begunaah sehta main rahaa (x2)


While practicing, Taani checks on them to see how their practice is going, by standing at the entrance of the rehearsal hall, and Rey sees her. They have an eye lock.

Khwabon ka tere qissa hoon
Tera hi toh main hissa hoon

Taani leaves the rehearsal hall.
Mujhko na kar yun juda

The next day, the girls are in the middle doing some street moves.

Can any body tell on me?
NO! NO!
Yo better not stop me
Better not flop me from who I wanna be
It's my destiny
So yo Mr. spinner
Here come the winner
Play on the bass I'm in the race

The boys join them, and start doing hip hop moves.

No pains, no fear, no shouts, no tears
I wanna make my life peaceful and clear
Its me and u who wanna live here
So just let me breathe.

The girls leave, and it is just the boys, doing B-boying, break dancing, tutting, one by one.

Kaka Boom.. Kaka Boom.. Kaka Boom
Ho..


Rey is alone in the rehearsal hall, he sees Taani, and runs behind her.

Meri jagah teri nigaahon mein
Ho na ho, main chala hun raahon

He is about to fall, but Taani saves him; she is standing there wearing a white anarkali with a smile on her face.
Jo ladkhada gaya kahin
Toh aaoge tum hi toh
Thaamoge tum hi toh

Rey is about to touch her face, but she slowly walks backwards away from him and disappears, he realises she was his imagination.


Phir berukhi.. kyun hai mujhse
Kyu aise bhala ho mujhse khafa

The next day Taani is in a classroom, with a group of people conducting GS business, and Rey is at the door just staring at her work. Some time later she notices him standing there, but just ignores him.

Bezubaan kab se main raha
Begunaah sehta main rahaa (x2)


At night, Rey is alone in the rehearsal hall, Dancing aggressively to forget all what she said, but her words were ringing clearly in his ears.


Khwabon ka tere qissa hoon
Tera hi toh main hissa hoon
Mujhko na kar yun juda


After the dance Rey falls to his knees.

R (crying): Maine Taani ko hamesha ke liye kho diya.

The end!!!


Hope u guys liked it!!!

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raveena1 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow,..it was nyc...the song section was amazing...lovd it .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this really was amazingg! i lovedd it..
esp the part when taani leaves and the line after that "mujko na kar yun juda"...
i loved that part alot...
actually the whole OS...i really culdnt imagine taarey on this song to say the truth...
but this was really soo awesome..
jus loved it =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb os ..
loved it to the core 😳
-CussTheWorldUp thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This was amazing, di. A difficult challenge, I guess. I would haven't been able to write anything on this song, but the way you did it. It was simply amazing. Loved it to the core..

Monkeys rock! B-)
Edited by ShReya_TaaRey - 12 years ago
-Fam_TaaReY- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved the os 😊😊
song was used perfectly 👏 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome os..
loved it😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Neha wonderful os 👍🏼 situation fitted the song great job
-GoluGudiya- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow Dii ... Nice Job ... It was difficult but you did it very nicely !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful OS Neha... Well written, I love it.

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