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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Faria.

it was very beautiful update shaffy
mayur scene was just wonderful
beautifully written
ans shreya maynk were just adorable
loved this update to the core
keep it up


Thank you so much Faru
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Posted: 12 years ago
m sooo happy for dis quick update...thnq for such a b'ful chapter..lvd it
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely updt
cont soon
thank for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pretty.doll

m sooo happy for dis quick update...thnq for such a b'ful chapter..lvd it


Your welcome dear..
Thanks for loving this chap
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Posted: 12 years ago
It ws very emotinal update.
I can understand Nupur's insecurity.
Akhir 3 saal os ne os janwar k saat guzare hain.
Bt is baar esa kuch nahi hoga.
Mayank nahi hone de ga.
Now they have their parent's blessings too.
Mayank kitna pyar krta hai Nupur se k os ne Ose maffi bhi nahi mngne di.
Khud hi mang li.
Bs 3 din ki baat hai .
Then they will b together forever.
Awww...Maya's scene ...sigh...kya kahoon.
Meri ankhon mein bhi aanso aa gaye they.
I can't see Maya apart.
Shriya has accepted her Grand parents and is willing to make them a part of her life.
Kya beeti hogi Mayank pr when he saw tears in her eyes and when he ws wipping them.😭

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Posted: 12 years ago
Itney badhe udate k liye just one word😲😕
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Irum.

It ws very emotinal update.

I can understand Nupur's insecurity.
Akhir 3 saal os ne os janwar k saat guzare hain.
Bt is baar esa kuch nahi hoga.
Mayank nahi hone de ga.
Now they have their parent's blessings too.
Mayank kitna pyar krta hai Nupur se k os ne Ose maffi bhi nahi mngne di.
Khud hi mang li.
Bs 3 din ki baat hai .
Then they will b together forever.
Awww...Maya's scene ...sigh...kya kahoon.
Meri ankhon mein bhi aanso aa gaye they.
I can't see Maya apart.
Shriya has accepted her Grand parents and is willing to make them a part of her life.
Kya beeti hogi Mayank pr when he saw tears in her eyes and when he ws wipping them.😭



Yaar bas mat pooch..Mayank ne apne aap ko kese control kiya hoga...
But Shriya aur Nupur ko jana hoga na...for rituals..
tu fiker mat ker...they both will be stay connected...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Irum.

Itney badhe udate k liye just one word😲😕


ab kya kre log ek hi word mein sab bayan ker dete hain...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Here is my next part...
This contains..cute Shriya and Mayank Moments...


@IRUM...

You will like I hope...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Love Never Looses

Part 58

He entered the hall..everything was so quite..a few moments ago the hall was filled with laughter and now it's complete quite..a few moments ago..Nupur was having her best smile on her face..and Shriya was enjoying a lot'.recalling those moments'and picturising them infront of him had brought a smile on his face'

His chain of thoughts were broken when he felt someone's hand on his shoulder'he turned..and looked his mother was standing besides him with a content smile playing her lips'she made him sit on the couch'.he put his head on her lap'while she stroked his hair'.

Shilpa:Mayank'beta tu khush hain na'

Mayank:Bahut maa'.tum andaza bhi nahi laga sakti'.k mein kitna khush hoon'.

Shilpa:Vese ek baat bolu'.


Mayank:Haan Maa..ye bhi koi poochne waali baat hain'

Shilpa:Mujhe lagta tha'ki tu hi bahut anokha hain..vo kya Nupur ki bhasha mein sadu types ka'aur logo se bilkul alag'a sort of angry young man'

Mayank:Maa..tum meri taang kheech rahi ho..ya meri tareef kar rahi ho..

Shilpa:Are pehle meri baat sun to'

Mayank:Acha thik hai bolo'

Shilpa:Fir teri life mein Nupur aayi'ek nayi Sooraj ki roshni ki tarah aayi aur teri zindagi mein rang hi rang bhar diye'teri zindagi mein pyar laayi vo..sach bolu to vo..sach mein bahut achi ladki..hain'ye nahi ki..uska nautre acha hain'.ya fir vo dil ki bahut achi hain'vo tujhse se'bepanah pyar karti hain..aur ye uski aakhon mein saaf dikhta hain'sach mein Mayank...aur .itne saal alag rehne k bawjood..uska pyar na kam hua tere liya'sach mein tumhari jodi to uper wale ne..banayi hain..you both are not made for each other but meant for each other'.laakhon mein ek hain Nupur..mein bahut khush hoon ki tujhe jeevan saathi k roop mein Nupur jesi ladki mili...aur sabse alag ..sabse pyari..sabse..innocent,cute'to hain teri beti..meri poti'.Mayank..uski aakhen dekhi hain tune..kitni massom hain'vo apni massomiyat se har kisi ka dil jeet leti hain pal bhar mein..koi bhi usse pyar kiye bina nahi reh sakta'.sach kehta hain Benji..vo sach mein ek Angel hain hum sab k life ki..agar uss din..humne aisa bartaav na kiya hota to meri poti mujhse'itna nahi darti..usse bukhaar nahi hota..by the time she started crying and said mujhe maaf kar dena beta'

Mayank instantly got uo from her lap and said,"Nahi Maa..tumhe sorry bolne ki zaurat nahi hain'galti meri bhi to thi'apne principals..bhula kar mene galti ki thi..bas dard iss baat ka hua tha..ki galti mene ki thi..but meri beti galti nahi hain Maa'.

Shilpa..carressing his cheek..:Haan beta'vo uper waale ka bheja hua farishta hain..jo'apno ko hamesha baandh kar rakhegi'.

Mayank..putting his hand on her..:Haan Maa..tum sahi keh rahi ho'

Their conversation were broken when Mayank's Dad entered and sais,"Kya baatein ho rahi hain Maa-Bete mein..seeing his wife wiping out tears from her eyes'kyu Mayank..meri biwi ko rula raha hain tu'.

Mayank..got up from his seat..went to him and hugged him..:Thanks for understanding Dad'

Mr.Sharma too hugged his son and said,"Sorry..for our rude behaviour'betaa'.and yes'.meri poti sach mein bahut cute aur innocent hain'

Mayank..breaking the hug..:So to hain'.

After a puse he said,"Dad-Mon..Kya aap dono ab bhi mujhse naraaz hain..."

Mr.Sharma:Nahi beta..aur bhala hum apne bete se aur kitni der naraz reh sakte hain...humari saari naraazgi to Shriya ko dekh k chali gayi...

Mayank:Thank you...Dad...saying he hugged him again...

Shilpa:Acha ab bahut baatein ho gayi..hain..kal bahut taiyaariyan karni hain'to chalo so jao'.sab'

Mayank:Haan Maa..bas mein Shriya ko bed time story suna doon fir so jaonga.vo bina bed time story 'use nind nahi aati hain'

Mr.Shrma and Mrs.Shrama..looked to him in a very jolted expression..he looked to their expressions and asked,"Kya hua aap log mujhe aise kyu dekh rahe hain'

Mr.Sharma:Barkhurdaar..aap shayad bhul rahe hain'.

Mayank:Kya Dad'

Mrs.Sharma:Mayu..!! Shriya yahan kahan hain vo to Gunjan k ghar gayi hain'aur Nupur bhi'.

Suddenly a wave of reality hit him hard and he realised that he is all alone in the house'his face fell down..

Mr.Sharma patted on his shoulder asking him to take the sleep..but somewhere gaining that his daughter..isn't besides him tonight'and he is no more going to read the story for her..had taken his sleep away'.

He reached her room..took one of her teddy..and laid down while hugging it..he was thinking..what Shriya must be doing right now..when his cell buzz..he instantly picked up the call without seeing the caller..before he could say hello he heard the loud scream on the other side of the phone,"Dadaaa"

Mayank..in a bit surprised tone..:Shriya'

Shriya:Haan Dadaa'mein hoon'

Mayank:Itni raat gaye call kiya sab thik to hain na'.

Shriya:Haan Dadaa..sab thik hain bas aapko goodnight kehna tha'.

Mayank:Aww..by Baby goodnight'.aur kya kar rahe the aap

Shriya:Abhi mein aur Aanvi games khel rahe the..aur ab hum sone jaa rahe hain..aur aapko ek baat bhi batani hain...

Mayank:Haan bolo..

"Dadda mujhe Nani ne...ek bahut achi vo di..."

"vo kya.."

"Arey vo...jo Mamma haath mein pehti hain..."

"Chudi.."

"Haan vo..aur bilkul vesi jesi Dadi ne di..."

"You mean Gold ki chudi.."

"Haan haan vohi.."

"Arey waah...ye to bahut achi baat hain...Okay..acha listen Mamaa..ko zaayeda tang mat karna aur take care bye'.

Shriya:Bye'Dadaa'

Mayank:Bye Shona'.

Shriya:Ache se sona'.

Mayank:Okay..darling'!!!

Shriya:Miss you'.

Mayank:Miss you too'.

She put the call off..Mayank smiled to himself,"Pagal hain ye bhi Maa..per gayi hain poori..chal beta Mayank so jaa..bahut kaam hain kal'

The wedding bells were finally ringing in their life''


Hope you like it...
Edited by shafy_MN - 12 years ago

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