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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...
The Riya Aman flash back was too cute...OMG KK is Aman <3 <3

Arjun Riya thinking about eachother..and goshh the kiss!!!!!

great part, contd soon :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
excellent part

you don't need to explain readers are mature enough to understand

all in all well written

well and the case is going fabulous

thanks alot for pm i going really busy these days but i think i must comment to respect your efforts

loved it alot
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Posted: 12 years ago





NOTE

Hello my readers

I know i am late. But want ask you something! Are you guys happy with Aman- riya flashback. If not, then i won't waste your time with them. But aman is most important characher for riya and arjun too.

Okay. Peep down for the next part.


Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago
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PART-14



Arjun again pressurized his brain to cover the things that happened. It is not easy for him to accept that she was kidnapped by any one that easily. It is impossible. The level of curiosity increased in his mind, and he need to find the answer of various questions. He again remembered the past things and in the end a small smile crept upon his face. And he mentally cursed the girl(riya) and questioned her, '' why are you so unpredictable riya???''


after 2 hours
In the conference room-



'' Rawte main, tumse kuch puch raha hoon!! Jabaw do DAMN IT!!!"-rathod barked at him.
But he didn't bothered to answer his question, and that angered him more.

'' kya chupa rahe ho rawte??''- rathod askde him for the last time.

'' wahi toh mujhe tum logon se puchna chahiye!! Ki kya chupa rahe ho!- arjun questioned him back, sarcasticly.

And he never answered his question. He looked at Liza and liza nodded his head negatively, while shree gave a confusing look to liza. Ayesha is too confused, that why rathod is silent!

Arjun- kyun? Kyun rathod? Bataya nahi.

Arjun never told them about , what happened to riya. So everyone is uknown of the fact that she is missing.

Suddenly something stuck in shree's mind and he hurried asked, '' sir riya ka phone trace karne ko kyun kaha tha apne? Wo trace nahi ho pa rahi hai!

Rathod- what? Rawte tumne uska phone trace pe rakha hai! Why the hell are you doing this??
For your kind information she is an ITF officer DAMN IT!
Arjun- mujhe pata hai rathod mai kya kar raha hoon! Shree ab tumhe usse trace karne ki jarurat nahi hai!
Rathod- toh tumhe pata chal gaya hai ki wo kahan hai!
Arjun- nahi!
Rathod- toh..

He didn't answered him and said, '' liza mujhe lab mai milo, ''
before liza could answer, he left the conference room.

IN HIS CABIN-


He knows that he shouldn't have traced her phone, but he couldn't help it. He don't know why , fear grippde his mind, when he saw her snatched away from him. He felt an ache in his heart, when he saw her in that condition. He never know why he couldn't stop himself, kissig her. And he also don't know how will she react ! He never crossed the comfort zone with her befor. But it felt right at that time. He still need his answers, is this the only desire for him, or something above from all those feeling. He really need to clear things in between them, and also he need to recognise his own inner feeling. He couldn't deny the fact that she mattered to him. He don't know why, he was attrected towards her in the very first meet of theirs. He still could feel the burning sensation in her eyes, which reflects, pain, anger, and most important love. The same mirror of feelings of his eyes. He also don't know why he was thinking this all. He took out the wraper from his pocket, '' you are sweet more than this ice candy riya!!'' He told himself, and also surprised with himself.

He headed towards forensic lab where liza was waiting for him.

Arjun entered in the lab, and she was working on some reports.
She saw him, and said, '' yes sir, kuch kaam tha??''

arjun- haan liza, mujhe iss sample ke analysis reports chahiye.
Liza- iske!
Arjun- haan.. Isko scan karo.. Aur pata karo andar kya hai!
Liza- okay sir, mujhe thoda time lagega.
Arjun- hmm.


****************
in the conference room-


ayesha, shree and chotu are talking.
Shree- yaar arjun sir, thoda ajib nahi behave kar rahe the!
Ayesha- haan, aur rathod sir bhi.
Lagta hai ki, dono kuch chupa rahe hain, ek dushre se aur humse bhi.

Chotu- haan , par ye riya kahan hai aaj!
Shree- riya kabhi bate ke thodi jati hai! Mujhe toh darr lag rah tha, agar usse pata chal gaya ki mai uska phone trace kar raha hoon, toh bhagwan bachaye mere gadgets ko.

Ayesha and chotu laughed hard. At the same time arjun enters, and asked, '' itni hasi kyun aa rahi hai! Kis baat pe!
All of them shut their mouths, and looked at him.

Arjun- shree, mujhe tumse kuch kaam hai. Control room mai milo mujh se.


Here in the forensic lab, afte arjun left rathod enters.
Liza- sir, ab ye riya kahan hai!
Rathod- pata nahi ye ladki aakhir karna kya chahati hai!
Liza- par arjun sir bhi kch chupa rahe hain!

Rathod- haan. Par kya, ye pata karna hoga.
Liza- par sir, ye baat hum kab tak chupayenge unse.
Rathod- jab tak hum chupa sakte hain liza!!



In the basement

He received the call.
'' bhaijaan, humne usse pakad liya hai!!''-the man said, form another side.
'' kya bakwas kar rahe ho, usse kyun pakda! Ab etf haamre piche lagane ka irada hai kya? - agar ek bhi link etf ko mila toh bhul jana ki kabhi tum zinda the.''

he cuts the call, and again dragged her hair, but she fainted on his lap.





Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago
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IN THE CONFERENCE ROOM-


Shree was sitting infront of him, with a scared look and he was lost somewhere deep in thoughts. Sheree looked at him, and as if finding a way to escape. Arjun glance at the tech expert infront hm finding a way to escape, but it is not that easy to escape from ACP arjun's grip.

Arjun- shree, ye order hai mera!
Shree- sir wo maar dalegi mujhe!
Arjun- toh tumhe VIP security mai kuch jada hi inerest hai shree.
Shree- in his mind- kamse kam zinda toh rahunga.
Arjun- kuch kaha tumne?
Shree- no.. But riya apni kisi bhi goli ka hisab nahi deti sir.
Arjun- mujhe kuch nahi sun na shree!

Shree- but sir aap mujhe ITF ki confidential secret leak karne ko keh rahe hain!
Arjun- shree, mai aisa kab keh raha hoon shree, bas mujhe kuch information chahiye.
Aur mujhe pata hai ki, tumhe password pata hai iss chip ka!
Shree- in his mind- kyun pata hai mujhe password!- sir par..

Arjun was trying hard to convincing shree as he knows that it is very confidential and he have handle this matter sensitively.

At the same time Liza entered in the room, with report files.
And rathod too entered.

Liza- sir reports ban gaye!
Arjun- good job!
Rathod- kya reports hai ye rawte?
Arjun- liza!!!
He motioned liza to explain!
Ayesha and chotu too comes there.

Liza- sir, iss candy ke andar hume ek chip mila!
Shree- in his mind- ek aur chip! Mai toh gaya!
Liza- aur iss candy ke upar DNA samples mile hain!

Rathod- DNA samples!!! Kiske hain!
He asked curiously.
Liza- sir. Wo.. Arjun sir and riya ke!!
Everyone are shocked to hear that! Even arjun have never thought that this thing would come up so publicly.

Rathod- what?? Rawte aur riya ke?? Tum riya se mile the rawte! Aur DNA samples tum dono ke ek saath kaise!

Arjun- in his mind- now what will I answer!

Liza- sayad arjun sir aur riya ne ki...but she stopped abruptly as she found arjun was staring at her.
Chotu- arjun sir aur riya ne kya , liza?
Shree- in mind- what arjun sir and riya kiss.. No ..abe chotu, marwayega kya??

Liza- chotu!!! Kuch nahi!

Everyone remained silent as they know what this meant.
And aftersome time, arjun asked, '' aur wo chip ke bare mai kya liza?

Liza- protected hai sir, password chahiye, isse access karne ke liye!
Rathod - par rwte tumhe ye kahan se mila?? Aur koi bhi is chip ko access nahi karega! Is that clear!

Arjun glared at him as he said this. He badly wants his answers, that what are they hiding from him.
And most importantly why riya was doing such things!

After the report everyone left!
But arjun and shree was still there.
And finally he agreed to open the files.
There was many case details which she have solved, and those cases are also high profiled. Arjun was even more impressed by her.

Arjun told shree to open the last case she solved, and it was a case of biopiracy.
Shree- sir, aakhri case solve hua tha! Iceland mai, matlab ye India se hi connected hai.
Iss case ke do culprits the!
Shree was a bit hesitate to tell him but said, sikander, still missing.
By hearing his name arjun's blood boiled and it is hard time for him to control over himself.
But the next name he said, and all his anger vanished.
'' aur sir dusra, culprit hai, Aman Malhotra, Dead, encountered by Miss riya mukharjee, '' shree finished .
Shree was also sad because , he knows riya's pain as well as of arjun. Both are going through same condition. But he saluted the
officer inside her who never cared about her love.
Arun could feel the pain as he too have lost his loved ones but he will never understand or feel the pain of her. Because it is not easy to kill the person you love the most in your life.

Arjun- aage kya shree!
Shree- sir, ek ajib baat hai, ye case solve toh ho gaya but close nahi hua!

Arjun peeped at the screen and it was shocking for him. And how could this be. This is all connected. He too can not understand the reports but it is a shock for him.
And he thought, sayad issliye rathod mujh se ye chupa raha tha!
Par kyun?? Insabka roshni se kya connection hai!
Mujhe khud hi pata karna hai! Rathod toh kabhi bolega nahi!
He was shocked and confused. And shree was also confused by seeing arjun.
Shree- sir ! Are you okay!
Arjun comes out of his trance. And said, '' haan. Mai thick hoon!''


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she was sitting on the chair, her hands are tied and the yellow light of the buld is hurting her. She hardly opening her eyes. One man comes to her and grapped a fist full of hair, and called her.
'' hey mallika, itna bhi taklif nahi de rahe hain hum tumko, uff sorry sorry, ITF officer riya mukharjee!''
she smiled faintly at him, and that angered him much.
'' ab kaise bachke jaogi mujhse''-he mocked at her.
'' tumhe kya laga ye dard hai mere liye! She said, as confident reflects in her voice.
Aur waise bhi mujhe kuch hua toh, tumhara kya hoga! Mujhe tumhari fikar hai!!






Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago
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"Meri fikar"- the man asked her. And she laughed. '' haan , tumhari fikar!''-she answered.

The man slapped her and she winced in pain. But she was not scared at all.
After sometime someone called him, and he was startled by the phone call.
"whta??" the man reacted!
And after that he ordered his men to untie her hands. And she is free now.
"agar majboori nahi hoti toh mai tujhe kabhi nahi chodta mallika!'' he barked at her, frustated with her completely.
'' chillao mat Dutta!!'' meri 2 baat hamesa yaad rakhna!
Policewala marte dam tak apni duty nibhata hai..
Aur dusri, she smiled and shoot him and said, mai apni kisi bhi goli ka hisab nahi deti!

As she shoot Dutta, his men came forward and attacked on them.
'' lagta hai samjhe nahi, samjhaun??'' she said, and kicked the person who first attacked on her. She fought with some man and very carefully comes out of the place. Some of the man followed her but she escaped so easily.

Riya goes to make a STD call. She dialed someones number and the he answered her something.
And she left the place.


PRECAP-

1. SHREE- sir ek dead body mili hai, kisi ladki ki!

2. Arjun thought, ' mai directly riya se hi baat karunga!!


PROMO

Arjun pinned her to the wall and twisted her hand, their faces are inces away from eachother.
She kicked his feet but he never reacted.
'' don't mess with me Rawte''- you will regret.
'' i won't miss riya mukharjee, he said as his cheeks are touching with hers and this air comes from his mouth is making her body shiver.


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so friends updated the next part.
I know it is too short. But i am very mush disturbed in these days. So please forgive me.

And plz sahre ur view regarding the note.




Thank you.

~vq❤️






Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW riya is so brave
candy and arjun and riya dna together,LOL
exciting promo
update soon and thanx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Vampu🤗 Thanks for updating This one...
Superb update... Arjun's thoughts were well written... wow Riya she is awesome... RR at logger heads...
Bechara Shree...Precap sounds intresting ... update soon...
P.S: Vampu dnt care abt wat others thnk Riya Aman story is needed for story to move forward so do include their scenes
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update love it very much Candy mein Riya and Arjun ka DNA ek sath mila and team might knows they kissed and candy se ek aur chip mila interesting this story is getting even more interesting in each update Promo seens very interesting pls continue soon FOR ME I WANT TO KNOW THE PAST OF RIYA thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

It's really a fascinating update dr.

Atlast he realised tht she mattered to him n he is attracted towards her. Thts great.

Loved Shree n Arjun's convo. Tht was hilarious.

Wow Shree was more afraid of Riya. Bechara Shree buri tarah phas gaya, ek taraf kunya to ek taraf khai, Jhayeh to jayeh kahan…!!!!

Wow Liza find the DNA sample of Arjun n Riya on the candy.

Nw thy all kne tht thy both kissed except Chotu. Chotu ki body to badi hai par dimag uskay naam ki tarah chota. The moment he asked tht ques to Riya was really hilarious.

Finally Shree agreed to open the files n thy knw the shocking truth.

Hw this case is related to Roshini?????

Waaaooo Riya is really vry brave as she shoot him dead n easily escaped.

Precap n promo both looks interesting n exciting.

So plzzz continue soon.

Thanks for pm.

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