EVERYTHING IS FAIR, WHEN LOVE IS WAR -ch19 - pg 84 - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sanah12

Awesome update!

Loved it!
Do continue soon &
Thanks for the pm.

thanks sanah
glad to know you liked it😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: serat

wowww
raelly good update

Thanks Dear 🤗 .
loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Awww😳.
contiune next chap soon
Sure!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -DEATHmusic-

Great update😊

Thanks Hina 🤗 .

Thanks for the pm Welcome😊.
and update soon. Will do😉!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...anju...

simply just love it. Really 😲?? andina it was awesome.loved it loads.
Thanks Anju 🤗 .

oh my god uday a husband and father of two children staring

at a girl like a teenage boy.hehehe It's called FATAL ATTRACTION😉!!!!!


so manveer had a son.ie veer singh. Huhhh😕! he had his fathers smirk. Yes -he does! But that doesn't mean Veer is 20 year-old Manyata's son!!!!!!!
and d story is flashback. Nope ... Everything is in LIVE-TIME!

loved manveer meeting at flower shop n supermarket Glad u loved it😊 n manveer

convo at restaurent. U think it was THEM ... Andy told me it was Veer and his girl-friend😕!!!!!! I think I better ask her again.


enjoyed d chapter so much. Thanx. now try to update soon. we'll try😆!!!!!

Loved the comment Anju ... thanks a lot 🤗 .
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter : 3 :


Sameer parked his car in the parking lot of his favourite bar. He loved this restaurant as it had a lot of half naked chicks serving ANYTHING & EVERYTHING , you want. And those belly dancers and their milky while skin showing out through that nearly transparent dress of theirs, wow, he just loved it.
Sameer Mallya was the only son of Sandeep Mallya, after his father had retired 4 years back he took in the reigns and was looking after the company since then. Being a multi-millionaire and having good looks , gave him power and he got everything he wanted in the blink of an eye!
He walked towards the entrance when someone in the shadows checked the time and added that detail to the already filled page in his small black booklet
Name: Sameer Mallya (REGULAR PATRON of star cool bar)
day arrival departure
Monday 7 30 12 25
Tuesday 7 23 12 47
Wednesday 7 37 1 02
Thursday 7 05 1 06
Friday 7 54 ----
"Umm, today he's late" thought the mystery follower. Wonder what he was doing till now? He stealthily entered the bar and sat around a corner. Sameer was chatting, rather flirting with Miss Rose, the new, BUSTY belly dancer, he had noticed this for about 3 days and it merited an entry in his booklet. He wrote "has contacted miss rose for 3 days ... first meeting Tuesday" he again sat to watch his actions. Sameer was dancing clumsily with her.
He checked today's activities of Sameer that he had noted on another page ...
7 36 am: left his residence in cliff top
8 16: arrived in his office
8 38: went to have breakfast in his office canteen
9 25: left office to head towards SAMEER HEIGHTS, new construction site
And it continued till the latest ...
7 54 : arrival at star cool bar.
He tapped his fingers on his table and looked at Sameer " your days are up!" he thought and a smirk appeared on his face. Tomorrow would be that D DAY - it gave him a chill of excitement.
He looked around and saw Uday walking towards Sameer, "Whoa , NOW this is getting exciting" he moved and sat this time on a table behind these two guys, his back was facing them.
U: Sameer, good to see you man , yaar - you lost weight.
S: ya, and you look fresh as always, won't tell you are a father of 2 kids
U: you are joking right? , and cant you go to some decent bar, rather than this strip club
S: whoa!! This is not the Uday I knew. Too decent I should say. WHAT HAPPENED TO YOU? Remember RANI , CAROL , SHONA , ANNI and all those other bombs we had in college! Come on Uday , U don't miss those FUN-FILLED NIGHTS? How Akash , Aryaan & we 2 used to finish bottles of Whiskey!!!!!!! Remember that 1 night we tried that combination of Cocaine & Ecstacy and the super orgy we had thereafter with that girl ... oh WHAT WAS HER NAME? Damn , can't remember but , my point is - Don't u miss those good old days?
U: once you are happily married then all you can think is your family
"that's very interesting" thought the man in the shadows. " too BLOODY much a family man NOW!"
S: marriage is not my cup of tea, leave me out of that
U: ok, you will never change ... let's now talk business
The rest of the conversation was plain business. The "stalker" took notes now and then.
Uday left around 9 20 pm and then Sameer left around 1 16 am.
After noting this, the man followed Sameer. He had one more stop tonight before he could hit his bed.
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The man moved carefully towards the garage, he had made sure the security was not anywhere near him when he did his job, he quickly spotted the car, Sameer usually drove and started his work . After 15 minutes he was out of the place, riding back in his car with his favourite music playing loud and clear.
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The next day Sameer was driving. He was late for a meeting and was going fast. As he reached near a turn, he tried to slow the car, but it went faster, he slammed the brakes ... but in vain! The car lost balance and hit a side bend with such force that it exploded on impact. Another sedan reached the scene shortly afterwards, and the man inside smiled seeing his handy work and drove away whistling merrily and tapping his fingers on the speering-wheel.
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The killer drove to his home - it was empty. He moved to his room, to his closet ; where he saw his hand made shrine. Many photos were stuck on the back of the ward-robe ... some had red-crosses on them , he quickly spotted the photo he needed ... Sameer Malliya, he took a red sketch pen and crossed it . It joined the other pictures which was crossed- SANUSHA SINGH & ARYAN CHOUDARY .
He looked at the remaining photos that were soon to be crossed out. The photos were of Tanisha singh, Arthi singh , Akash Verma and finally Udayveer Singh. Uday Singh would be the last person of this sequence and he was "SPECIAL" - save the BEST for last ... he laughed evilly. Only then ,would his soul be able to rest in peace.
He had made wooden , miniature dolls of everyone, he loved to burn them when his work was complete, he fished out Sameer's model from the cupboard and lit a fire outside his home, to the raging fire he tossed the model and watched it burn and turn into ashes, the smell of burning wood was his sign of cleansing his hands from that person's death.
He lay on his bed and began to think of his next victim in the list- Tanisha Singh. "Udayveer - you're a family man na, you value your family the most, watch them die, 1 by 1 ; you creep"
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Thanx 4 reading ,
please do leave back your comments
(not to forget ... your "LIKE" as well😆)
I know there was NO MA-VEER in it 😭,
... but , they'll be in ch4😳!
(BE PATIENT 😉)
Love ,
ANDY & NAVINA 😊
Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yippeee again I am first to comment...

Well the update was fantastic and fabulous...

Who the hell is this stalker who wants uday to die...

Well lets see there is twist will look forward for more revealations..

Missed manveer in this update...

K bye..

Hugzzz..

Edited by htgcute - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
andina update was awesome.it has a thriller touch otherwise special andy touch. andy u made an intense love story to a psycho thriller.dis parallel track sounds quite interesting.

oh dis is d dead guy about who arti is talking in d last chapter.sameer mallya udays collegemate

who is dat stalker(serial killer).he must b son of one of d 3 friends.only my guess.n he killed tanisha also.how can he do dat..merciless creature.now he wants to kill uday.now u r dead stalker.

one thing andina there was no manveer in dis chappy.plz give loads of manveer in next update.plz andy.plz navi.

enjoyed chappy so much now try to continue soon.

Edited by ...anju... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh hell who is this mystery man????
why is he behind Uday???
oh man udays family is in danger...
poor sameer...
awesome update guyzzz...
updatte soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Again an awesome chapter!!! 👏

The killer's character was sooo well described 👍🏼

Pretty cold blooded with the heat of revenge in his mind...

Do continue soon 😊

And thank you very much for the fast update 🤗

I was specially waiting for this ff 😊
Edited by panchaali - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

oh hell who is this mystery man????

Sounds like a serial-killer
why is he behind Uday???
Don't know yet ... maybe revenge!!!!!
oh man udays family is in danger...
Yep , GRAVE DANGER🤢.
poor sameer...
Awww Mahi , don't feel bad for Sameer.
awesome update guyzzz...
Thank you 🤗 .
updatte soon
Either Monday or Tuesday😊.

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