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valli30

@valli30

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#261

lovely updates

maan wamted her to have normal food

finally she gave up and started having dal chawal.

waiting for next part

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Sona (Samwllms)

@AVELINA

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#262

awwsum story. .i was speechless after reading your ff...grt work muskaan..bravo

Edited by samwllms - 12 years ago

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Shruthe

@Shruthe

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#263

me already waiting 😃

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Muskan

@muskanp

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: Water.
Loved both the updates.

He was the one who shut down her heart,
He was the one who withered away the essence of her being
And yet...
He is her saviour
He is the one who is awakening each and every lifeless speck of her being
He is the one who is rising her soul
And making her life liveable again.
Yet...
It is wise to remember...
That this is just a beginning
And she has just started to open her wings.
It will take her a while to spread her wings
To fly, to soar, to laugh, to breathe, to cherish, to co-create.

This means a lot to me

Thanks
Loved it

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#265

Awesome, beautiful parts

loved them

how maan is trying hard to make her life normal

slowly slowly fulfilling her life with color trying best to make her life normal so she lived the life normal

it'll take time but it's happening maan's hard work showing fruit and geet is slowly adjusting with the new life

but it'll take more time

what an irony of life once maan some how direct or indirect responsible of all misery of geet's life now he is the one who is bringing all color all smile ,normalcy in her life

pls continue soon

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#266

this was lovely

maan making an effort to change the way she changed herself

but do tell, how was his experience of eating that bland salad

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Shruti Jain

@smj1977.shruti

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#267

Mere paas ek cheez hain

wo hain tera ehasaas

Mujhse door ek cheez hai

wo hain tera pyaar

Mere har pal mein ek cheez hain

wo hain teri choti si aas

Mujhse door ek cheez hain

wo hain meri saans

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#268

part 41
nice part...
shes angry thats fine but why is she behaving like this?
she wasnt like this before, so bitter...
and Maan is regretting everything...