FF :: Very known stranger -Chapter 29 , Page 138

Hie guys
I am going to write a mysterious action packed thriller but romantic fan fiction.

The storyline will be a little different from the real one...but the characters would be same n same past...

But but...the actual mystery is to be revealed..

The story will be also strange as the title of my story..
Like may u know everything but in any moment you will feel it a strange one...


So No character skecth will be there..
The characters will be introduced itself as the story progress..

New charcters will be introdeced.

There will be a only prolouge for u guys, at the starting..


Pls tell me guys will i continue or not.



I will post the
title banner n pic in the next post.


Pls guys i need ur opinion.

Tumne likkha ho aur main napasand karu,aisa kabhi hua hai kya?

Mysterious aur romantic fan fiction main nahi padu? Ye khabhi huwa hai kya!?

Prologue:


Beautiful spreading sun rays...slow soft soothing air is passing through the window of the room..
Sun rays are scattering on the floor of the room...and one shadow... It is like , the person is leaning on the sidewall of the window... Lost some where...in order to find herself in the lonley streets of emotion as if asking for the adress of ' peace' which is far away from her the only place where her mind can take rest..

Yes she is seeking for the peace,
she just wanted to run away from her heart..
Every time her heart is cursing for the decision which had taken by her mind...
But that was the last thing she can do ...

She comes out of her trance by a quick foot step on the floor..

She turned n found the man is standing there... The man , who was there for her, every moment
of her life..

He asked her-
are u ready?
He knew what will be the answer
but still he asked..
And she nodded in a yes..

He goes to her n opens his arm n embrace he in a tight hug..

Yeah this was the much needed thing which can soothe her heart..

She broke the hug.
The man- good luck
the girl- 'i wish that thing won't happen again'

the man- just go for it girl...
U need this...

A small smile krept on her face n she left the room.

Originally posted by: zebbie

Tumne likkha ho aur main napasand karu,aisa kabhi hua hai kya?

Sahi kaha zebbie bhala hamne marna hai..
vampire se..
hummm..

Supubbb start dr nice concept update soon...

Superb start,meri entertainment queen.
Loved it.

great start :) loved it

Part- 1

Sunshine club: hill's view road: Dehradun.
8.39 pm

a guy of age 29 was sitting on the counter of the club, waiting for his drink.
The waiter brings his drink..
He took his drink n tiped the waiter. He goes to a beautiful girl in her short -black leather skirt n a short top revealing her beautiflly curved belly. She wore a navel ring n a nose ring. Her eyes are filled with sparkle.

The man goes to her n gave her the drink . She took that, she sensed somethig was very wrong.

But she emptied the glass. There was an evil smirk on the guys face. She noticed it bt she didn't care.

After sometime she fainted in his arms n he took her out of the club.


Next morning- 9. 38 am.

there was a heavy crowed in the parking area of the sunshine club.

They called the local police n found a dead body in the car.

The body was looking pale, nails of the dead body is blue . The police man broke the door n take the body out.

One policeman said- sir lagta hai isse poison se mara gaya hai..

Other one- ya! Body autopsy k liye bhejo ..

He called the club manager.
The man- this is ACP Nauman ...
Kya iss aadmi ko koi janta tha..

Club mangr- muje nhi pata sir, bt bar tender ko jarur pata hoga..

Nauman- usse bulao..n yaha k cctv footages nikalo..

Club m- yes sir.
He called the bar tender.
The b.t- ji sir..
Nauman- uss aadmi ko jante the.
B.t - yes sir, usne kal drink order kiya tha.. N tip bhi diya tha..
Naumman- aur kuch..usk saath kaun tha..
Bt- yaad nahi..bt ek ladki faint ho gayi thi jise wo bahar leke gaya tha...
Nauman- ok..

They got the cctv footages n played .
They saw that the girl taken out by him n he placed her in the car.

Suddenly another guy come n threw something on his face.
Then he entered in the back seat where the girl was.
5 min later he took out the unconcious girl n moved away.

Nauman- ye jo koi bhi hai ..us admi ko janta tha.. Bt abhi hume uss ladki ko bachana padega..
Wo toh behosh thi ..pata nahi ye log usk saath kya karenge.

SI - sir khoon se iss ladki kuch toh connection hoga..
Nauman- ye toh pata karna hai.
SI- sir uss aadmi k pocket se ye ticket mila hai... Mumbai ka..

Nauman- iska photo scan karo n pata karo koi previous criminal record jaroor hoga.

Warna kal subhe koi mumbai se yaha aata hai... Uska yaha khoon ho jata hai..ye baat normal nahi..
Aur wo ladki usse jald hi dhundna hoga..

2 hours later-
s.i- sir u r right iska naam aslam hai n iska previous record bhi hai..
Chori ka.. 4 mahine pehele jail se chuta tha..
Aur mumbai ka hi rahene wala hai..

Nauman- ek mamuli chor ka koi aise katl kyun karega...jaroor kuch bada hone wala hai..

S i- sir ab kya kare?
Nauman- ek min.

He dialed a num..

Nauman- hello this is ACP Nauman Shekhawat , deheradun police.

The other man on the phone..
- hello - ACP Sameer damshng rathod bol raha hoon ETF se..

Shekhawat- sir ek murder hui hai..
N uska link mumbai se hai iss liye call kiya..

Rathod- ok aap case details mail kar dijiye ..hum aap ko pura co-operate karenge..

He called a curly haired man - shree- ..

Shree- yes sir..
Rathod- ek case details mail se aanewala hai.. Usse check karo ..ek murder case hai..deheradun se..

Shree- ok sir..


Precap- case discussion n another murder..


Pls guys tell me how is this..
Should i continue or not..

Pls i need ur opinion.