Taarey OS-Bezubaan- Dare Completed!

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sweet_angel09

@sweet_angel09

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

awesome os..
luvd it...😳

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miss_nehaFFs

@miss_nehaFFs

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Awww, Im soo glad with the response, It was really hard for me to use this song, coz I just couldnt imagine it on Taarey!! So, i'm glad everyone liked it!

Edited by miss_nehaFFs - 12 years ago

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Vishwa

@-Inferno-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

NEHA!! YOU FINISHED IT!
OMG! OMG OMG!!! * I am jumping in excitement here*
I absolutely LOOOVVVEEEDDD reading it!
At first I thought maybe you will put the song in while Rey is dancing and somehow make it a Dil se re type of a thing but oh meee gossshhiiesss! This was really creative!
I was stunned but also happy about the way Taani confronted him about her feelings and annoyance regarding the fights...bichari woh bhi kitna sahe...
And then the way the lyrics matched each event and scene was so good! Loved the Bezubaan part which could be connected to the two being quiet and keeping their real motifs and feelings hidden. Also I liked it when she saves Rey for the "ladkhada" part.
But my heart stopped at the end when he realizes that she is gone forever... just a simple dialogue but it was breath taking!
So glad that I gave the dare to you because it was really worth a read!
Thank you soo soo much dear! 🤗

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Neha

@miss_neha

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: -3raser-
NEHA!! YOU FINISHED IT!
OMG! OMG OMG!!! * I am jumping in excitement here*
I absolutely LOOOVVVEEEDDD reading it!
At first I thought maybe you will put the song in while Rey is dancing and somehow make it a Dil se re type of a thing but oh meee gossshhiiesss! This was really creative!
I was stunned but also happy about the way Taani confronted him about her feelings and annoyance regarding the fights...bichari woh bhi kitna sahe...
And then the way the lyrics matched each event and scene was so good! Loved the Bezubaan part which could be connected to the two being quiet and keeping their real motifs and feelings hidden. Also I liked it when she saves Rey for the "ladkhada" part.
But my heart stopped at the end when he realizes that she is gone forever... just a simple dialogue but it was breath taking!
So glad that I gave the dare to you because it was really worth a read!
Thank you soo soo much dear! 🤗

Yayyy, I'm soo happy, I didn't dissappoint u, coz I was really scared if u would like it. But I'm sooo happy that u did 😃

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Meghna

@meghu2000

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

hi, i'm pretty new here.. can someone please explains this "monkey-panda" thing, cause i don't really get what it is...

BTW, really cool os...loved it alot...

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Andria

@Andy_Dynamite

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

wow... beautiful... especially the part whr he imagines her and dis tym she saved him..unlike everytym it wud b she fallin n he holding... and d lyrics wer perfect durin tht thing... dis ws a sweet one!!! *thumbs up*