Arhi FF (Collab):Dire Consequences Thread 2 Pg 141

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Anupama Jinethri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

interesting prologue!

how will this affect arnav and khushi's life!

looking forward to this!

continue soon!

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Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Seeming awesome!! carry on soon!!

Please Please!!

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@SuperstarSanaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Hello to all writers...

updated my comment here:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/84378641

Do check it.😃

and Thanks once again.

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

waiting for the story to begin

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Nids

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Aami you sure know how to get this party started!! Fantastic first chapter, I am so proud of you *wipes away tears*.

I knew you were the perfect one to start this story and you did it with a bang!

Great visualization in this chapter of Arnav & Khushi in bed trying to hold on to their relationship, their love.

Both so afraid of how this will change there lives, yet determined to fight the battle together.

It broke my heart when Khushi was thinking about being pregnant with Arnav's child, how she would break the news to him. I believe every wife has a moment like that & you portrayed it beautifully!!

Great job & I'm so excited to be working on this story with you.

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ssyahoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

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Aami this was an amazing fabulously written chapter! Thank you for stepping up to the plate and writing chapter 1. I loved the dream sequence .

You captured their emotions brilliantly , as I loved the way Khushi reassured him in her special way. Their bond is so strong and you depicted it perfectly.

I loved your last line about their Choti so duniya and can't wait to see wait tomorrow will hold.

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Anupama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

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i lovved the narration.
Quite an opening that was and i m relieved that it was just a dream for it just isnt Khushi-like to run away.

The way she calmed him,held him was very endearing and heartwarming.
Considering a woman like Khushi,how much so ever she knows that Arnav was in relationships, the reality of him fathering a child, must be too tough on her. And she has chosen to be by Arnav is amazing. Not that I want to think otherwise. Because these are circumstances when they'd fulfil the promises. Her wish to soothe him won my heart.

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rulama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

That was a lovely opener and it really had set things in the right direction. Both having patience to talk to one another and affirm faith in one another.

Waiting for the next update.