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Posted: 12 years ago
Here is my next part..

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Love Never Looses

Part 57

Nupur was in her room and was packing few of her dresses..as rest where the wedding dress'and at the last she has to come here only..so why to shift all her luggage..she was packing in the other room..when heard some footsteps barging in the room'didn't took any second to her to relish that whose footsteps these could be'.
She pretend to pack her bag when she felt a warm touch on her skin'stopping herself to do what she was currently doing'the hands crawled upto her shoulder..turning her towards him'her gaze was fixed on the floor'.she was both happy that soon they going to be married and sad that she has to stay away from him for three days'

He could feel of what she is going through 'he made her to look into his eyes..by putting his fingers between his chin..pulling it towards him'.he could see the redness on her cheek due to happiness and tears of sadness'as she has to leave him for three days'he car\ressed his thumb below her eyes'.not allowing her single tear to fall down and said in his most husky yet soft voice,"Nupur'.it's just the seperation of mere three days'and after that you'll be mine..in every senses'.in every form..you will be wholly belongs to me after that'Dear'no one could separate you from me'you'll be mine'than why to cry..why you are said'..cheer up..!!!"

Nupur:Are you happy Mayank..!!! *A bRief pause* no'neither you want me to leave nor I want to go'but I know..this is ritual'and we have to follow these rituals..but Mayank'I am scared'..

Mayank..asked in bemusement..:Scared for what'.and why'

Nupur:You know what happen last time'..

He stopped her in middle and said while cupping her face between his palms,"Hey hey'Nupur'.I promise..nothing will go wrong this..time'this time you are going only to comeback to me forever'.and ever'got it'" saying he pinch her nose with his fingers'

She smiled a bit and said,"Okay Baba'I got it'.Now will you help me in packing'..

Mayank:Sure'.

While helping her in zipping her bag he said in aserious tone,"Nupur mujhe tumhe ekk bahut important baat batani hai "

Nupur:Haan Bolo'

Mayank:Actually three days ago you asked me Why I was late and I told you I was stuck with bank work..and something'

Nupur:Hmm'

Mayank:Actually I lied to you'.that day I fixed a meeting with your and mine parent's with the help of Samrat'I want to them to forgive us'I want them to accept Shriya'I want their presence in our lives..in our marriage..so I convinced them..apologise them'to came back..and I didn't tell you all about this because'I don't want to tense you much..i was just waiting for their reply..but they had given was a complete surprise for me'.I hope you understand'.

She was astound for a while'that Mayank had already apologised to them..and had convinced them'she asked,"You could have even asked me..Even I also want to apologise to them'"

Mayank:No Nupur..it was certainly not necessary'aur vese bhi mein tumhe tense nahi karna chahta tha'Nupur..tumhe maafi maangne ki koi zarurat nahi thi'aur tumhe le jaa ker mein tumhe pareshaan nahi karna chahta tha'.

With an impulse'she hugged him tightly'.and whispered,"I love You Mayank'"

Mayank:I love you too'.

They were moving out of the room..with her bag..while Nupur was a little bit forward'he stopped in middle'held her from her hands'and turning her around hugged her tightly'..dropping her bag..she reciprocate the hug with equal passion and emotions..'he nuzzled his head in her hair..and said,"Jaldi aaunga tumhe lene'"'she replied to him in the same position,"Mein intezaar karungi'."

Breaking the hug he said,"Fiker na karo'..mein zaayeda din..mujhse door nahi hone dunga..bas..teen din ki baat hain'."

Nupur:Hmm..aur ye teen din jaldi hi khatam ho jaayenge'.

Mayank:Haan'ab I think hume chalna chahiye pata nahi sab kya soch rahe honge'.

He move downstairs with her holding her back'.

Shriya was playing with Benji and Aanvi'they all had dinner'sharing gala time and passing laughter'the evening soon filled up with the laughter and teasing talks'.even Shriya and Aanvi were too enjoying everyone's company'.

She felt..that all these people..are very close to her parent's..and they are one which love her parent's very much..this all had brought a broad smile on her face'

Now it was time to leave..Nupur's parent's were already in their car'.Gunjan insisted Nupur to come with her'.she too moved with her'hugging Mrs.Sharma and taking blessings from Mr.Sharma..and also passed a love filled gaze to Mayank'which didn't went unnoticed by him'.

Nupur:Chalo..Shriya..Dadi-Dadu aur Dadaa..ko bye bol do'.

She stood up'bidding her granparent's she come to her Dadaa'seeing her Dadaa..and thought of leaving him..had brought lump in her throat..making her emotions to come out from her eyes in the form of tears'Mayank bend down in his knees'cupping her face..while wiping some unshed tears from her eyes and said,"Hey'!!! My shona'why are you crying'."

Shriya..in her sobbing voice..:I don't want to leave you Dadaa'.

Mayank..kissing her on her forhead..:Aww'mera baccha'aisa koi rota hain..aapke Dadaa..ayenge na..aapko lene'.taaki aap hamesha hamesha k liye'apne Dadaa..k pass ajao..tab tak liye.aap apne Nanu-Nani k saath time spend karo'.

Shriya..hugging him..:I'll miss you Dadaa'

Mayank:I miss you too my shona'

Breaking the hug he said,"Acha chalo ab bahut late ho gaya'hain..na..aur Aanvi bhi aapka kab se wait kr rahi hain'.chalo'..

He depart them till gate..and were going when Mayank pulled Samrat's hamd to a side and whispered in hi ears:Sam Shriya ka khayal rakhna..bahut sensitive hain vo'

Samrat:Dude..relax..!!! I'll take care of her..after all meri bhi beti hain'

Mayank:I know..!! but Shriya se zaayeda uski Maa ka khayal rakhna'

Smarat'getting his word':I 'll dude..iss baar use kahin jaane nahi doonga mein usse'..

Both duo hugged each other'.and then they departed leaving Mayank..and his parent's..alone in the house'.


Hope you like it

Edited by shafy_MN - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yess first to comment
awesome
loved it
thank for the pm
love ur updates
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Originally posted by: annabh

yess first to comment
awesome
loved it
thank for the pm
love ur updates


Thank you so much
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thanks
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Aww..lovely update dear update soon
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Thanks a lot
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luvly upd8...waitng 4 d marriage seq..!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was very beautiful update shaffy
mayur scene was just wonderful
beautifully written
ans shreya maynk were just adorable
loved this update to the core
keep it up

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